Dont Test THis Chick

don't test this chick cause i'm phenomenal,
get split from your head to your abdominal...
you niggas is commmical so i'm laughing....
but soon i'll be blasting ....
this double assain,, killing with no compassion

i'm comtemplating ways to start eliminating,
hoes that be hating tryin to blow my concentration,
not knowing they facing,, a killer like jason,, or lucifer.
the girl will shoot you,,, point blank and end ya future
rock a bye baby ,,drive by baby ,,shady crazy lady ,,
is what the fuck they name me,
since an adolescent,, i been packing the smithand westin,,
attacking with agression,, so bitch count ya blessing ,,
so when disrespecting,,in my direction,, you gon need protection,,,
or maybe your savior to save ya,,
from my be havior,
cause i'm a wild hostlie criminal,,
indivual with potential bitch..........

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Haha short and sweet man. u had nice punches in dat and u had pretty nice rhymes. Didnt rely c dat many multis but ure flow was on point. 6 or 7/10

Keep elevating bro

Peace:)
p.s hit me up on Random Spit!

daaaaamn that shit was siiiick


man, ive seen some girls try before, but you killed it. props.


everything was nice, flow, multis, good concepts


if you gotta mic make an audio

Some hard batrtle tyle stuff with solid multi's. You should work on your vocab a little though and next time try and do something more original than a boast piece. You can't stand in here doing standard shit.

Keep posting, keep elavating.

Damn... nice vocab

well thanks every body for the feed back
i appreciate it....i'm defenitly elevating

uppin for more feed

i gotta give it to you man dat was nicw now we gotta battle

set it up whenever you ready i will destroy you
lil boy ...............

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ewwwwwiiiee!!! always love pissed off girls! KNOCK THAT BITCH OUT!

good drop.

niice shiit u got ther...
gud multiez, gud flo, wiiked punchez.. 8 1.2/ 10

uppin dis shit...........................................
for everybody to see lol

pretty good man,sorry but I don't really know anything about punchs and hooks and all that stuff so I can't really give u better coment right now then whut I wrote...

You had pretty good flow in this piece. You had alright vocabulary, just work on spelling, lol. I seen a few words that were out of order in there. But otherwise keep dropping.

this was nice i liked it it had multies punches an some vocab an you stayed on flow so it was aight just keep at it ma