b_rEEz Vs. DAMN!!!

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House Rulez...................

.......................Blind Spit

Due In 1 Hour After Check

Dont Prewrite Herbness.....

prewrite herbness?......

Just Dont Come In The Battle Wit Writtinz............

yeah...kk...this is my chec

yo breez vote on my battle against heres my rap plz yo thx

U Respectable?, Naw Kid, Beatin Me Ur Crazy, Dis Dood Aint Incredible
U Shoulda Stuck 2 Top-Pickles Like Crazy Gluing Da Peak On Vegetables*
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Im Blindin' Dis Bitch, Mainly Cuz My Punchez Are Mad Grimey Wit Hits
Ya Verse Is Like AWhoopi Cusion, Jus A Funny Way 2 Remind Me Of Shit
Teach U To Stop Bein A Bitch Round Da Forums Afta U Feel Da Incideration
Pre-written Or Not, U Still Gettin Whipped Up Like Smarty Jones Rehabliltation
Lol, Why Battle U, U Suck, Cuz In All Ur Battles Theres Suttin U Alwayz Lack
Becuz I Knew Theres No Way Ur A Vet When Even Ur Letterz Are Outta Wack**
Quit Sentimental Lyricals, Stop Ya Mentals, Ur Style Doesn’t Sell Nuttin Like Nore
Battelin 4 Respect vs D? Ur Finishing Behind Like Kids Racin Huskys On Tha 40



*Peep Thread
**Peep Name

U Respectable?, Naw Kid, Beatin Me Ur Crazy, Dis Dood Aint Incredible
U Shoulda Stuck 2 Top-Pickles Like Crazy Gluing Da Peak On Vegetables*
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Im Blindin' Dis Bitch, Mainly Cuz My Punchez Are Mad Grimey Wit Hits
Ya Verse Is Like AWhoopi Cusion, Jus A Funny Way 2 Remind Me Of Shit
Teach U To Stop Bein A Bitch Round Da Forums Afta U Feel Da Incideration
Pre-written Or Not, U Still Gettin Whipped Up Like Smarty Jones Rehabliltation
Lol, Why Battle U, U Suck, Cuz In All Ur Battles Theres Suttin U Alwayz Lack
Becuz I Knew Theres No Way Ur A Vet When Even Ur Letterz Are Outta Wack**
Quit Sentimental Lyricals, Stop Ya Mentals, Ur Style Doesn’t Sell Nuttin Like Nore
Battelin 4 Respect vs D? Ur Finishing Behind Like Kids Racin Huskys On Tha 40



*Peep Thread
**Peep Name

listenin to ya rhymes, is like watchin me take a shit
you producin flow, but you could never make a hit
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im tryna pay attention, but DAMN!!! homie you suck
if you cant win with skill, you sure as hell cant with luck
you flows like a hydrant, but its bein cut off
my flow is amazing, suck ya in like a trough
DAMN!!! im choppin you up, and its to perfection
im stealin this battle, like i do an interception
you jus jail bait, you always bendin over for soap
n you a freestyle battler, who jus got no hope
ya grabbin the rope, but homie ya grips to weak
.....hold on a minute....i gotta take a leak.......
................................................OK
Im back, n i realized my penis produces a better flow
cuz at least when im pissin, people like the show
you a wack MC, you more like a toy puppet
no one votin ya battles, you keep tellin'em to Upp it
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you that tv channel, that nobody really like to watch
HOMIE, IM UP HERE, could ya stop starin at my crotch..





Blah..whatever..weak...and quick.....

i vote breez better every thing
damn- elevate more work on yo structure no hate and every1 needs to elevate

aliiighttt uppin thisss ^^^^^1

Flow: rEEz
Structure: Tie (both wern't too good...noh8)
Punches: rEEz
Personals: rEEz

VERDICT: My vote is fa b_rEEz


nah, for real, yall gotta fix ya structure, and hit harder wit punches...~1~
ADVICE: Whereva ya name is missin in the cats, get it there....lol

str8 battle........

Flow/ Beez
Punches/ both
Structure/ beez
Personals/ beez
Vocab/ Damn

v/ beez

Flow: rEEz
Structure: Tie (both wern't too good...noh8)
Punches: rEEz
Personals: rEEz

VERDICT: My vote is fa b_rEEz


nah, for real, yall gotta fix ya structure, and hit harder wit punches...

4 real...and otha cat wasnt so bad either but he cud elevate on those ,,,,,,,lines it makes it sound more stretched than it is

you a wack MC, you more like a toy puppet
no one votin ya battles, you keep tellin'em to Upp it

vs

nothing

bunch of bland generic punches by damn, werent directed at all

v/ b.reeze

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i vote breez better every thing
damn- elevate more work on yo structure no hate and every1 needs to elevate

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that aint a vote