Featured (12/18/05) Lovin It

This is some shit I wrote in about 45 mins....THe instrumental is kinda short but this shit is still hot, check it out and leave some feedback

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/page...?bandID=372546

comon people dont sleep on it.......................

Too much like the orginal little brother song...intro and the rantin n raven during the lovin' it part...nice lyrics but if you jack a beat make the song your own dont make it sound too much like the orginal song

uppin this

i luv this beat


nice adlibs on the begining really adds hype to it

nice lyrix good rhyme scheme

quality is ass though

8/10

i could mix this for you, just hit me up on aim

The beat was ehhh, not that crazy but the lyrics made up for that...AThe first verse flowed good and the lyrics were good...The chorus was aight and the 2nd verse was good...Overall it was worth the listen...keep at it

i love the track flow was constant....unlike the others i like the beat more my style...liking ya stuff....nice vocab btw some ill rhymes the whole way through...aiight peace

Hmm, Well the beat was ok, and quality was ok but if u had a better mic/better software or wateva this would be a dope track. I lyrics, the my knowledge could fill an audatorium got me nice track man.

Thanks for feedback more is appreciated

your quality is straight but it seems muffled on this but who cares...

you killed it on this beat i hate to say this but if u had better quality this would be better then little brothers version :( lol

im loving the rhyme

and the chorus is dope

good track as usual son
stay up

yea I kno Im tryin to get a new quality mic but thanks for the feedback

uppin..................

^^iz verbal fury...
clear ya pm box....listening to ya track again lol love it...but clear ya inbox please PZ

uppin

luv the track but sound on it suks