-=|TumTum|=- (0-1) vs. .:KLePTo:. (0-0)

LLL Jr. Week II

Rules

10-20 lines, agree with your opponent during check ins. otherwise match whoever drops first.

check ins are due this wednesday, if you don't check in you'll lose two votes automatically.

no recycling from rb. [unless it's from a no show]
no feeding. [you lose two votes for every line you feed]

you must vote on four battles and leave links. you will lose two votes for every missing link. you can't vote on a no show battle and use it for your link either.

verses are due this friday @ midnight pacific. your opponent must agree if you want an extension, and it can be no longer than 24 hours.

no show and you're gone. y'all better bring it.

aight so it got fixed.....so heres my check

check.....12 lines good for you Tum?

yea im coo wit 12

verses make everyone nauseous..greener then turf toe
On top? Frostbite look out below cuz im droppin klepto
surprised that lay is letting all you herbs into this league
But wow you must suck...
.....had to take a no shows spot by crying to lay in pleed
youd work on your punches as much as your looks..Damn
wait youd still suck, cuz naps cant change a girl to a man
times up on this land...ive already corrupted your mind
lost souls hard to find, like 1 decent punch in your lines
verse crys in fines, as you "work hard" on your facial feat.
well you must look good...
..how your verses r slept on worse then lil league repeats
its over, herb your punches miss, thats why i dont fear-ya
crucified lyricaly? no but your concepts are from jesus's era

Both sides of your family matched up on the DNA test,
Explains u bein retarded, ur just the product of incest.
Makin money across the grid, my product recieving bids,
Need a tax write off so i'll help u out when i donate to Jerry's Kids
Never been wit a slut,Verbal Intercourse, only bone on the phone,
Some sigh's and moans, mom walks in & sees her sons only half grown.
You walk around so proud, but u shouldnt cuz in heaven no fags aloud,
Laugh Out Loud as I send ya to hell to join ya boy Tyrone Cloud.
Age 10 or 16? u tell lies, truth revealed tell future W's ur goodbyes
Now MCs will actually try & voters wont favor u wit da replies.
Why did you bother with an alias, why not just retire?
No matter what changes u make ur still bringin just a Lil Fire


edit: my links
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=247402
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=247384
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=247416
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=247407

verses make everyone nauseous..greener then turf toe
On top? Frostbite look out below cuz im droppin klepto

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Nothing

V/Tum

His alias Lil Fire
Age 10 on TumTum Age 16 on Lil Fire
Tyrone Cloud is on his Lil Fire Sig
verbal intercourse his crew

Both of you were even and both of you didnt come good.no quotables or nothing came out of this battle except for a loss and win.Klepto dont have your verse centered.elevate on using better punches.tum tum you came weak as well but not as weak as klepto cuz you attcked him directly.

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vote tum tum

verses make everyone nauseous..greener then turf toe
On top? Frostbite look out below cuz im droppin klepto

vs

Nothing

v/TUm

verses make everyone nauseous..greener then turf toe
On top? Frostbite look out below cuz im droppin klepto

vs

Nothing

v/Tumtumtummizzle

verses make everyone nauseous..greener then turf toe
On top? Frostbite look out below cuz im droppin klepto AIGHT
surprised that lay is letting all you herbs into this league
But wow you must suck...
.....had to take a no shows spot by crying to lay in pleed NO
youd work on your punches as much as your looks..Damn
wait youd still suck, cuz naps cant change a girl to a man AIGHT
times up on this land...ive already corrupted your mind
lost souls hard to find, like 1 decent punch in your lines BLAH
verse crys in fines, as you "work hard" on your facial feat.
well you must look good...
..how your verses r slept on worse then lil league repeats KINDA FUNNY
its over, herb your punches miss, thats why i dont fear-ya
crucified lyricaly? no but your concepts are from jesus's era MEH

vs
Both sides of your family matched up on the DNA test,
Explains u bein retarded, ur just the product of incest. AIGHT
Makin money across the grid, my product recieving bids,
Need a tax write off so i'll help u out when i donate to Jerry's Kids BLAH
Never been wit a slut,Verbal Intercourse, only bone on the phone,
Some sigh's and moans, mom walks in & sees her sons only half grown. LOL
You walk around so proud, but u shouldnt cuz in heaven no fags aloud,
Laugh Out Loud as I send ya to hell to join ya boy Tyrone Cloud. NOPE
Age 10 or 16? u tell lies, truth revealed tell future W's ur goodbyes
Now MCs will actually try & voters wont favor u wit da replies NAH
Why did you bother with an alias, why not just retire?
No matter what changes u make ur still bringin just a Lil Fire NAH

v/Tum 4 a better overall verse

Vote - TumTum not really a good showing from both i cant say theres lines that i really liked but ill give it tumtum for the fact that Klepto had to explain about half his verse... Both writers had really choppy rhyme schemes and didnt really hit real hard and klepto id advise you not to write personals if your the only one whos going to understand them

v/tum

vote=Tum

juss dropped harder and was more consistant