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The Life Of Me
My life is not one you can look back on and say "He had it sweet"
Mine is wit guns bangin, thugs slangin, and havin beef
da day i turned ten i witnessed my cuzn get laid out in da streets
Until dat day we meet again Bruce...Rest In Peace
diz is a tru story, not one of dem OM's people leave
so they can get emotional and im sorry kinda feed
its crazy how he was bout tah have a baby, his first seed
den some stupid follish wannabe thug took away his life and his dreams
if i could somehow i'd take away his rights of livin
but im to young to do something dumb and go to juvi or prison
I just pray dat he's in heaven and there to stay
and dat he asked God for forgiveness before he went away
My other cousin get sliced on his face, its all fucked up
sometimes i juss sit down wishin i could rewind life n stuff
but somethings is impossible so i juss gotta progress
cant look back and regret and keep on gettin stressed
so now i, dress to impress, get money and invest
so i can grow up and show up being a big sucess
now my life is changin and it's startin to renew
and anyone who's ever been though something like diz good luck 2 u.
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Come on can i get some feed back on diz.
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yo i was feelin dat rap piece
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Thanks 4 da short feedback. Uppin diz.
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Uppin diz shit 4 feedback. Come on ya'll
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Uppin diz 4 feedback again. Come on its only gon b bout 5-7 minutes 2 respond.
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Last time im uppin diz 4 da night. Come on gimme some feed ya'll.
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good look on tha sig
theres no way i could tell u this was wakc, it was your life and i could feel wit
thats hot
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Well... this was funny cause i think i wouldnt wanna live your life lol.. Good emotion in this keep droppin this was ok.
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good emotion and imagery..everything else was basic..elevate your flow some more..you got potential though....drop a reply to the link in my sig titled when the sky falls..thanks..keep elevatin and droppin.~1~
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the emotion you put into it was very good and i was feeling it as you clearly were not just writting you were writting personally whick i like alot.
the only thig i wasn't feeling was the flow but even that wasn't bad
all in all nice drop keep it up homie.
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Good looks on da feed back. Uppin 4 some more.
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yo i was feelin dat alot i aint never been threw shit like dat so datz why diz shit is so hot 2 me yo. keep it up
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Thanks 4 da feed. Uppin 4 more. N if u can hit up da link in my sig.