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Mic Check 1,2,1,2 Let's Do It Dawg
Ok THANK YOU, finally, we can get this show on the road. Just so everyone knows, Bold Point is Wall Street's alias, since apparently he can't log in on that account any more.
This Dude Cant find His Thoughts Like he''s Mentally Insane
Might Ass well Call This Dude G-Unit The way He Rappin Without Game
No "Fuck Your Momma Joke" But I'm Sonning This Kid
Cuz If It Wasn't For Wall Street No Industries Would Exist
This Dude Couldnt make Wins even if He was a Ceiling fan
Cuz Ill Make Him Change How he Is In The Inside Like MiniVans
Only Ill When You State Your Location, Just Stop In Your Place
Tried An ILL-Evolution But Even The Nurse In Your Sig Shot It Away
And Your Crew's Not Soaring, And There's Nothing You Can Do For Em'
The Next Level? Can't Even Get Off The Bottom Of The Crew Forum
The Scared Kid From Chi-Town Ill Wins This About, Sorry B-
I Messed That Up A Bit................^ I Forgot The Apostrophe
Kids wack, if he had a chance ya plane raps ruptured it too.
Highjacked aircrafts are known to keep better structure n’you
Establishment houses piss-poor talent… yea it’s a burden
So when WallStreet asked to join em…they gladly said urine.
Ya crew aint established shit, a lot more like retards for hire.
They rhyme so dull n cold, got FDNY tryna start up a fire.
Like reliving 9/11 again n again, not cuz im frontin or racist..
But cuz Wall Street gets shutdown…on a continual basis
Worthless fuckin animal, I bearly consider you a citizen
Son ya livestock is falling, n it aint paying-out dividends
Fag theres no rules to bend, it’s a fact, not a theory or trend
All the streets an Industry plows, eventually come to an end.
12 it is, dont get concepts or wordplay? Dont Vote.
500+ to vote.
Finally Man....................................Holla...... .....
don't sleep on this for real.........................
Werd someone drop a damn vote.................................
Come on peeps vote on this good battle
Kids wack, if he had a chance ya plane raps ruptured it too.
Highjacked aircrafts are known to keep better structure n’you
*good opener not much of a punch though*
Establishment houses piss-poor talent… yea it’s a burden
So when WallStreet asked to join em…they gladly said urine.
:wtf: :laugh2:
Ya crew aint established shit, a lot more like retards for hire.
They rhyme so dull n cold, got FDNY tryna start up a fire.
weak punch
Like reliving 9/11 again n again, not cuz im frontin or racist..
But cuz Wall Street gets shutdown…on a continual basis
Meh iight at best
Worthless fuckin animal, I bearly consider you a citizen
Son ya livestock is falling, n it aint paying-out dividends
kinda weak but allright
Fag theres no rules to bend, it’s a fact, not a theory or trend
All the streets an Industry plows, eventually come to an end.
:self glory and punch =decent
Good punches structure on lock with a good opener decent verse lacked in some areas but came back strong
This Dude Cant find His Thoughts Like he''s Mentally Insane
Might Ass well Call This Dude G-Unit The way He Rappin Without Game
Wack punch and opener
No "Fuck Your Momma Joke" But I'm Sonning This Kid
Cuz If It Wasn't For Wall Street No Industries Would Exist
No rhyme
This Dude Couldnt make Wins even if He was a Ceiling fan
Cuz Ill Make Him Change How he Is In The Inside Like MiniVans
wack punch
Only Ill When You State Your Location, Just Stop In Your Place
Tried An ILL-Evolution But Even The Nurse In Your Sig Shot It Away
no rhyme
And Your Crew's Not Soaring, And There's Nothing You Can Do For Em'
The Next Level? Can't Even Get Off The Bottom Of The Crew Forum
GOOD PUNCH nice wordplay
The Scared Kid From Chi-Town Ill Wins This About, Sorry B-
I Messed That Up A Bit................^ I Forgot The Apostrophe
stupid as fuck
Only one good punch in this intire verse rest was comlete bullshyt u need to work on ur punches try to word them better or something cuz these jus wernt standing out to me for some reason and ur closer was weak as hell
v/Industry
Kids wack, if he had a chance ya plane raps ruptured it too.
Highjacked aircrafts are known to keep better structure n’you
ok
Establishment houses piss-poor talent… yea it’s a burden
So when WallStreet asked to join em…they gladly said urine.
lol!!!nice wordplay
Ya crew aint established shit, a lot more like retards for hire.
They rhyme so dull n cold, got FDNY tryna start up a fire.
nah
Like reliving 9/11 again n again, not cuz im frontin or racist..
But cuz Wall Street gets shutdown…on a continual basis
not fealin
Worthless fuckin animal, I bearly consider you a citizen
Son ya livestock is falling, n it aint paying-out dividends
ok
Fag theres no rules to bend, it’s a fact, not a theory or trend
All the streets an Industry plows, eventually come to an end.
ok
ok i liked some punches alot good verse
This Dude Cant find His Thoughts Like he''s Mentally Insane
Might Ass well Call This Dude G-Unit The way He Rappin Without Game
ok
No "Fuck Your Momma Joke" But I'm Sonning This Kid
Cuz If It Wasn't For Wall Street No Industries Would Exist
weak rhyme
This Dude Couldnt make Wins even if He was a Ceiling fan
Cuz Ill Make Him Change How he Is In The Inside Like MiniVans
Wat!!!!!
Only Ill When You State Your Location, Just Stop In Your Place
Tried An ILL-Evolution But Even The Nurse In Your Sig Shot It Away
rhyme absent?
And Your Crew's Not Soaring, And There's Nothing You Can Do For Em'
The Next Level? Can't Even Get Off The Bottom Of The Crew Forum
ok
The Scared Kid From Chi-Town Ill Wins This About, Sorry B-
I Messed That Up A Bit................^ I Forgot The Apostrophe
ok i think
not really fealing your verse bro but keep it up i know your good
v/Industry
WOW....you guys needa re-read these verses...no hate to industry...
Industry- Nice work...wording could've been better and ur punches weren't as well thought out as they could have been....but they worked none the less....man I have seen way way way better from you before....7/10
Wall Street/Bold Point- Nice as well...one thing you did was wordplay and it was pretty good and I enjoyed it....in ya verse you had more punches with wordplay whcih makes the creativity of ya verse better and makes the punches harder....I give you a...8/10
v/Wall/Bold
I'd vote for Wall, but if you gotta have 500......
2-0 so far uppin..........for sum votes...............