~~~sTr8-PUNCH"Z~~~PT.2 f/b plz...

I'ma a Masochist Wit Massive-Fist that could easily Smash and Damage-This Adjective Savage-Wit Practice-Hits! (not trying)/ cause my Immaculate Acts- To-Rip are Accurate when Attackin'-Hiz Wackest-Scripts Wit a Placid thus orderly Fashion-Twist/lmagine-This ish (mentally) this iz MatRix-BITCH!, a mechanical Animist Annalist Dada-Disc(computerized) proGrammed-To-Spit Hazardous! «well Bustin'-Poemz, but still capable to Crush-Hiz-Bonez and smoke tha Ashes-Wit Cannabis... .


Face-Tha-Truth-KIDZ!, I Hate-To-Do-This but He'z a Basic-Cubic(square) Wit Ape-Acoustics spittin' Tasteless-Fluid/Fuck it!, I'll Erase-This-Dude-QUICK then Embrace hiz Face-Wit-2-Fist thus leavin' it Scraped-And-Toothless for rappin' Fake-And-Stupid(dumb ass)/Uhhhhhhhhhhh, gettinl Thuggish punchin' hiz Stomach well Braking-Through-Ribz/ (here we go»>Wit 2 Stakes-Wit-Toothpicks attached to tha Straight-End-2-Tips by Eighteen-Glue-Sticks thus Making-U-Sick!(dizzy from these sick syllablez)/ /...


I'll deMolish-Hiz-Tendenciez. Cause look!, I'ma Topical Diabolical-Enemy word Rhyming-SIC-He-Pretendz-To-Be/tha most significant Odde~t-Supremacy Wit tha Enmity to leave this extraterrestrial, Biological-Entity wit NO .Eyez-Nor-Logical-Energy / / ...


WOULD LIKE FEED BACK, DROP LINX ILL RETURN THE FAVOR....


MY 2EW LINX:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=174122
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=173525


KALIKOZE9/11.. :shoot:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/atta...&stc=1&thumb=1
[IMG]



VOTE ON MY BATTLES: WILL RETURN THE FAVOR...............

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=176857
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=176588
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=176852

I'm feeeling you but you not on my level!!!

good lookn' 4 feel'n it,

but you shouldnt speak about 'SHIT' you dont know......
exactly,------what kinda level you on w/ two posts.....

UPPIN.............
CAN I GET SOME FEEDBACK...........


CHECK OUT MY CURRENT BATTLES:

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=176857
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=176588
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=176852

damn man this was straight up sick, hard punches mixed wit a lotta multis, 1 of the best chemistry's out there.



Face-Tha-Truth-KIDZ!, I Hate-To-Do-This but He'z a Basic-Cubic(square) Wit Ape-Acoustics spittin' Tasteless-Fluid/Fuck it!, I'll Erase-This-Dude-QUICK then Embrace hiz Face-Wit-2-Fist thus leavin' it Scraped-And-Toothless for rappin' Fake-And-Stupid(dumb ass)/Uhhhhhhhhhhh, gettinl Thuggish punchin' hiz Stomach well Braking-Through-Ribz/ (here we go»>Wit 2 Stakes-Wit-Toothpicks attached to tha Straight-End-2-Tips by Eighteen-Glue-Sticks thus Making-U-Sick!(dizzy from these sick syllablez)/ /...


yea i'm feelin this!

uppin..........good lookn DJsmokey, always appreciate the feedback.........thnx...
drop linx will return the fav:

VOTE ON THESE HOTT BATTLES:PLZ DECENT FEEDBACK, THNX


http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=176857
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=176588
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=176852

yes ..

this was very bad.

Ehhh.
Lah.
Vate.

kali u change ya styles alot so i don't know if its off da top or w/e but it was nice

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Originally Posted by V.J.E

kali u change ya styles alot so i don't know if its off da top or ..

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Nope, he's a biter.

not bad, kinda methodman/ice cube feel to it (obviously not as good, no offence)

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Originally Posted by V.J.E

kali u change ya styles alot so i don't know if its off da top or w/e but it was nice

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its not that i change my style, its pretty much;- right now, im tryna feel where im most comfortable @ in spittin,

tryna push my verbal vocab, as far as i can w/o having to keep the concept of its rapping, rhyming, etc.... INTO PLAY

its an art form for me, i do not try and really impress anyone but myself...because i know there is always way better than me out there.....
SO I GOTTA PROVE THAT I CAN DO BETTER, NOT ALWAYS SUCCESSFUL, LIKE EVERYONE ELSE, BUT @LEAST I TRIED, N DIDNT PUNK OUT.....

im just having fun with it...i have been doing this on and off for years.....not rhyming on the pc, just went i like went to the county & dudes wantd 2 battle write, so i did it, but didnt proceed with it after......

just recently i got in to again....i dont use my style from anyone elses i think, maybe b/c i never sat, and compared myself to anyone, but i dont feel i should have to anyway..........

FAR FROM BITTING....

in the elucid words of (B-RAD)--REPRESN'TN (BU).....DONT BE HAT'N.......

BUT SERIOUSLY THO' I JUST SIT HERE AND TYPE, YEAH I USE THESAURUS'S AND SHIT, FOR ALOTTA MY JUMPOFFS, AND DICTIONARIES, SO IT SEEMS SOME TIMES, IM STRETCHING TOO FAR, OR IT SEEMS TO FIT TOO PERFECT,
I CANT HELP THAT, BUT FIND ME WHO I BITE FROM........CUZ THERE AINT NONE.......ITS JUST SOMETHING FOR SOMEONE TO FIND AN EXCUSE AS TO WHY, SOMETIMES IM BACK N FORTH WITH IT..........
SORRY BUT I THINK ITS CALLED DIVERSITY.....

SO ALL YA THOUGHTS & OPINIONS ARE APPRECIATED, KEEP GIVING FEEDBACK, & KEEP DROPPING........
I AINT MAD @ MOST OF OFF YALL THAT DONT WANNA ADMIT IM NICE,
CUZ ITS TOO MUCH OF AN EGO DOWNER........
TO SAY SOMEONE ELSE IS BETTER THAN YOU...................

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Originally Posted by Caramac

Nope, he's a biter.

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its not that i change my style, its pretty much;- right now, im tryna feel where im most comfortable @ in spittin,

tryna push my verbal vocab, as far as i can w/o having to keep the concept of its rapping, rhyming, etc.... INTO PLAY

its an art form for me, i do not try and really impress anyone but myself...because i know there is always way better than me out there.....
SO I GOTTA PROVE THAT I CAN DO BETTER, NOT ALWAYS SUCCESSFUL, LIKE EVERYONE ELSE, BUT @LEAST I TRIED, N DIDNT PUNK OUT.....

im just having fun with it...i have been doing this on and off for years.....not rhyming on the pc, just went i like went to the county & dudes wantd 2 battle write, so i did it, but didnt proceed with it after......

just recently i got in to again....i dont use my style from anyone elses i think, maybe b/c i never sat, and compared myself to anyone, but i dont feel i should have to anyway..........

FAR FROM BITTING....

in the elucid words of (B-RAD)--REPRESN'TN (BU).....DONT BE HAT'N.......

BUT SERIOUSLY THO' I JUST SIT HERE AND TYPE, YEAH I USE THESAURUS'S AND SHIT, FOR ALOTTA MY JUMPOFFS, AND DICTIONARIES, SO IT SEEMS SOME TIMES, IM STRETCHING TOO FAR, OR IT SEEMS TO FIT TOO PERFECT,
I CANT HELP THAT, BUT FIND ME WHO I BITE FROM........CUZ THERE AINT NONE.......ITS JUST SOMETHING FOR SOMEONE TO FIND AN EXCUSE AS TO WHY, SOMETIMES IM BACK N FORTH WITH IT..........
SORRY BUT I THINK ITS CALLED DIVERSITY.....

SO ALL YA THOUGHTS & OPINIONS ARE APPRECIATED, KEEP GIVING FEEDBACK, & KEEP DROPPING........
I AINT MAD @ MOST OF OFF YALL THAT DONT WANNA ADMIT IM NICE,
CUZ ITS TOO MUCH OF AN EGO DOWNER........
TO SAY SOMEONE ELSE IS BETTER THAN YOU...................

Just too sloppy...
Structure...sucks
...why do people feel
they need to explain themselves
in their flow...?

Not Explaining My Flow....

How + Where........points Plz. Dont C'm