Takahashi vs -Text-

aite house rules.. good luck and i appreciate u acceptin this..

12-14 lines

how much time u want?

Ahhhh, i gotta eat dinner real quik.. ill b back in 25.. my b

will drop tonight. good luck.

check.

Aite back.. so we droppin by tonite?... checkkity...

Aite.. too sleepy.. yo..

Im 16, yea im not ashamed of youth/
Guess your not too young for keys either, ya name is proof./
I stalk words like a pedaphile whos cock burns/
Too many little assholes.. 400 posts n theyr not earned?/
You fillin up the forums, bullshit pourin from his teeth/
This dude suks so much i thought he was a whore wit twenty knees/
Your the 3rd victim so the Iverson pictures perfect
/
Text doesnt cum hard cus this dick is nervous/
Shitty convo wit his buddy after our droppings:/
Homie wonders who it was.. "who got me? Takahashi."/
There u go, 12 lines of bullshit, try to top me../
Im a no-weight but its not like im knockin Rocky..

dawg, i really can't drop tonight.

my friend is having a really hard time and i need to go over there right now.

i'm asking for an extension. can this be due tomorrow night?

i'm not ducking, but i don't have the time. i hope you understand man. peace.

o yea its all good.. jus drop by tonite (well tomoro in terms of weds), i can understand and ya dont even seem like the type to duck out like that so yep.. :thumbup:

kid's ugly, watch him get popped like a wine bottle
& if every picture tells a story....
................then a picture of YOU would tell a novel
you drop awful & i ain't racist but shit, you know
rap + Taka = wack, ya fat ass should stick to sumo
have a lotta nerve, what's up with this bitch?
i know faith moves mountains....
....................but you're still stuck in a ditch
runnin' after the win, but you're slow & tired
ran outta matches when he tried to fight fire w/ fire
stick with your day job kid, you fail at battle rap
already making a name for yourself....
....................but only cuz bad news travels fast

later.

Ey props.. ya finally dropped LMAO jus playin.. aite lets get some votes in here ladies n gentlemen.. and i need a vote of two on my other battles so i can close em.. APPRECIATED

takahashi lost this battle because his disses didnt hit hard enough and some of his metaphors made absolutely no sense since when does "a pedaphile whos cock burns "stalk words ? also some of his lines werent hitting at his opponent that hard at all.. I felt like text had the better verse because his punchlines were direct and hard hitting.. line about "kid's ugly, watch him get popped like a wine bottle
& if every picture tells a story....
................then a picture of YOU would tell a novel" was nice and he had a couple of other good personals in there that outdid his opponents verse

so I give my vote to text

hit these battles up with votes if yall want.. they could use some http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=153956

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=165375

iight here goes
tak

Im 16, yea im not ashamed of youth/
Guess your not too young for keys either, ya name is proof./
weak opner
I stalk words like a pedaphile whos cock burns/
Too many little assholes.. 400 posts n theyr not earned?/
ok
You fillin up the forums, bullshit pourin from his teeth/
This dude suks so much i thought he was a whore wit twenty knees/
huh ?
Your the 3rd victim so the Iverson pictures perfect/
Text doesnt cum hard cus this dick is nervous/
no
Shitty convo wit his buddy after our droppings:/
Homie wonders who it was.. "who got me? Takahashi."/
no
There u go, 12 lines of bullshit, try to top me../
Im a no-weight but its not like im knockin Rocky..
not bad

text

kid's ugly, watch him get popped like a wine bottle
& if every picture tells a story....
................then a picture of YOU would tell a novel
lmao good opner
you drop awful & i ain't racist but shit, you know
rap + Taka = wack, ya fat ass should stick to sumo
lol
have a lotta nerve, what's up with this bitch?
i know faith moves mountains....
....................but you're still stuck in a ditch
nice
runnin' after the win, but you're slow & tired
ran outta matches when he tried to fight fire w/ fire
ok
stick with your day job kid, you fail at battle rap
already making a name for yourself....
....................but only cuz bad news travels fast
lmao good finisher

1 sided battle props 2 both tho for doin there thang but text took this easy
tak u had sum ok punches but they were kinda weak not really many personals and ur flow was off structure was igght tho work on ur flow

text
good personals the sumo 1 was hella funny nice punches the flow was good and the structure was u had sum good funny stuff in there as well
moy vote goes to text for beein betta overall

lol.. aiite thanks for the votes but.. i thought my metaphors made pretty good sense hah.. heres an explanation..:

pedaphiles stalk.. i stalk too.. his cock burns.. cus he did deals wit "too many little assholes", i do too.. sall good tho

(thats should be "deals wit too many" not "did deals wit too many")

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