Round One: +Danny Ocean+ vs. Lyrisic

Rules.
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Check In Due Wed. Midnight Eastern
Verses Due Fri. Midnight Eastern
Votes End Sun. Midnight Eastern

check.... 10 lines....votings finished for me...probably the only real four votes in this entire first round...wouldnt kill people to actually explain shit

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http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthre...95#post1523395
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthre...97#post1524697
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthre...70#post1525670
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthre...98#post1534498

Checkin...... imma edit this post and leave the links. Boutsta go vote.10 lines it is.
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...76#post1523576
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...11#post1527611
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...28#post1527628
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...54#post1527654

Whorage is automatic when i force feed heat to this faggot
get clapped bitch...
He 'posted his verse' when I said take a 'whack' at it
It really is that big? ur smallness creates womens comments
Acknowledge his sig cuz.......
Lyrisic can only spit when him and his dog lock lips
This bitch gone fighter?Well I can extort truth in many ways
Ur just an Improv biter, Whose Line Is It Anyways?
I detect ur spit cant blaze me ho, Dan Ocean goin pro bono
U couldnt get on Radio even if cuba gooding went homo
ur layin flat on the mat....
Has Been that has not yet been clapped, so i begin attacking
Ur a waterd down Sapp ,worse than Warren fasting

bastard...i've used that "whose line is it anyways" line...lol...i know your not biting, just a bitch that someone hiht me with a line i used...fucking irony...anyways...here ya go kids...

I'ma merciless savage going up against a cat thats sub-average
Basically you couldn't save yourself if you were waiting for marriage
I'll break up EA and take this simple bastard out of the game
...When i throw danny right in the middle of his last name.......(ocEAn)
And if you holding secrets, something you dont want to speak
I'll laugh and all while i crack ya skull and let your information leak
He should of never took up rap, I got this wack cat shook up
Since he knows this is more of a miss-match then a lesbian hook up!
He needs the best of healing, since this loss got his emotioins reeling
So cut your heart out , mail it overnight and express your feelings!

Vote- Danny.

Lyrisic- you came aight started good, then went down. flow was there, but u cant rhyme the same two words ' up up' word. punches were thrown, some hit. The ocean line was decent.

Danny- You came good. you came personal, whose line line was decent. flow was there. take a whack at it line was nice. those lines got you the win. lyrisic had a nice ocean line.

notta bad battle
vote- danny. pretty close

Lyrisic took this one, i thought. he had the better punches and more personals. Danny ocean had a good verse too, tho, don't get me wrong... it's just Lyrisic had harder hitting punches.
vote=Lyrisic

Hmmmm... Not bad. Danny Ocean had a pretty complex verse with nice personals. Lyrisic had goods nameplay with witty punches. But I gotta give this to the wittier one, because i enjoyed his verse more.
Vote: Lyrisic

Vote danny

Structure:Danny's Structure was overall better between the both of them, great structure from the both of y'all
Personals:Nice personals from the both y'all here it was hard to decide who got this catergory
Punches: Even tho lyrsisc had cool punches, i like that punch bout his name, so did danny and only one punch really stood out to me in this battle which was the whose lines is it anyways joint which is why i vote danny

good battle from the both y'all, but danny really got cuz of that line

Weak battle. Both came wack.

Danny's shit was just a bit better though.

V/Danny

Vote-Lyrisic

And I believed everyone has took a stab at the "Whose Line is it Anyway" line. I have atleast. Lyrisic had better punches & personals.

v/ danny

Danny- you had good punches and Whose Line is IT anyways line took it with ya. I liked ur flow. Strcuture was good.

LYrisic- i heard too many crack ya skull and ripp out ya heart lines, sounds so wack, played out. nice flow and strucutre.

GOOd battle

v/danny

I got lyrisic takin this

danny, the only line you had was

This bitch gone fighter?Well I can extort truth in many ways
Ur just an Improv biter, Whose Line Is It Anyways?

but thats kinda played, and the cuba gooden jr. line was pretty good...but besides that, it was blah

lyrisic, pretty good verse, you werent very consistant, but neither was danny, anywase, you got the better vere...

so

vote-lyrisic

Danny- your verse was decent, wasnt feelin ya structure, all i gotta really say about ur verse was mst of ur lines were played

Lyricis- your verse was pretty good, liked your consistency, your punches were harder hitting and thats what counts

My Vote- lyrisic

Vote: Lyrisic
Reason: Better punches and a little better flow. I also liked Lyrisic's structure better, don't center it ocean, it would be better. But Lyrisic gets this for a harder hitting punches.