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^READ & Good Luck...
Check In Due Wed. Midnight Eastern
Verses Due Fri. Midnight Eastern
Votes End Sun. Midnight Eastern
Signing in..
Smoka, this is a joke right? Cause before I drop my punch, his notes die..
..so whys it necessary to deliver big blows..
..as all I need to do is fart on cyph
All your hopes wiped, thinking you’ll beat me? Your in another world kid..
..i wonder why though? Is it where I hurl him..
..so he burns through other planets?(Planned-hits)
Manage Script? Let me explain to you, theres no way you can handle this..
..sorta like millionaires fucking younger ones..
..then having a heart attack hit
With wack tactics why believe you’ll match this, as my strikes put you out..
..leaving your lines damaged in tattered marks..
..as I smoulder you with brute clouts
Your fucked now! But whats funny, i beat on you with the least amount..
..cause your not worth the time nor effort..
..so in 10 mins ill leave you down
checkin in............................................
here's my four. http://http://www.rapbattles.com/for...36#post1524136
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...5&page=1&pp=15
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...2&page=1&pp=15
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=136111
it's obvious...
You didn't read the battle's rules... cuz when you signed in it
ya spat in EIGHTEEN minutes... without a line limit!
So i'll spit as many lines as you... but by ya verse, i'd say that's fi'ty*...
i can't see how many lines you got, cuz ya structure is so SHITTY!
And i'm so whitty, that my post'll have ya throat tied in knots
Ya verse is 'square', and has no 'edge'...
...... yet ya can't Take ya thoughts Outside the box!*
I bet you pre-write and bite... that you read off a 'Script'...
Too bad you're like a diapa... always full of shit!
dumb bitch, open ya eyes... i'm wreckin ya, see?
wit this verse, i'll bring ya score to a negative three!
*fi'ty: i shortened fifty to make it rhyme with shitty.
*"Take ya thoughts Outside the box" = a play on his sig. (...Take this Outside)
No good punches from Script. Wack structure. K had no good punches, and the full of shit line is rediculously played. The quotations and stars are retarded. He tried to throw an outside the box line. Outside the box lines are played as fuck, and his made no sense. Both verses were weak, but I'm voting for Script, because K fed with his first 4 lines.
Vote: Script
-W1
Vote-K cypha.
Scriptious punches were blah. Both of the people's wording was eh, but I think K cypha was a little better than Script's.
Both verses sucked. K you had to much about his verse, which sucked. 4 lines about he line limit and shit, wack. Scriptous flow was horrible.. saw some punches all of them were weak.. none appealed to me..
Scriptious had more wordplay/vocab.
Vote-Scriptous.
This wasnt too strong of a battle...Scriptious had some things that hit....but nothing big at all....everything was just kind of blah...
Manage Script? Let me explain to you, theres no way you can handle this..
..sorta like millionaires fucking younger ones..
..then having a heart attack hit
Best hit by far...still not too great though...should elevate...we're trying to get KO's every round, remember that....
K actually had him at first....all he had to was keep it up....
You didn't read the battle's rules... cuz when you signed in it
ya spat in EIGHTEEN minutes... without a line limit!
that was a strong opener...you could have rode on that alone....but you dropped a line that made your verse look horrible....
I bet you pre-write and bite... that you read off a 'Script'...
Too bad you're like a diapa... always full of shit!
that murdered your verse three times over.....
vote...Scriptious.....
This wasn't very good.
Flow-Scrip ur verse didn't flow too well. Ur lines were uneven.
K ur verse flowed decent.
Punches- Both came weak in this aspect. Like scrip ur planet line made no sense. U tried to use a word and turn it into sumin else. Ur punches were weak and played.K all ur punches were played. Well not the negative three one.
Personals-Also very weak here. Scrip I didn't see any in ur verse. K u fed off scrips verse ur first four lines and on top of that u didn't do it very strong.
Originality- U too seemed like u were trying to come original, but it just didn't work out that way. Stay up on battles and see what kind of lines are played.
my votes= Scrip, I just feel like his punches connected more. This by all means wasnt a landslide tho.
boo@ this battle..
Scrip - Punches were pretty gay, and didnt hit him very well...
K - No real punches, pretty weak and nothing hit..
v/scrip
scrip wins
cus other dude was mad played
mad played
and his personals were weak
plus he explained his punches
n00b :rolleyes:
V/ scrip
the other guy fed :)
and expla ined his punches.
This battle was meh. I know Script didn't really take it seriously, coz he would've done much better if his opponent wasn't that wack :p lol.
V/Script
K Cypha wins this, cats...
Script had stretched lines, slow flow on account of it.
K was shorter, quicker to the point, used metas better.
Nothing great from either of them, nothing even very good...
But all around, K threw the better read.
Winner: K Cypha
Peace