Ok, let me copy and paste those rules here..... just a sec.
10 Lines
30 Mins
^ Ok, thats them. Im guessing this is gonna be a blind spit, so no feedin either.
Ready, lets go. Oh, and check in...
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Ok, let me copy and paste those rules here..... just a sec.
10 Lines
30 Mins
^ Ok, thats them. Im guessing this is gonna be a blind spit, so no feedin either.
Ready, lets go. Oh, and check in...
aite man i heard 30 mins ill be droppin
Ok its on im a bury dis biatcchhh and take his soul!
bury him in his moms Pussyhole!(only place big enuf for fat boy!)
Dissonance?Ur a bigger bitch than all of france!U beatin me dats no chance!
Callin 911 its a emergency! i kiked his ass and doctors jus found out he also got one testicle!
They call his Disease Classical!CUz he a laffin stock!he gettin fixed with a plastic testicle identical!
Yo u aint gonna beat me?I knw cuz da moon aint blue!Dude u aint no rap artist or a mc
Time to retire for u like Jayz!u must be takin pills cuz ur thick n crazy!
U must be one of dose crazy Jackass bitches!Who did sumting stupid n now recoverin in stitches!
Im like the biggest rollercoaster ride on ere and ur the kid who just cnt get on!
Take my advice i'll fukk ur mom get her pregnant!atleast den in ur family der will be one talented son!
PEACE!!!
Ok, Lets do this…
Ayo,
Yo Yo Yo, this cats name is the same way he battles
Says things three times, and the rest of its babble
Now this cat is afraid to rhyme against me,
I don’t know why, he thinks he is an invincible emcee,
This guy seems to think he is “the legend killer”
But the only thing that comes out this cat’s mouth is filler,
This battle goes down in history, and when we re-enact it
Everyone will be politely reminded, of how much you a faggot
After the battle ends, I kill you by asphyxiation,
And fuck up your corpse, with lyrical defamation,
This bitch is a hermaphrodite, who aint rappin right,
So when I took away his life, I ate him, with rapid bites,
I can’t correct the right, there is too much wrong to fix,
Next time be more careful of who ya battle with.
Hey, you cant just change your sig like that! Its in the rules.
Note: Yo Yo Yo's sig used to read:
:thefinger CAUGHT IT THE ACT MOTHERFUCKER! :thefingerQuote:
Originally posted by: Yo Yo Yo
ThE lEgEnD kIlLeR :shoot:
Jeez man. I knew i was good, but you went and changed your sig, just so it'd look like i didnt make sense. Im actually "flattered" haha. (Ok, maybe i wouldnt go that far)
Lolzzzzzzzz Nah Nah U Got The Wrong Idea I Need A Sig Change Not Cuz Of U Were Gud U Were Ok Not So Gud
O Yea N Ppl Plz Vote On Dis
Eh, its ok man. Number 1, i was upping it, and number 2, i was informing people, so they knew what my line was about. you know?
omg its funny how ppl vote on ur battles and say ur battle sucked but when u read theres....theres no difference
Punches- D - nothing reely outstanding thought....from word of ya mouth thought u would have KNOCKOUT PUNCHES
Personals- D - its obvious why he took this he got at his name and his lil sig shit
Multis- None -
Flow- D - pretty good flow didnt fall off that much the other guys flow was off big time
Structure - D - this was also obvious y he took this....the other guy had mad strecthed lines...
Vocab- Yo - he took this for having a high schoolers vocab lvl...while D was at like middle school....tho D did have like 2 decent wordz...
Creativity- D - he accually had a lil creativity while yo didnt
Complextity - Tied - both were at same lvl
Overall Winner - D - reasons explained
YOYOYO:
straight im ya wack... structure you had stretch lines the perentesese really killed ya verse... Ya flow was ok... Ya punchline was wack it iddnt have ne thing to do wit dissonance where did you get that he was fat... you had no multies
..personla s were really lame it wasnt catching any of my attention becuae most iof it didnt even make sense... oveerall your verse like usaully is wack so that is the reason you lost.
Dissonence: It was ok.. expecially the first 4 lines... punchlines were ra;;y good i really was feeling some of them but not a lot of them .. some of them didnt make sense but it was enought ot kill yo yoy ..flow was good but ive seen you do alot better .. mukties were iight even thought i really didnt see that many .. structure was alot better the yo yo yo's and i re oiit really made your cvesre really easy to read.. ovetrall your verse was a n easy win
vote=dissonace
Ok its on im a bury dis biatcchhh and take his soul!
bury him in his moms Pussyhole!(only place big enuf for fat boy!)
Dissonance?Ur a bigger bitch than all of france!U beatin me dats no chance!
Callin 911 its a emergency! i kiked his ass and doctors jus found out he also got one testicle!
They call his Disease Classical!CUz he a laffin stock!he gettin fixed with a plastic testicle identical!
Yo u aint gonna beat me?I knw cuz da moon aint blue!Dude u aint no rap artist or a mc
Time to retire for u like Jayz!u must be takin pills cuz ur thick n crazy!
U must be one of dose crazy Jackass bitches!Who did sumting stupid n now recoverin in stitches!
Im like the biggest rollercoaster ride on ere and ur the kid who just cnt get on!
Take my advice i'll fukk ur mom get her pregnant!atleast den in ur family der will be one talented son!
^ this verse is awful and not worthy of a breakdown u havent used a single punch...the last line was the only thing that resembled a battle concept...
Yo Yo Yo, this cats name is the same way he battles
Says things three times, and the rest of its babble
Good punch...
Now this cat is afraid to rhyme against me,
I don’t know why, he thinks he is an invincible emcee,
Wak...filler...
This guy seems to think he is “the legend killer”
But the only thing that comes out this cat’s mouth is filler,
So tru it borders on feedin...lol...nice...
This battle goes down in history, and when we re-enact it
Everyone will be politely reminded, of how much you a faggot
Wak...more filler...
After the battle ends, I kill you by asphyxiation,
And fuck up your corpse, with lyrical defamation,
More filler...an u dissed my verse which was all filler...my advice ELEVATE...lmmfao...
This bitch is a hermaphrodite, who aint rappin right,
So when I took away his life, I ate him, with rapid bites,
This is a BATTLE...not a diss verse...personals or punches please...
I can’t correct the right, there is too much wrong to fix,
Next time be more careful of who ya battle with.
This sounds like feedin but iono...guess itd be up to YO YO YO(lmao) to report it in the investigation forum...
Ok obviously my vote goes to Dissonance...
YO YO YO
Ok its on im a bury dis biatcchhh and take his soul!
bury him in his moms Pussyhole!(only place big enuf for fat boy!)
5/10
Dissonance?Ur a bigger bitch than all of france!U beatin me dats no chance!
3/10
Callin 911 its a emergency! i kiked his ass and doctors jus found out he also got one testicle!
They call his Disease Classical!CUz he a laffin stock!he gettin fixed with a plastic testicle identical!
2/10 that was just horrible
Yo u aint gonna beat me?I knw cuz da moon aint blue!Dude u aint no rap artist or a mc
Time to retire for u like Jayz!u must be takin pills cuz ur thick n crazy!
3/10
U must be one of dose crazy Jackass bitches!Who did sumting stupid n now recoverin in stitches!
6/10 your best one yet
Im like the biggest rollercoaster ride on ere and ur the kid who just cnt get on!
Take my advice i'll fukk ur mom get her pregnant!atleast den in ur family der will be one talented son!
7/10 this was your best one
Dissonance
Yo Yo Yo, this cats name is the same way he battles
Says things three times, and the rest of its babble
6/10
Now this cat is afraid to rhyme against me,
I don’t know why, he thinks he is an invincible emcee,
6/10
This guy seems to think he is “the legend killer”
But the only thing that comes out this cat’s mouth is filler,
7/10
This battle goes down in history, and when we re-enact it
Everyone will be politely reminded, of how much you a faggot
7/10 ouch
After the battle ends, I kill you by asphyxiation,
And fuck up your corpse, with lyrical defamation,
7/10
This bitch is a hermaphrodite, who aint rappin right,
So when I took away his life, I ate him, with rapid bites,
7/10 heh
I can’t correct the right, there is too much wrong to fix,
Next time be more careful of who ya battle with.
6/10
YO YO YO - Haright.. truth.. your verse was by far.. the MOST.. wackest verse I’ve seen yet! You had no flow! You had no structure! No real personals! Let alone, no real punches! It had to be said! But keep elevating man, no hate..
Dissonance - From our battle to this one, I’d say you really did have a bad day. You seemed to be a bit better in this battle than the effort you put in ours. So that alone is props, but you actual personals and punches. Not sick ones but just enough to get you the win over the other cat.
58 to 43
Vote - Dissonance
yo YO-YO! ah haa.. that just looks funny.. you think you could hit up my battle link in my signature and poll an honest vote? most appreciated.. LATE..
yo yo yo:: 1st off your name is a joke. so was ur battle man!
your flow.... wat flow! your structure was umbafuckingbeleivably shit. u had nohting going just a few words that rhymed and a couple of bitches thrown in! serious go to the rb help centre and learn how to write a battle or just keep losing like u r at the moment!
diss: well wat mre can i say u picked the perfect person to battle!
. your flow out beat him
. ur structure out beat him
. ur punches out beat him
. ur whole verse out beat him
v/ its obvious d..d..d..d..dissonance
yo yo yo: the only part of ur verse that look like it was a battle was....
Dude u aint no rap artist or a mc
Time to retire for u like Jayz!
but that was fucking b.shit ne ways !
search under forums for rb halp center cause.. yo yo yoo need it
Yo Yo Yo, LOL, im uppin this ! I do beleive this is Up #3
Yo Yo Yo, LOL, im uppin this ! I do beleive this is Up #4
YO YO YO - Your structure was horrible and your flow wasn't good either. You had no personals and your attempt at punches came off extremely weak. Your verse didn't show any creativity or skill at all.
Dissonance - Your structure was good and your flow was okay. You personals could use some work and your punches could as well, but they were still better than your opponents. You were a little better than him.
V/ Dissonance
I'll come back and poll vote when one of you hit this up with an honest vote:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=132627