When The Criminally Insane Rhyme...

Murder motherfuckers cuz that's all I wanna do...
Swallow up their souls so I can say I own em too.
Taste the sour succulence that misery and pain provide...
Swirl it round my mouth to let the residue reside.
Confide, in my priest, and let loose all my sins...
Then kill the man of God, to start all over again.
Can't have any witnesses, or peeps that know about...
Any of my murders, cuz that endangers reasonable doubt.
So kill and kill again, repetition drives this man...
Forced to jot rhymes cuz I've killed everyone who understands.
Why I must do this, why I'm driven to inflict the worst...
It would seem I'm obsessed, with doing unto them first.
The Golden Rule applies, my masticated mind warps it...
I must keep them from doing unto me with multiple throat slits.
I know they're all out there, uncaring while staring...
Plotting my death, last breath, with torture so despairing.
Conspiracies abound, for reasons only I'm privvy to...
Like knowing that Napoleon, never died at Waterloo.
And that JFK is still living and giving, it was all a hoax...
He's actually still in office, and you all fell for that big joke!
X File sounding's certainly resounding, but I'm determined...
To proving that I'm right, while killing all the evil vermin.
They wanna shut me up, and skulk in hallways behind me...
Then plead for their lives with claims of just being neighborly.
I don't buy it, so don't try it, I know your evil plot...
So I'll kill to survive and I've already killed alot.
In fact the stench is bad, permeatting walls even...
Good thing next door's vacant, thanks to all my cleavin.
Relocation repetition, another apartment laid to waste...
No clues left strewn, because fire engulfs the place.
Catch me if you can like the Gingerbread Man, to borrow a line from Chris...
Cuz you're in Big trouble by knowing too much, if you're reading this.
So lemme look into you, jot and track your ISP...
Cuz now I know you're one of them, and are out to get me.
Why'd you have to do this? This board was like a temple...
No, I never worshipped here, but felt safe, it's just that simple.
But you ruined it reading this! You fuck! I hate you now...
I so look forward to finding, and butcherng you like a cow!
Bathe in your blood, in order to cleanse my soul...
Lady MacBeth tried to wash it off, I'll wear it like a coat.
But under my clothes, and when it dries it kinda itches...
But discomort's a comfort cuz all my lives have been bitches.
Reincarnated to be incarcerated, nah, I'll avoid...
Because as long as I'm hunted, it's murder I'll exploit.


Verbal Kent...Just that Tight

Stephen Mayfield...Lost For Concern

Tactixx...The Cabin

Hrmmmm......I sense a little paranoia.....The whole verse is one huge conspiracy theory..heh..It was good though never the less..Quite the read but you held my interest well...nice vocab and creative references..decent imagery and story-line...overall a pretty good verse....keep at it....

Thanks for liking it, my man...

Much appreciated.

You're truly sick my friend, guess that's why I have always liked you... I enjoyed this read, was kind of playful and fun, in a purely saddistic sense that is. Too many people shy away from death and the theme of murder, but you seem to lurk where others do not. Style and strucutre was on par with everything I perssonaly like, so I was pulled in from the forst line. Now about your taunts, go a head look into MY IP or ISP, all you want, it'll either lead you in circles or worse, that I promise... Great read, I remember when I was into the same style and concepts, but it's hard being murderous after having a beatiful baby girl in my life for 8 years now, I have become soft in that perspective...

Best wishes to you...
Bounce

yeah man...i felt the flow...the mind itself carries many burdens...i can relate...because insanity is one of them....the scheme you came wit on this was dope beyond the norm....stay up wit it...fashigido


igido

Wak

Fuck off, Mrs...

Read a damn rule.

Uppin!

nice ..................... i felt were u was coming from..........................................left a disturbing picture in my head........... hahahaha .........must be y i liked it.......................................peace

NICE.U r Good.Nice flow.Nice Structure.It was Wack in a Koo way.It drives you insane.chaotic.I like it very much.it was interestin.u went pretty KRAZY in hea. also you went all out.IT was GOOD...TIGHT

You simply rock, my man...

Damn b2k this was some neurotic shit! I enjoyed the read. You had precise flow and impecable diction... I like your verbosity. I am a lover of language myself. Your verse was very pessimistic and dramatic. I felt as though you were using the words as a vent to get some shit off your chest. Or so it seemed. I thought a portion of the piece was about people never understanding you and how it angered yo so. This verse had depth and I liked it a lot. Very meaningful. Good stuff man! Keep it up!

yo this was a good drop i like the flow and the structure was nicely packed i like the use of metas and vocab and the imagery was well seen, but that passage was long yo and jus all together this was a good drop.

Hey, I thought Jeffrey Dahmer was dead? Maybe he faked a death like Tupac, and is still rappin.

You are a sick mother fucker. It was good, but pretty messed up. I liked how you took such a taboo topic and made it interesting, I thought it was creative. Pretty good.

ok this was pretty good and an interesting read.. good take on the topic.. flow was running smooth and steady.. some realy decent lines but some were a bit twisted..
overall :thumbup::thumbup::thumbup: three thumbs up :)

aight this is the type a shit i like ta see.....some a dat ol' wicked shit.....had good structure n flow....through-out the whole mufucka i was seein pictures of what u was sayin....n the shits crazy...lol......props like a mufucka tho

.......n how u put the links to ya battles n shit in ya sig but have it saying sumthing n not just showing the link?????