And1mix Vs James Jones (My other battles need votes to)

ight five bars ima have to keystyle this one

ummm...
You dun...i ben this chump, if you when send this pump,
your a bitch here, i stack "W's" like wenddy cups-
ill be ya ghost write, win this punch....my flow sick bitch ill end ya lunch,
my boys deep win get jumped... you hard?? then catch ten you punk-
and naw..ima be the one beamin things,
trust me ill be ya ghost write bitch call me steven king-
im cocky beamin mean....ill tell you. ima be swingin slugg'a,
your a pussie now man, you dodge beef like viggie lovers-
walk i slug ya....cause me and swalla, you want beef then halla,
im gansta..you catch a hole in the back of ya head like rasheed wallace-


ok quick man lets good

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Impale your face with a nail rake ,I’m coming at you no holds barred like a jail break..
This frail fake is nothing but a fat broken condom baby, a big mistake..
I’ll make your rhymes on point by sharpening your tongue and picking out your brain tumour..
Stick dynamite up your ass like a literal baby boomer, then jam your tongue through your jaw, now that’s tongue in cheek humour..
As far as winning goes you’re out of the running like crippled presidents..
You’ve spent your common sense (cents) and pH level measures your intelligence..
I substituted your blood for sheep’s in a pentagon ritual and it summoned a rainbow..
Your plain flow, has got fans like a dwarfed lil jon, because they get and remain low..
Slice your ligaments four score and watch things fall apart, a halflife tells the tale of James Jones lore..
Leave you under the weather like the earth’s core, rip out your roots, you want more?!!

lma...weak ass battle from james jone... nice battle from and1mix

verse from james:
ummm...
You dun...i ben this chump, if you when send this pump,
your a bitch here, i stack "W's" like wenddy cups-
ill be ya ghost write, win this punch....my flow sick bitch ill end ya lunch,
my boys deep win get jumped... you hard?? then catch ten you punk-
and naw..ima be the one beamin things,
trust me ill be ya ghost write bitch call me steven king-
im cocky beamin mean....ill tell you. ima be swingin slugg'a,
your a pussie now man, you dodge beef like viggie lovers-
walk i slug ya....cause me and swalla, you want beef then halla,
im gansta..you catch a hole in the back of ya head like rasheed wallace-
^^blah weak 5/10

verse from and1:

Impale your face with a nail rake ,I’m coming at you no holds barred like a jail break..
This frail fake is nothing but a fat broken condom baby, a big mistake..
I’ll make your rhymes on point by sharpening your tongue and picking out your brain tumour..
Stick dynamite up your ass like a literal baby boomer, then jam your tongue through your jaw, now that’s tongue in cheek humour..
As far as winning goes you’re out of the running like crippled presidents..
You’ve spent your common sense (cents) and pH level measures your intelligence..
I substituted your blood for sheep’s in a pentagon ritual and it summoned a rainbow..
Your plain flow, has got fans like a dwarfed lil jon, because they get and remain low..
Slice your ligaments four score and watch things fall apart, a halflife tells the tale of James Jones lore..
Leave you under the weather like the earth’s core, rip out your roots, you want more?!!
nice verse overall 7/10

breakdown:
flow:And1
multies:And1
punhclines:and1
structure:james
opener:and1
closer:and1
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overall vote goes to and1mix
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And1 Took This Quite Easily..His Puches Hit Harder...Better Structure....Better Flow And Better Overall....

Originality:And1
Structure:And1
Flow:And1
Multi's:And 1
Personals:And 1..

Vote:And 1

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james-your shit was weak as hell man.......................structure was okay.......flow fucking sucked ass.............i think that only 2 of your endin words rhymed.........that took away from your shit.........punches sucked if they was even puinches......no real personals here.......overall wack ass verse.........3/10

and1- your verse was okay...............structure was good other then that wun stretched line...........flow was alright................punches hit where they needed to and was alot better then jame's shit................didnt really notice any personals that stuck out...............all in all i would say you wun this because you had a better verse flow was good and you had some okay punches

v-and1 for better punches and over all verse

breakdown:
multies:And1
structure:james
opener:and1
closer:and1
Enjoyment: And1
Creativity:Tie
punhclines:and1
flow:And1

Overall And1


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This battle was aight, but...

James Jones: Ur verse was weak. I wasn't feelin' ur punches and all. U need to stop makin' unfounded things and make stuff that hurts the opponent. Keep elevatin'.

And1mix: Ur verse was good. Not ur best, but good. Only, stop talkin' about urself so much, and concentrate more on the disses. Besides that, good job. Keep elevatin'.

Vote: And1mix

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And1mix- Your verse was good. Your Flow i really didn't think you had one. Your Punches were better then James Jones's because i thought they hit harder then his so you did good there.Structure was o.k..but you could fix it up more you know? But good ass battle but you overall get the win because i thought you had better punches.

James Jones- Your Punches were weak, so you should elevate more on that. Your verse was aight but you should fix it up. Structure fairley good. You need to elevate even though your new you need to elevate but you put up a good battle against him but elevate kid.
vote- and1

Punches- And1
Verse- and1
Flow- tie i guess wasn't feelin niether
structure- tie

Yo like everyone else said I have to go with and1mix.And1mix had some great flows so did you.James your lines was just a little biy off from him.I liked his lines and what everyone else said is my opinionn also.But as my vote I would go with you James becuz you almost came on top.I likes everything about this guys rhyme and his flows but they need a lil bit more work.PLus James I like everything about your but like 2 verses was not that much ok and will need a little bit more work.This is the ones that I didnt really feel
ill be ya ghost write, win this punch....my flow sick bitch ill end ya lunch,
my boys deep win get jumped... you hard?? then catch ten you punk-

and

im cocky beamin mean....ill tell you. ima be swingin slugg'a,
your a pussie now man, you dodge beef like viggie lovers-

They where great but they just need a tentsy little bit more work.Aight

So my
v/ is ummm an1mix