lh v.s sm

10-15lines....
check in due ASAP
house rules

check in bitch so i can hurry up and merk you....oh yeah and time limit is you gotta spit 25mins afta check in....sorry forgot to put that in

checking in, and no its 10 lines not 10-15
and i will drop 30 mins after you drop..

yeah sure dun matta to me....you still gettin merked

Hype stays !*gunnin-bitches*! you'll fear-this-fight' kid ya aint sicc' you like reversal dreams jus !*frontin-wit-wishes*! .. and 'Split Mind' couldnt "walk-the-wok" with asians !*runnin-in-dishes*!..
Think Ya Brave?
I always bring !*trouble-to-crews*! once i stay snuffin-youths cuz Hype is !*rougher-than-dudes*!.. and "Split Mind couldnt be "larger-than-life" even if rosie-o-donnel wuz !*squashing-you*! ..
*~*idiot*~*
blood Rappin be leaking! dont dispute-this-beatin or my !*frienzed-attacks-turn-crazy*!... viewin ya post-count "S.M." will never make it to 4 like !*sharon-tate-baby*! (damn)
*~*heah cums the Ko*~*
foes head smothered from post-to-post! Hype stays rhymin-above-most! with nothin but siccness on !*lines-that-boast*!... battlin me? you'll "dance-wit-death" like !*grindin-wit-ghosts*!


BLAHHH fucked up structure but neone with skill will be able to figure it out...only 5lines 10bars......fuck it

Dont Fucking Vote On This Battle Unless You Get My Structure And Erything Else In This Verse

300posts Atleast

Fucka 300 post atleast.. anyone can vote!
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And notice, you only went 5 lines, when limit is 10
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lyricalhype aka flash beatin me?........... he must be dreamin
Kids undefeated, and battlin me................ whats he thinkin
I'm puttin a loss to his rec............ and end to his undefeatability
Is he serious? battlin split mind is already puttin him in uncapability
He's already uncapable of being dope, whats he got left to do
He chose to battle me, so he also chose to get sonned too
Did a good job keepin ya profile blank, but your still getting beat
Settin up this battle, is like ya askin to be killed in line of defeat
Check it, i went simplistic, and verbalisticly beat you no problem
Fuck you and your crew, anyone wanna come at me, i'll hault them

haha you obviously didnt get mi structure.......that is why i said only 300posts vote.....cause ILL got it so i dunno why you didnt....its 10bars put into 5lines.....

uppin this.......not stupid fuckin HERB votes will be accepted

Return the vote right fuckin here...

Now...

Oh my god!
Oh my god!
Oh my god!
The slacking off in here has hit an all time low.
Seriously.

Cuz Mind just got merked by someone who still uses this herbish shit, ~*! ()...

Here's why...

Hype stays !*gunnin-bitches*! you'll fear-this-fight' kid ya aint sicc' you like reversal dreams jus !*frontin-wit-wishes*! .. and 'Split Mind' couldnt "walk-the-wok" with asians !*runnin-in-dishes*!..
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lyricalhype aka flash beatin me?........... he must be dreamin
Kids undefeated, and battlin me................ whats he thinkin

Hype went old school stretched and didn't use a lick of personals...
But he punched with wordplay and metas, pretty whack, but it connected, soft or not.
Mind made a statement, no diss, no wordplay, no nothing. Just a statement.

I always bring !*trouble-to-crews*! once i stay snuffin-youths cuz Hype is !*rougher-than-dudes*!.. and "Split Mind couldnt be "larger-than-life" even if rosie-o-donnel wuz !*squashing-you*!
VS
I'm puttin a loss to his rec............ and end to his undefeatability
Is he serious? battlin split mind is already puttin him in uncapability

Hype brought alotta multi's for flow, used a somewhat whack/somewhat funny "O'Donnell" line for a punch, soft, but contact made.
Another fucking statement from Mind, again no diss, no attempt, just an observation with some vocab. Blah.

blood Rappin be leaking! dont dispute-this-beatin or my !*frienzed-attacks-turn-crazy*!... viewin ya post-count "S.M." will never make it to 4 like !*sharon-tate-baby*! (damn)
VS
He's already uncapable of being dope, whats he got left to do
He chose to battle me, so he also chose to get sonned too

Real nice Charles Manson reference inside a fucked up stretched line by Hype, no real diss, just a nice threat.
Mind, for the first time dissed, but only in the set up, punchline was again, just a fuckin observation. Nothing more.

*~*heah cums the Ko*~*
foes head smothered from post-to-post! Hype stays rhymin-above-most! with nothin but siccness on !*lines-that-boast*!... battlin me? you'll "dance-wit-death" like !*grindin-wit-ghosts*!
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Did a good job keepin ya profile blank, but your still getting beat
Settin up this battle, is like ya askin to be killed in line of defeat

Real nice flow, multi's and wordplay, lacked a punch though, more threats...
And again, more predicting, stating, but no punching from Mind. None at all.

Check it, i went simplistic, and verbalisticly beat you no problem
Fuck you and your crew, anyone wanna come at me, i'll hault them

Mind had a chance to rip him without feedback and totally blew it.
Another fuckin statement, this time threatening his crew, not even him.
No punch, no diss, I can't even call it soft, cuz it was just non existant.

So, overall...

More effort, more attack, and more dissing...

By Hype.

Congrats on catching Mind at a time when he truely didn't give a care.

Peace

Hype stays !*gunnin-bitches*! you'll fear-this-fight' kid ya aint sicc' you like reversal dreams jus !*frontin-wit-wishes*! .. and 'Split Mind' couldnt "walk-the-wok" with asians !*runnin-in-dishes*!..
your structure is fuckin gay....!~* shit is ugly to look at..lose it....played line...but ok
Think Ya Brave?
I always bring !*trouble-to-crews*! once i stay snuffin-youths cuz Hype is !*rougher-than-dudes*!.. and "Split Mind couldnt be "larger-than-life" even if rosie-o-donnel wuz !*squashing-you*! ..
weak
*~*idiot*~*
blood Rappin be leaking! dont dispute-this-beatin or my !*frienzed-attacks-turn-crazy*!... viewin ya post-count "S.M." will never make it to 4 like !*sharon-tate-baby*! (damn)
whack!
*~*heah cums the Ko*~*
foes head smothered from post-to-post! Hype stays rhymin-above-most! with nothin but siccness on !*lines-that-boast*!... battlin me? you'll "dance-wit-death" like !*grindin-wit-ghosts*!
meh ok.....I only see 4 bars



lyricalhype aka flash beatin me?........... he must be dreamin
Kids undefeated, and battlin me................ whats he thinkin
no punch..filler
I'm puttin a loss to his rec............ and end to his undefeatability
Is he serious? battlin split mind is already puttin him in uncapability
weak
He's already uncapable of being dope, whats he got left to do
He chose to battle me, so he also chose to get sonned too
played concept...not worded right
Did a good job keepin ya profile blank, but your still getting beat
Settin up this battle, is like ya askin to be killed in line of defeat
whack
Check it, i went simplistic, and verbalisticly beat you no problem
Fuck you and your crew, anyone wanna come at me, i'll hault them
weak...no punch

This shit was whack as fuck....lyrical ha dlike one semi ok punch while split mind had none....damn...elevate

Vote=lyrical

thanks for the feedback i will elevate;)

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~lmao SM didnt even try, but he dont have too try
cuz he could of came harder but he came half assed
LH had a fucked up structure yes its true but it was. . . .
more hard hiting eventhough the flow was everywhere
and all kinds of signs and shit made it stupid but w/e
both werent all that, actually to tell u the truth aight
but i will vote for LH cuz he came stronger wit creativity
both had blah (P&P) but SM had good vocab but lacked
aight fuck this shit im threw, overall basic battle nothing~. . . .
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Lyricalhype- An okay verse. Punches were way better then his. Flow was aight. Your Structure you might wanna work on that a little, but did okay wit that. Plus your wordplay was good. You get the win for better punches...

Split Mind- Bad verse but decent enough for a first battle. Punches were shitty. His were better. No was no flow. Wordplay was not good. You need to elevate a lot. On punches and maybe your structure too and other things

vote- Lyricalhype
i will poll my vote once you hit my battle up with it explained vote..i promise..~1~
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=123892

and1 you fuckin punck....get outa here if people go and vote on your battle even if it is against you you still gotta poll.....you said you would if we hit up your battle not if we vote for you...but i voted for you neways you had a better verse you betta hit this shit up man

UPPIN HIS SHIT:);):-d