10-12 lines spit in a few hours i dunno maybe tommrow....no bullshit
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10-12 lines spit in a few hours i dunno maybe tommrow....no bullshit
in ya reply dont say im WACK and i cant even RHYME/
CUZ I WILL CUT YA HEAD OPEN AND START CHANGING YA MIND/
this will take a minimum only nothin but TEN LINES/
FIVE RHYMES, A FEW PUNCHLINES OUT OF MY MIND/
you KIND , beggin for me TO SPIT A RHYME/
as u can see i can win by using SAME WORDS TO GET A RHYME/
i know i got u like damn ITS ABOUT TIME/
hey jammin get off jo bus and RIDE MINE/
i aint hatin, i like it when u bringin ANTICIPATION/
you WAITIN keep on viewing the post for PARTICIPATION/
~DCLASSIC~
i see u need 24 hours to respond....oh yeah please vote for plzhttp://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=120619
K imma merk this fool
Who do you think are , battling someone better than you
"in the conservatory with words" your bitch ass need another clue?
You think i need 24 hours to respond ? fuck that
ill break your bones like toothpicks and make you eat my jockstrap
or my cocksack , along with every other peice of anatomy
its sad to see another wack emcee needing a healthy dose of reality
Da classic, plz go home or atleast stick to your weak gymnastics
cuz your mouth has no strength ,ll shut your trap with teeth elastics
Your name it seems to me corresponds to someone of age
but wisdom comes with learning your first lesson is being backstage
finisher
Now your "new to R and B" , and you need know this as i blast it
you rhymed "rhyme with rhyme" and since your a fucking newb that ACTUALLY is CLASSIC
lets get some votes on this shit
u better then wat i thought....if i known that i would of came harder...lol
well anyway up the votes
I was not feeling your verse at all..Quote:
Originally Posted by Da_classic
And the capitalizing every ending word,
that goes to prove your new..
Well elevate man, you had 0 hard punches
0 personals.. and you underestimated your opponet
Also... i was not feeling your verseQuote:
Originally Posted by Jammin'Jobus
you had a few decent punches, but thats it
You didn't exaclty come hard at all..
you also need to elevate
But since you did have some decent punches,
imma give this to you... barley though!
V/Jammin'Jobus
GodFather(2) v.s ILLunatic (topical)
thanx for your thoughts cuz now i know what i have to do
uppin 1
uupin 2 fuck we need some votes
uppin 3 fuck can we get some votes
Okay, Da_classic, your flow wasn't that good, your rhymes were repeated and I didn't see no punches, that I can remember. Very elementary, weak flow. Jammin took this by far,better everything, overflow, etc.. One sided battle..
Return da fava
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=120685
Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. - Axiom
ok....thx even though it dosent coutn anyways i think this is my last up never mind ok uppin4 lets get some fucking votes
Easy day..
CLASSIC, you need to elevate a lot man, a lot. Quit with the CAPS and the / ... ya dont need that shit. Also, all i saw you use were 'rhyme', 'mine', 'time' ... all very simple words...only different ones i saw were at the end. No wordplay or personals or multis.....and yea, i agree with ILLunatic, you really underestimated your opponent, somethin you should never do.
Jammin, what to say. You had a much better verse, however this wasnt that great either, but didnt have to be in this battle. At least you made an attempt at personals and punches..structure was stretched at times, a few played concepts, but enough for the win.
Vote / Jammin'Jobus
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=120587
(I'll poll vote once ya peep this battle...I'm tired of voting and not gettin replies)
Peace.
umm thx for not pollin i appreciate it anyway uppin last fucking gay
Jammin took this with a landslide...
your verse was better alround, better punches they wernt the hardest hittin but they connected.. flow and structure were ok could of been a bit stronger though...
Da Classic i did not feel your verse at all punches wernt hittin at all realy, flow was patchy and structure was weak...
\/0te Jammin.....
ill Poll when you hit up RASCAL 'vs' Big Tissle *round 2*