$carface vs. Shortay140

10 bars
no d/r
no crew votes
only explained votes
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iight im checkin in ima drop in like 10 minutes iight

and can u stop spammin up the thread if u gonna post wait till we drop our verses so u can vote in it please

faces about to get his ass-gashed, bashed-with-axes through his ECTO-DERM/
I've out-lashed, I'll out-last, with a devout-past to corrECT-HIS-TERMS/
His publics so "liced" and "curly", he has to DIS-INFECT HIS-"PERM!"/
Mom caught him jacking off so much, she screamed "RESPECT-YO'-SPERM!"//

Ima end-this-germ, "wanna-be" mouthing lyrics while he's jog-gin/
His visions-fog-gin', "cant see clearly" as I crack this "Egg"head's "Nog"-gin'/(Egg-Nog)
"Throat-clog-gin" with a dick-its-sick-it needs quick-dis-LODG-IN'!!/
scareface "knocks" guys "harder" than Nick Carter ,when he's "CLOG-GIN!!!"//

Hes just "too slow", like Paporottzi fuckin "Grabbin-at-stars"/
Ill beat you til your "whole SURFACE is RED", like Im "stabbin-on-MARS!"/

iight uppin for ur verse scar face.......when scare face drop's let the votes begin .....iight lata

yo im bout to get in dis niggaz ass...shit...he already beat me once...
but dat was becuz all his votes was dickrides...da amusement has now shrunk...(1)
wont hesitate to obliterate...leave him face to face wit his own fate...
your flows are a blind date...cuz even if u had vocab u still couldnt relate...(2)
i've seen yo type before wit those sloppy metaphors....such a disgrace...
didnt know shortay could come gayer than marathons of will and grace...(3)
and maybe in case...bush needs to legalize gay marriages...
cuz u giving blow to yo flows is absurd like cinderella to carriages...(4)
im ruthless...my dental dialect will leave u toothless...
u think its a joke...u couldnt come funny if u tried spoof dis...(5)
why u fall victim to plajorism... u couldnt resist huh...
so self concerned wit losing battles u resort to copy and paste huh...(6)
i bet u got another alias...fronting wit an unidentified face...
got dis dude more confused then forensics without a DNA trace...(7)
what a waste of fucking keystrokes...i already know what u gone say...
"i already beat u" blah blah...punches comin up kinda "SHORT"~"AY...(8)
cuz yo reach is way too short to contend wit dis heavyweight...
dats like tellin a fat man to go eazy on sugarcakes....(it aint gone happen)(9)
i'll topple u like da twin towers...yo dis dudes a fuckin coward...
i thought elevation was up...why is dis bitch going downward...(10)

clocks ticking get yo shit together

yo those are more like 10 bars instead of 10 lines son y u breakin ur own rules???

[b]woops my fault i aint read the rules cuz in the callout thread u posted 10 lines
iight if itz okay wit u can i post my real verse then if it 10 bars[b]

go head as long as its in the next 10-15 minutes......................tick tock tick

face about to get his ass-gashed, bashed-with-axes through his ECTO-DERM/
I've out-lashed, I'll out-last, with a devout-past to corrECT-HIS-TERMS/

His publics so "liced" and "curly", he has to DIS-INFECT HIS-"PERM!"/
Mom caught him jacking off so much, she screamed "RESPECT-YO'-SPERM!"//

Ima end-this-germ, "wanna-be" mouthing lyrics while he's jog-gin/
His visions-fog-gin', "cant see clearly" as I crack this "Egg"head's "Nog"-gin'/(Egg-Nog)

"Throat-clog-gin" with a dick-its-sick-it needs quick-dis-LODG-IN'!!/
scareface "knocks" guys "harder" than Nick Carter when he's "CLOG-GIN!!!"//

This kids like the "Air Force Reserves", straight smellin like "RANK(ed) PUSSIES"/
He-cant-look, he-stands-"shook" and "cut" like "iced and diced" rookies/

Or "Wet-rice-cookies" his "biscuit's limp", wacker than the lyrics to that shitty song NOOKIE//
He loves "playing with wood" thats why his new nicknames GI-PET-TO!/(From pinnochio)

This GI-GAY-JOEs, "soft" like PLAY-DOUGH or the fur of dogs at PET-SHOWS/
Comin' in here with lyrics so disappointing it even UP-SETS-"SNOW"!!!/ (The wack 80s rapper)

He's screa-min for some sea-min in-his-ass, hes as-kin' "LETS GO!!"//
Hes just "too slow", like Paporottzi fuckin "Grabbin-at-stars"/

Ill beat you til your "whole SURFACE is RED", like Im "stabbin-on-MARS!"/
This whole verse is leavin you "hot and sticky", you should just "Rap-on-tar"/
ur as "FAKE"as the next tupac "AV-AT-AR// I dont-know-yo, tho this ho-mo's ass is "white and slippery", so he goes to "SKI-SITTIN!!!', so u could stop spittin/

THANKS ALOT FOR UNDERSTANDIN IIGHT
GOOD LUCK AND MAY THE BEST BOI WIN

ight thankz for the second try son i really appreciate it
iight uppin for votes on this.......................1x

uppin........................................x2

JUST A REMINDER IT'S THE SECOND VERSE NO THE FIRST ONE OKAY PLEASE READ THE SECOND VERSE THANK U