F*** Ya'll

All ya'll just a bunch of fake emcees/sayin' what you did, but you never ran the streets/fuck all of ya', you ain't as hard as you portray/white collar pussies asking "Ma, is it ok"/can i go to bobby's house, we're supposed to have some fun/well i just killed lil bobby and fuckin' raped his mom/all of ya' claim to be a thug and live the gangsta life/but you wouldn't do shit if you were threatened for your life/Claimin' to be a soldier but you don't stand for shit/that's why i put all you motherfuckers on my hit list/watch me when i blow up your block as you cower in fear/your only defense if fuckin' shedding a tear/but most of ya'll probably don't even live on a block/ya'll livin' up in Sunny Side Mansions loaded with money/no crime activity, sugar coated like honey/so to you i say, fuckin' stay in your place/you ain't respected by anyone, you fucking disgrace/no one respects you or your stupid shit/that's why you run and join fuckin' internet clicks/ya'll can sound of to this, but you know that's it's true/and one more thing, ya'll can suck my dick/cuz if we were face to face, ya'll wouldn't do shit.......fuckin' poser ass bitches

Ummm.........ok this was pretty good........lot of what you said is true dawg.........for a newb this shit aint bad.......an usually the people that talk about being all hard an shit are the one that aint......remember that shit.........nice drop......peace.........hit up the link in my signature called MIND SPOKEN.........peace

I stopped reading after first two bars...

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Originally Posted by Penskills

I stopped reading after first two bars...

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LMAO!! @ Pen!!

if you expect props for this you are at the wrong place. Nobody claims to be hard in the open mic room. You gotta go to the cypher with this man. You don't know shit about multis and imagery and anything to do with making a rhyme worth reading that is why everybody who reads this is gonna say it sucks or they probably won't even read it...instead of attacking people with your stupid ass ideas and beliefs which has been done too many times in open mic by other faggots you should go to the cypher, I will bust you ass if you go there. I stay in the cypher

pretty good true on what u saying I hate bitches who act like that because they don't wha the ghetto is about :thefinger

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Originally Posted by carlosbarrett

if you expect props for this you are at the wrong place. Nobody claims to be hard in the open mic room. You gotta go to the cypher with this man. You don't know shit about multis and imagery and anything to do with making a rhyme worth reading that is why everybody who reads this is gonna say it sucks or they probably won't even read it...instead of attacking people with your stupid ass ideas and beliefs which has been done too many times in open mic by other faggots you should go to the cypher, I will bust you ass if you go there. I stay in the cypher

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Hes right.^^

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Originally Posted by lunatic

pretty good true on what u saying I hate bitches who act like that because they don't wha the ghetto is about :thefinger

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Lmao. Oh you two should start a gang.

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Originally Posted by self

Lmao. Oh you two should start a gang.

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LMAO^^

fuck starting a gang yall should go rob a bank and kill the president and 50cent in one week and post a rhyme about it...I mean yall are hard right???

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Originally Posted by carlosbarrett

fuck starting a gang yall should go rob a bank and kill the president and 50cent in one week and post a rhyme about it...I mean yall are hard right???

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LMAO!!!^^ Yo carlos you need to hit up my MIND SPOKEN piece dawg!! im sure youll dig!! links in my sig :thumbup:

You need 2 links or this will get closed, Thanks.

I wasn't aimin' at anyone in here, unless it describes you...I didn't even care what it sounded like comin' out. I was just tryin' to get a point across. And I don't put any of my good shit on here, cuz I know there's biters. Think about it...

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^^wanted to...

got to line 6.

this is a bit played... like the f-bomb in this work...

Its was ok but not the best u could have done a few things like more wordplay and mutis but it was ---------- to me