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blind spit drop by mid nite cali time...
so we both got basically got 2 hours to do wuteva an post.a verse
waitin for ya checkin so i can start to key style my shit..
checkinnnnnnnn
Needs votes SHits heat...Click it an vote..thanks.pc
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=109487
changed due dat to the first due date i wanted in bbitch slapped
drop in 45 min.-1 hour......
blind spit like i said..
checkinnnnnnnn
checked in.... peace and good luck, i'll be done by the 2 hour deadline....
coo then its all god...............................checkin in
My technique will have you "going under" faster than I-did*
With magic rhymes in your face like 3D gadgets from Spy-Kids*
I'm the finest, my rhyme's-hit with unmatched precision
Shootin' you down from a lyrical sniper's masked position
You'll wish you never accepted, when this duel-came-by
After you lose to an emcee smarter than neural-AI
Right now you're happy like you just bought some new chromium
But I'll blow your wheels off like a barrel of plutonium
Immaculate lyrics, that's what the past voters-chose
For winner, your harder to "pick" than a broken-nose
You need to leave RB, your not fit to fight or battle
No one "buys you", like Macca's seventy-five cent apples
Like an angle, I can elevate to many degrees
But you stay acute while I bring a "revolution" of cheese*
Lost in his own world... Luminary lives in a nation of loss
But how can you be normal when the Terminator's your boss?*
*I went to Australia when i was very young... meaning "going under"... in his case, I flipped it to mean "becoming wack"
* New spy kids movie is in 3D
* Since I'm personifying myself as an angle, a "revolution" is the highest level an angle can reach... meaning im the dopest.. lol
* He lives in California, Arnie is his boss.. lol
the deadline for 2 hours is in 5 minutes.... you better drop soon.... peace and good luck
yo wutup man i got 2 battles already opened but im still guna drop before the deadline an it was at midnite...so i got like 45 minutes to post dawg......
but im droppin dont trip nice verse i wont feed im almost done wit it
Aite.....
Undefeated,
Until now ya Flipped Concepts are been Exposed like ya Music..
Kid Lives N Dies by the Mic,But before He Cud Evem Use it..
Spit Sum New Shit Wanksta,Define the Fact that U Never been Dropped..(7-0)
Cuz If ya Verse was Key To Success Sumone Must Changed the Locks..
My Mic Contains the Pot,No Wonder im Blazin Herbs that Consider them Mc's..
Wanksta 13, But says hes not.Instead he Considers Himself a Vet Evidentlly..
I Wont Leave Till Theres a Stain on ya Rec,Cuz Ya Hardly Even Impress me..
Fuk it Kid Ill Be Glad To Verbally Murder Ya..An Have Desert Holes Rest-in-Peace..
He can Spit Subliminal,Rather then Fite..Even Throw Words in Court..
So When Desert sees X,Its a Running Situation Like Third and Short..
Just Brush up fast bitch, Cuz ya Scrips Only get takin out Wit the Trash Kid..
An Watch me Abuse U Wit my Keys, like Taught in ya Self Defense Classes..
^Sum Wont Get that,My Bars Are more Siccer Then ya Moms Streched Marks..
Wich Leads me To the Next Part..''Schoolin'' This Kid Before the Test Starts...
Aite.....
Undefeated,
Until now ya Flipped Concepts are been Exposed like ya Music..
Kid Lives N Dies by the Mic,But before He Cud Evem Use it..
Spit Sum New Shit Wanksta,Define the Fact that U Never been Dropped..(7-0)
Cuz If ya Verse was Key To Success Sumone Must Changed the Locks..
My Mic Contains the Pot,No Wonder im Blazin Herbs that Consider them Mc's..
Wanksta 13, But says hes not.Instead he Considers Himself a Vet Evidentlly..
I Wont Leave Till Theres a Stain on ya Rec,Cuz Ya Hardly Even Impress me..
Fuk it Kid Ill Be Glad To Verbally Murder Ya..An Have Desert Holes Rest-in-Peace..
He can Spit Subliminal,Rather then Fite..Even Throw Words in Court..
So When Desert sees X,Its a Running Situation Like Third and Short..
Just Brush up fast bitch, Cuz ya Scrips Only get takin out Wit the Trash Kid..
An Watch me Abuse U Wit my Keys, like Taught in ya Self Defense Classes..
^Sum Wont Get that,My Bars Are more Siccer Then ya Moms Streched Marks..
Wich Leads me To the Next Part..''Schoolin'' This Kid Before the Test Starts..
easier to read
Punches:Lum
Multies:Lum
Vocab: Lum
Wordplay:Lum
Metaphores: wog
Stucture:Lum
Vote: Lum
left my honest vote.....now hit this up for me....1
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=109545
^ i have the sneaking suspicion you didnt even read the verses... anyway, those types of votes are not allowed... you need to elaborate on your choices... upping
i have the same feeling....but dont matter....
cuz i ddint peep his link an i doubt u did........
but still lookin for sum honest votes...good shit wogzta
^ you too... you had some dope punchlines.... and u aint being a bitch about anything... and u the first person in ages that actually showed... so good luck
^^ eh wogzta..can u peep ya Pms dawg...................
my vote goes to Lum..peace..Quote:
My technique will have you "going under" faster than I-did*
With magic rhymes in your face like 3D gadgets from Spy-Kids*
This bar was gay ass hell...both was wack..the set-ups and the punch..
I'm the finest, my rhyme's-hit with unmatched precision
Shootin' you down from a lyrical sniper's masked position
yeah..this was decent..I liked the way it flowed..it wasnt really creative but I liked it
You'll wish you never accepted, when this duel-came-by
After you lose to an emcee smarter than neural-AI
eh..this was okay...good vocab in this
Right now you're happy like you just bought some new chromium
But I'll blow your wheels off like a barrel of plutonium
This bar was gay as hell..thats all Im saying
Immaculate lyrics, that's what the past voters-chose
For winner, your harder to "pick" than a broken-nose
This is the best punch you've used so far in your verse..props on this one
You need to leave RB, your not fit to fight or battle
No one "buys you", like Macca's seventy-five cent apples
..:wtf: @ this punch
Like an angle, I can elevate to many degrees
But you stay acute while I bring a "revolution" of cheese*
..you had a good set up..it was going well..until I seen the word cheese..wtf does cheese do with anything in this verse?..you fucked up a start to a good punch
Lost in his own world... Luminary lives in a nation of loss
But how can you be normal when the Terminator's your boss?*
eh..this punch was aight..Arnold jokes are old now..he's been in office for a while..and from what I hear he's not too bad..so weak punch
*I went to Australia when i was very young... meaning "going under"... in his case, I flipped it to mean "becoming wack"
* New spy kids movie is in 3D
* Since I'm personifying myself as an angle, a "revolution" is the highest level an angle can reach... meaning im the dopest.. lol
* He lives in California, Arnie is his boss.. lol
Explaining your punche3s is gay..this is going against ypu
Lum's verse
Undefeated,
Until now ya Flipped Concepts are been Exposed like ya Music..
Kid Lives N Dies by the Mic,But before He Cud Evem Use it..
set up was weak..but you redeemed youself in the actual punch..
Spit Sum New Shit Wanksta,Define the Fact that U Never been Dropped..(7-0)
Cuz If ya Verse was Key To Success Sumone Must Changed the Locks..
your stretched lines sucks tranny dick..but..like the last bar..this bar was decent..I liked the changed locks line..made me grin<--no..not really..
My Mic Contains the Pot,No Wonder im Blazin Herbs that Consider them Mc's..
Wanksta 13, But says hes not.Instead he Considers Himself a Vet Evidentlly..
Decent personal..not too great..not too bad..
I Wont Leave Till Theres a Stain on ya Rec,Cuz Ya Hardly Even Impress me..
Fuk it Kid Ill Be Glad To Verbally Murder Ya..An Have Desert Holes Rest-in-Peace..
..weak bar/punch..the worst yet to come..and once again..your lines suck a dog's tranny dick
He can Spit Subliminal,Rather then Fite..Even Throw Words in Court..
So When Desert sees X,Its a Running Situation Like Third and Short..
..this was cool..once again..not too great..but also not too bad either..atleast this line isnt giving oral
Just Brush up fast bitch, Cuz ya Scrips Only get takin out Wit the Trash Kid..
An Watch me Abuse U Wit my Keys, like Taught in ya Self Defense Classes..
wow!!..the best punch in your verse..this was really creative and I liked it
^Sum Wont Get that,My Bars Are more Siccer Then ya Moms Streched Marks..
Wich Leads me To the Next Part..''Schoolin'' This Kid Before the Test Starts
blah blah..okay punch..but the previous punch had already won you the battle..so congratulations..