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This 'theory' is based on fiction, cuz this battle is as fake as magicians,
Your text be like school lectures, it gets payed of no attention, You must not realize ya' faced off against fatal collisions,
Bout to get 'fucked' up early like a Christians Traditions, (christians aren't suppose to fuq before marriage)
Caught you 'central' targeted off the arsenal, survive this 'play' I'd say "Mission-Impossible",
How I take lands, you can say I 'ruin' it, cuz to call it 'kaos' would certainly over do it,
Blind Spit it, audience wouldn't feal the way you flow if they bit it,
Emits da' desctruction to end it, still couldn't get that shit thru to me if yu sent it,
Its woth nothin', it'd cost ya' life if you betted and spent it,
nice shit man ill vote on this battle when he drops
good shit bombs u got heat
pee pmy battle wit carson its a close one i came heated.
pc its tied 4-4..
late ill be abck
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Bombz..we do have a battle going on in frontlines..I'm waiting on you to drop your verse..
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Fuck Trying Keno Cards.. Or Casino Bars.. Accepting This Was Tha Gamble
Bitch I'll Tha Pin Off You.. And Blow This Plastic Grenade Apart In Shambles
Prolly Gets On Stage..And Tomatoes Thrown At His Face Till He Spits Ketchup
Dead Cunt. Could Under Hand Four Leaf Clovers At You. Still Wouldnt Catch Luck
He Sticks To What He Knows. A Herbavore. Bombz Is 100 Percent Wittless
Nineteen Actual Battles.. Rest Just A Leaf Of A Tree.. Herbs.. Its Ridiculous
Bombz Battling Kaos? Its A Cold Way Down.. Just Like Ice Skating Up Hill
Chill.. I Think You Okay.. But You Could Elevate.. Wait.. Not Enough Skill
Chance To Shine? This Dud Could Be Beaten In An Audio By A Pantamime
Last Line.. I'll Describe Him.. His Elevations Like His Crew.. Tha Level Of A Land Mine
^^^^ 2nd Line..... Its Suppose To Say....>> Pull Tha Pin<<
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this was a pretty weak battle, both of you came really strong with the concepts but your wordplay let both verses down a lot. i propbably would have to vote for bombz because his punches to me stood out more, an just seemed to hit that lil bit harder!!!
nice battle peeps
peace
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Hmm close battle, i'll break it down with my opinion...
Punches = Even, this was very close so i called it even, both came hard with good punches, punches from both cats hit hard
Flow = Kaos, i think some of Bombz lines were stretched, which resulted in less flow,a nd how he used It as a rhyming word in 4 bars
Personals = Kaos, Bombz verse lacked personals, Kaos only just had a few to take this category...
Creativity = Kaos, some of Bombz lines were played, Kaos had quite a fe creative punches i had not seen in the past, thats why kaos got this
Structure = Kaos, some of Bombz bars were stretched...
Overall both evrses were pretty good, but i think Kaos edged the win with better structure, flow, personals and more original punches...
My Vote = Kaos Theory
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Kaos takes this for harder punches and better personals...
(that "pin" line was tight)
Bombz came real light on the punches and had a scattered format that fucked up his flow.
Nice vocab, yeah...
Decent metas, ok...
But the actual punches were very weak.
Kaos threw together a good verse but it had way too much filler in it.
Still, the punches were effective, and by effective I mean demeaning, insulting.
Sorry to explain, just wanna make sure peeps understand my vote.
Kaos wins.
Holla back...
Born vs. Blak
Thanks for tha vote.....i think that first one was a lil wack but
...uppin#3
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Kaos theory wuz better...
Bombz Battling Kaos? Its A Cold Way Down.. Just Like Ice Skating Up Hill
nice shit..
vote on this, please, only one person voted and its been 2 days since it has been done
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...42#post1046442