doc_knock vs. 730

aight, heres the rules

15-20 lines, he spits first, an hour each

one hour from check in that is

100 charrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr racters...................................

Hey doc what happened to us battlin' ?


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cant freepost in here...


nonetheless, i posted in bitchslap and you didnt respond, k now no more freeposting

^^you could've p.m'd him with that, didn't need to come in here ya cloggin playa........but what's with this whole site and the 1hour thing...lol...oh well, yeah this my checkin......

k i got a prob...my net is shutting off, itll have to wait...my fault, sorry

.....hope you can give me an extension, lets just postpone it

This battle's done with, cuz when i'm thru w/ him he'll need pention
as i Knock docs ass, into a whole different time dimension
here's a question?, are u playin or are u truly this lame?
cuz dude stays underscores anywhere, N i ain't talkin bout his name
this's a game for me, cuz the first few bars'll be as funny
as i show this Doc what's up.......like a fuckin Bugs bunny
Listen Hunny, you'll get stuffed like pennies under a couch
while ya angry flow gets trash canned, like oscar the grouch
i'll bust ya in tha mouth, let my juices flow right through
ya eyes, nose, mouth, stomach, chest and even ass too
i'll blast you, till ya layin stomach up on the floor
but...
you've been fucked so much it's like you've already been there before
You're losin this whore, N this win i'm takin it slick
while i'll beat this kid sloppy, like he does to his dick
stompin this chick, slut you'll get the worse of these shots
cuz Doc just slams against a wall, when he thinks he's hard knocks

id be scared of the seven, if there was reason to be
half your shit didnt make sense, might as well have said "tweedledee"
and if ima need a pension, let me fuckin explain why
ima retire on all my sales, while you stand idly by
your rhyme aint ill, you're just a fuckin joke
and shit i should know, its my profession to diagnose
i may be bugs bunny, but you're porky pig, bitch
cuz you stumble through your rhyme, whole body in a twitch
pennies under a couch? thats fine, good to me
cuz i guess you didnt realize we were talkin your salary
my flow is like a river, and your style is "choke"
i could come up with more shit if 1000 blunts i had smoked
you the spit the same shit as everyone else on RB
bring somethin new, and i might give an s-h-i-t
just one more thing to say before i off this cat
fuck you muthafucka, and god damnit thats that

uppin one...so soon after i posted...but ignore the one hour rule, we both posted late, so hell, just vote now

uppin 2...cmon people lets see some votes............................................. .................................................. .................................

aiight im feelin my man 730 hiw sord play was nice and he was spittin tko punches left and right.
"as I show this Doc what's up like Bugs Bunny"...nice
Doc you need to elevate man, I felt like you got yass whipped and asked the bully why he did it.You need to come harder.
Vote-730.

uppin 3...votes! close this damn thing.

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Punches: 730
Wordplay: 730
Flow: Doc
Structure: Doc

It's close, but I gotta go with the Doc.

Yo let's get some votes on my battles with nam 206 and jgoodz

I know your vote didn't count because you can't poll yet, but if you did vote, it would have been disqualified. Please see this thread on what makes a valid vote.
-strobe

Oh my fault, that's nam 208.
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