Re: The Shelter (Freestyle)
I stay off the hook, like a bridge and the chorus//
Evergreen state, wild life, I live in the forest//
My flow is just right, like the bitch and the porridge//
These bitches better shape up, like tits in a corset//
I'm the king, that play pawns and any rook alike//
Juice like Bishop, so I roll with a queen or her lookalike//
Knight time, my time, grind time, prime time//
I'm flyin', skyline, where you might find, my kind//
My prime, is like the universes deepest//
Bitch, it hasn't been reached yet//
No secret, no one messin' with my flow//
While you stay out of place, like the letters in typos//
Re: The Shelter (Freestyle)
^dope
I cut throats, I'll cut through, your neck to get respect.
Never disrespect the next to be raps first elect.
The first of vets, to put the worse in hearses, while I'm spittin' these verses best.
These new age perps are shit, I'll be the third to hurt ya chest.
Words the best, I'm nervous, yes.
But I spit legit lyrics that idiots can't win even if they wanted it.
Burst your vest, put welts from your shoulders abreast.
Nest in your ears for years, I'm shitting on your lyrics.
Re: The Shelter (Freestyle)
^dope
I cut throats, I'll cut through, your neck to get respect.
Never disrespect the next to be raps first elect.
The first of vets, to put the worse in hearses, while I'm spittin' these verses best.
These new age perps are shit, I'll be the third to hurt ya chest.
Words the best, I'm nervous, yes.
But I spit legit lyrics that idiots can't win even if they wanted it.
Burst your vest, put welts from your shoulders abreast.
Nest in your ears for years, I'm shitting on your lyrics.
Re: The Shelter (Freestyle)
Road one, is long and hard, sounds like a dirty joke
But its a fight for each yard, dreading the report card
That will tell me i made it into a private school
Trying to blow up without fuel, not plausible, its a rule
If I get in I got to go do what I got to do
But for now on to road 2
I could kick it here, smoke a spliff and drink beer
Fuck a career, but then my parents I overhear
Gotta kick his ass out, Im a failure beyond any doubt
So now the decision is mine
its like tryna score without seeing the goal line
This is fucked someone send me a sign
Re: The Shelter (Freestyle)
I'm facing opposition like even in my own mirror
All the dough in the world didn't make it any dearer
In a nut shell it aint all its cracked to be
I succeed to fail and everyone's mad at me
Vicious cycle has me spinning around like Kenmore
Hooked on drugs now they say I coulda been more
Stress has me folding and the criticism follows
No throat big enough for the pride he swallows
Too much pressure has me left facing a weapon
Ultimate release now suicide he threatens
Sad predictibal tail, but its the nature of the beast
The best end up shot, suicidal, or druggies at the least
Re: The Shelter (Freestyle)
Simply put, I set the record straight, I'm not misunderstood,
I take Louisville Sluggers to both headlights like Carrie Underwood
Pop Lines, but don't pop pills,
Energized power, like im windmills,
Too many women, not enough hoes,
Don't step on my J's, or tep on my toes,
MVP status, everybody knows,
Call me #1, I'm hittin up Derrick Rose.
Re: The Shelter (Freestyle)
Making a claim to fame, with no money to his name
hes struggling to stay sane, hes no match for K-sane
Shits going down and hes gonna be dropped
So to win someone elses style he copped
And now everyones looking at him like wheres that from?
no one says anything, its quiet, apart from the drum
And then there like shit thats jins line, fuck your dumb
So they toss him to the curb, like a bum
and he proceeds to run back to his mum
while he cries and sucks his thumb
Re: The Shelter (Freestyle)
Flow is deadly, lyrical killing spree//
Big Pun died and now his spirit's instilled in me//
Never bothered with conventional script//
This is potential, turned to monumental, watch how high this pedestal gets//
Me and you ain't the same, there's an incredible drift//
I'm better in all stats, down to the decimal, bitch//
No battles, all that bullshit and dramas old//
Cause writers's block is what everyone seems to get, like the common cold//
Truth be told, and I'm the only one who tells it//
Ya verse is like ya virgin dick, you're the only one who felt it//
Melt tricks, like heat-induced hallucinations//
So, when you say ya ill, there's never been a truer statement//
You should face it, I'm levels above ya weak flows//
Beat the game on all pro, without the cheat codes//
I'm suited for this business, ya more like street clothes//
So if we battle for bread, bet against yaself like Pete Rose//
Re: The Shelter (Freestyle)
Completely hated, degraded, labeled a waste of space, that's//
Unable to face this, nothin' I can say can change this//
Forsaken and tainted, potential wasted so blatant//
Scared of success and failure, so I stay waitin', complacent//
Faithless in my direction, namelessness, my protection//
Patients is why I question my aim and then my discretion//
Friends and foes alike, I'm alone in this hell//
So, alone I will dwell, prone to go in this shell//
Once eager to grow in excel//
Now, into lonely moments I delve, stressin' and no one'll help//
I try to hide the pain, but then this pressure warps it//
All of my pleasure's frozen in time, like cryogenic corpses//
My metamorphosis from happy go lucky, to sadness abruptly//
Goddamnit, it's ugly, it's left me to panic with nothing//
But while this whirls through my head, like the wind in the desert//
I just hopin' I'm still alive when this gets better//
Re: The Shelter (Freestyle)
Your mom must've been beaten when you were a kid, prick..
Mad talk about abusing women, i'll smack you with my dick till you're lipless..
Throw a fit, bitch.. Creational damage ain't shit, kid..
If i saw you, i'd throw your pervert ass in a pit with your neck slit
I might be impressed about your battle record '47-7..
If all the kids you stepped against didn't just turn eleven..
* for dude above calderon lol.. no beef
Re: The Shelter (Freestyle)
Havoc give it a rest, like a tired dog on a walk
This a freestyle thread so just quit your talk
"No beef" is right, just show you can flow freely
One time we can be chill, do this thing ideally
So just do like me- take a topic and go
Don't worry about my life- just be a bro
Re: The Shelter (Freestyle)
I've lived with minimal conditions, all that's dependable's missin'//
Where young kids are facin' bids with pitiful convictions//
Crackheads and alcoholics, all with critical addictions//
Descriptions miserable, envision witnessin' this livin'//
Sniffin', flippin' or sittin' within a prison//
Gettin' desperate and trippin', quick to slip you within the system//
Bad move, when their intentions were different//
Everybody gets fucked, most stay buckin' conventional wisdom//
And this is all that you see, nothin' dramatically changes//
Insanity rages, leavin' families gradually wasted//
Lookin' for somewhere to hide, but they don't have any places//
Tryna live within this panicky plans that calamity stages//
Little children killed or savagely tainted//
Newscasters reportin' the news like the catastrophes faceless//
God damnit, we face it, and the saddest fact to face is//
This ain't new, this is simply what some assume an average day is//
Re: The Shelter (Freestyle)
who the fuck am i?
to rumble thunder and strike lightnin out the sky
just want a piece of pie
the american kind sugar coated just to cover the lies
im smothered with my
utterly dysfunctional abundance of rhymes
uncover the crime
time stole our lives right out from under our eyes
i make love to the blind
like she cant see men so i pretend its my semen
not of the other three men
they paid me to fuck her so her trust was mistrusted to me
now disgusted
but i was born an american so breaking promises is nothing to me
Re: The Shelter (Freestyle)
Re: The Shelter (Freestyle)
N0BLE Listen, If your gonna rap please make some sense
No one gives a fuck if you want a piece of pie
Reading your shit making my brain feel ten times dense
Now fool give up rapping, cuz u is wack fool
You couldn't even rap at a rappin school
Now how do you feel?
I got caught cheating cuz I forgot I had your bitches heels
I feel bad cuz i just went 1 bitch down but fuck that im the
king of this town
Pictures you get no women, because you claimed you make love to the blind.
Its all you can get and believe I aint lieng
Enough with this shit, you are a damn tool
Arrogant about your shitty ass rhymes
My 6 year old sister can do better without having to re-write a rap ten thousand times.