Front Lines Chat

(Topic: the way society and the government changes people).
Life is fiction and I'm stressed with knots in my chest,
Streets stricken with poverty, I have no options left,
I'd rather be in prison than get shot to death,
Cops with vests, it's obvious that societies a mess,
No amount of counseling session can stop my depression,
Lots of tension on my mind so only god we can question,
Mothers dying from fatal injuries, date rapes and misery,
Every day is fatal, I guess you could say it is killing me,
I wake up with danger on my mind as I fatally decline,
The cracks in the streets breaking my spine,
Latinos without their green cards getting neglected,
Spit on, ripped up, killed and disrespected,
Falling off cliffs in your dreams then hitting the edges,
All because of ways the government treats the people,
Innocent kids getting jumped, then they shoot up schools,
You wonder why the rest see us as evil, sadistic, and lethal,
Growing up to kill and sticking your skin with the needle,
Life is not fair, we look to find a better way to get peaceful

Why do you ask for feedback?


Wordz isn't normally the type to actually give honest meaningful feedback, especially when you posted an OM piece in FL chat... but he did. And then you post the "finished" piece with the exact same bars that he gave you advice on. So why would people give you feedback if you don't even take it into consideration? That's a slap in the face man.

I put more detail into my bars

You're basically saying my "piece" is a piece of shit, thanks.

you didn't do anything to the bars you already wrote that I fed on is what he means.. if you ask for feedback but put the same thing up then don't expect anymore. I already have my 2 omhof so I could care less if you write well or not at this point.

Well thanks lol

Lmao Wordz be going off.

nahh, this is the second time I gave dude feedback on his request and he ignored it completely and just did whatever he wanted. Im not mad tho, I got my accomps chillin looking blinged out.

I didn't care if you gave me feedback or not.. I understood the advice but I wanted to do it my way

Then what's the point of asking for feed back hoe ?

Anyways.. Good battle ill

Lenox you fail, as usual, to see the point. If you disagree with the feeback that's fine. But you quoted his feedback, said "good point, I'll try that' and then you posted the bars up AGAIN and didn't change a single word in them. So you may as well have said "I appreciate the feedback but I disagree and will do it my way"


It's the same with everything on here. I'm sure every active member has you in their PMs asking for advise on a battle verse, or an OM piece. And you post the same stuff in every thread you can find asking for people to give you feedback and critique your work. Then when people cave in and do exactly that... you don't even take their advice to heart. You just keep doing the same shit and then post it up again asking for feedback again. Eventually nobody is going to feed your stuff. Nobody is even going to read it.

then fuck you ask for dude?? just put at the end of your drop that you don't care for the feedback.. I was going to tell you not to put up topical shit in FL as it has its own section for that.

Yep I messed up again I'm a failure as usual we lnow

And here's Lenox right on schedule.

Do something obnoxious
Get called on it
Go into self pity mode (your current step)
Go into apologetic mode (that will happen next)
Say you'll work on it or it won't happen again


Rinse and repeat