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die now a slow and painfull death die

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Originally Posted by Vert

Moe lemme in i did this same shit on diamond minds but of course com is only takin pros...so u might as well take me in

tryout:(topical)
There was a sheet that was dividing the hospital patients
Both had loving familys, both were about in their 80's
And everyday the man on the side of the window
would explain to the man on the other side, what was happining outside
He would tell him the kids were playing kick ball
the park was lit up by the sun, the flowers were blooming from fall
and the man on the otherside got lonely at nights
he only wanted to live to hear about the beautiful things outside
but then he heard the man chokin at night, and yellin from what he felt
he couldnt reach the buzzer, so he just yelled for help
so the man on the other side reached up to press the button
but then he realized, that if he died, he would be moved to the window
so he thought for a second, and pulled back his hand
and listened as he struggled for his life, then took his last breath
and the next day, they moved him, he was happy and all
but when he moved there, all he saw was an old brick wall

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sorry im not taken anymore members yet, try out some other day or week when i get my crew a forum. btw u should elevate in the mean time i wasnt feelin it that much.

:noob: :thumbup:

Now u messin wit a mad man,
44 glock in my hand man,
putcha ta sleep call me tha sandman,
butchu gotta undastand man,
i put a cap in yah leg so u cant stand man...
and if u keep tryin to run me,
its gon be a done deal,
u might as well lay in a casket wit tha top sealed,
cuz i show no respect for the unrespected,
ive been rejected,
pussy bitch keep runnin yah mouth,
u'll see yah life reflected,
a couple hours before yah graves erected,
it might be unexpected,
but i warned u once and now yah lifes been affected...

Wow, you all really suck.

u must be playin B

in fact if we suck so much...go on and spit summin...

ill c wut everyone says...thanx

realest, u need to elevate, u aint the level we need yet...keep at it and get at us in a little while...peace and thanx for tryin out

ok......

im in for a collab, aim- Stockadelikewhoa or mikejoneswho151

http://djjengaship.dmusic.com

http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthre...12#post1990812

too late for this shit oh well

too lazy to post twice trying to kill to birds with one stone
appears to me u gotta be in a krew to become known

peep the link *passes out on the couch*

topic...haters and us removing them from the game or somethin...

Look i could end it real fast,
yah rap career in da trash,
puttin me on blast,
i be like "sufferin suckestash!"
sylvesta tha cat, my gat'll give u whiplash,
everything u once was shatters like glass,
u now been threatned by Tha Killah,
run yah mouth again,
its gon be a one hit thrilla,
and i dont play games when it comes ta scrilla,
i protect myself im much reala,
u fucked up bad, get ready to run,
strap on yah FILA's...

you walk a road made of bones from fallen angels
retrace the steps to your birthplace the bermuda triangle
you body...danggles...from the tree...of sorrow
i looked into your future there's no hope for tommorrow
you walk a path that leads to hatred and betrayl
tryin to reach the stars in a jouney that you fail
unvail...you're a giant...contridiction
revolvin your life round myths and superstition
master in the dark prath
with satan's math and a witch staff
trapt in hell's grasp

----fuck that was D for of the top of my head...but now i gotta sit with a pen i will take on a rebuttal for whats there though

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