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I wanna see zones drop...I see some potential there, so drop 10 Zone

K cypha I'm gunna go read your open mic, sorry it took so long

ok K cyph, here are my thoughts

Pros: I thought your flow was really good. The multies were abundant and well used, and you did a good job overall expressing your point. Also throughout the whole thing I was thinkin "this actually could be a song if it rapped well". Overall really good

Cons: You did ramble a bit, and your verses were uneven. I know most of the people already said that, but I don't have too much else negative to say.

I don't know if you do audio (I don't) but if you do I think you should try to get a beat and record this, for fun if nothing else. I'm curious to see how it would turn out.

Not perfect, but a really good song overall. Nice stuff, your reppin us well

yo lyrical violaters wants to battle us.....anyone have any opinion on this?

i think this is a great idea, and since your lookin in to it i want you to frop the link that takes you to sign in, and put that link in here ok thanks late

yo stubby I'm talkin to my crew about battling yours, sorry I didnt put this in a pm but i only have a sec and this is quicker, I'll get back to you

Cooollllllll!!!! YAY we can finally have the crew established!!!

alright man, yeah i was bout to tell all the members, as well as my other leader (hoodless) that me and hoodless will be picking 1 of you to be on mine, and hoodless's team to battle against 3 of Alleyvate's members..to be the person, you simply got to be the first one to pm either me of Hoodless sayin that you want the position..its startin now lets hear some one

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=135593
ayo here's that link that we need to sign up
hit it up

ahahaahha, them peeps are a joke, ya im down, ive already beat playmo, mc merc couldnt even make it here. They need to call their crew comedy central

I Am Young Guy But My Money Old Like Pistol Pete/and I Get More Ass Than Any Kind Of Bus Seat

My Flow Sick But I Dont Need No Doctor/ And I Am Getting More Cake Than Betty Crocker/

My Nine Give Niggas A Perment Tan/ And I Got More Green On Me Than The Luckys Charms Man/

I Put Girls In A Daze And Trance/ And I Am A Showoff Like Terrell Ownes Tochdown Dance/

I Dont Drink But I Buy Hypnoqtio And Rum/and I Get More Mouth Action Than Any Brand Of Gum/

Niggas Run Their Mouth In Up With Ni Teeth/ And My Burner My Them Sweat Like There First Name Was Keith/

here's my tryout

you want some new memebers, so why me?/
cuz i can spit verbal attacks like bill o'reilly/
i'm the voice for the people but i'm not al sharpton/
go against me you wind up on a milk carton/
my rhymes can be hardcore or political/
it's pitiful/
to see mc's wit only one dimension/
to me the Mic is the greatest invention/
it gives me a chance to express my visions and views/
when i think about greatness i envision who?/
I envision me, on a stage wit my crew/
so stop what u doin and listen/
i fit the position/
to be cerebral magaician/

aight thanks for the tryout...we'll consider it
just a word of advice tho, work on ur structure, keep ur lines even
we'll get back to u on our decision

and...lyrical violaters are garbage guys

and thats my style. i'm not the generic net rapper. i aint gonna change so if u want me in your crew you better get used to it.
Peace

boooooo yah!!!!!! *hugs nikkelz while jumping up and down screaming*