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Oooooooh child things are gonna get easier.
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Originally Posted by
Lenox
Can't give my entitled opinion, I don't really know what happened, sounds crazy though.
None needed it was gay and weak on my part l.e won regardless
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Originally Posted by
Stranger
Oooooooh child things are gonna get easier.
Lol way to lighten things up in this bitch
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Oooooooh child things are gonna get brighter.
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Originally Posted by
Stranger
Oooooooh child things are gonna get brighter.
Lol sup stranger
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Not much. Pissed that my coffee machine broke. Hungry but my roommates took the car to work. The struggle is real.
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Originally Posted by
Nicasso
email shall be sent and confirmed shortly
Who are u on rr?
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Quickly losing the meaning of hope and the feelings I've wrote,
Pieces of me have broke, should I just put the guillotine to my throat?
Floating down the sea of hope but in my dreams demons have awoke,
Death awaits at heavens gates, I'm in devils grace,
Not getting accepted just from expressions on my face, This is the ending days,
Remembering my best friends, my memory is a precious place,
Gotta take control of my life but touching souls is like a roll of the dice,
Over throwing my goals in an on going price, am I the only one who knows I'm nice?
Cause I get depressed after a tragedy like a soldiers wife,
In life you take a right but i might take a left,
Suicidal so I keep the gun under my bed put it right to my head and ignite the lead,
I used to fight but I'd rather take my life instead
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Originally Posted by
Lenox
(Note- I'm not quoting that gay shit you wrote)
This isn't open mic. What's wrong with you? This isn't a hypothetical question either, it's one that immediately demands an answer.
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Originally Posted by
Detective Staniel Mortimer
This isn't open mic. What's wrong with you? This isn't a hypothetical question either, it's one that immediately demands an answer.
Cool.
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Originally Posted by
Lenox
Cool.
No, you prostitot. That is not how it works. When a Detective asks you a question you answer.
And now I know your problem- you can not comprehend the English Language.
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Originally Posted by
Lenox
Quickly losing the meaning of hope and the feelings I've wrote,
Pieces of me have broke, should I just put the guillotine to my throat?
Floating down the sea of hope but in my dreams demons have awoke,
Death awaits at heavens gates, I'm in devils grace,
Not getting accepted just from expressions on my face, This is the ending days,
Remembering my best friends, my memory is a precious place,
Gotta take control of my life but touching souls is like a roll of the dice,
Over throwing my goals in an on going price, am I the only one who knows I'm nice?
Cause I get depressed after a tragedy like a soldiers wife,
In life you take a right but i might take a left,
Suicidal so I keep the gun under my bed put it right to my head and ignite the lead,
I used to fight but I'd rather take my life instead
I don't like that you only rhymed three lines in the beginning and then changed your rhyme scheme. Finish the bar before you switch it up or it throws it off. Wording needs a little polishing and you need to actually flow through a storyline. It's almost like you write summaries instead of actually storytelling. It's weird and has no depth. You'll get it though.
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Originally Posted by
Stranger
I don't like that you only rhymed three lines in the beginning and then changed your rhyme scheme. Finish the bar before you switch it up or it throws it off. Wording needs a little polishing and you need to actually flow through a storyline. It's almost like you write summaries instead of actually storytelling. It's weird and has no depth. You'll get it though.
You are my only negative feedbacker, congrats. Lol nah ya I'm scratching the collab with Nicasso I don't like the topic
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And btw you're exactly right about the summary part.. I do summaries unless I'm doing stories or plots
@Stranger