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that was pretty good was kept on topic and flowed pretty nice..
iight
As I told you before im Lyrically Inclined
and you know im in front while u r Lyrically Behind
you think you got talent? then u must have not seen mine
and you wanna know my views on the youth
its like when i get pissed and start murdering the booth
now ima have to sit and shit on you like a Pigeon in its coup
remember your sig its ''Killa be killed''
and in this situation its have skill or get skilled..(JOOK$)
read my link in my sig...tell me too elevate
man fuck that you supposed to drop in here when you do this shit and JOOKZ post your next topic so i can get it done
oh my fault homie i forgot the topic my bad..
n/t Diss Brandon for the free posting
Jookz u had some good rhymes but the pigeon shit was abit crap!
YO! Rock ur body mic check 1,2 Brandoms coming but hes not ready for you's!
He's so wack he be wishing he wa black!
Jookz so fooked he be forgettin the topic............the prick!
Brandon he so dumb he be forgetin about his Mum.....the black and white nun!!
He's only 2 he probable roles in his own poo!
Brandon takes right after his mum, ........
right after I've given her a black and white bum!
Cos i smak his ass too....wOOOOOO :hump:
Next topic.......MJ didnt have sex with those boys.....he made love to them
that was fucken horrible...
aw man i think its time to open the Neverland gates
cuz his rhymes so gay, it makes MJ seem straight
u have no rhythm, the time u do is in the bed u n MJ be sharin
wizzy the only hood u in is the one that ur wearin
you know how i can tell that ur gay cizzy?
u said u'd smack brandons ass, now thats fishy
easy faggot u dont want nothin with Poetic
next time if u gonna type a flow, make sure u spell check and correct it...
suttin quik, didnt like da topic much its played out, and cizzy u need elevation, here let me help u *loads clip*....*BANG!*
that was iight but u need to rhyme better and un more wordplay
fuck a topic
jusdiss sucks dicks, fuck it he suck shit
u talk all that but u prolly wouldnt bust shit
u couldnt see none of these dudes on rapbattles
ill hit u in ya chest then make sure ya backrattles
cus im comin wit puonds and round tucked in suitcases
yo man runnin lips so i leave u faceless
throw u in my basement, u gon die bitch face it
bring guns outand garunteed u gon taste it
that was iight but a lil to basic.. you need to up ya wordplay and better punches
WOW does this Lyricist need elevation
beating you to death how could I suceed the temptation
ya not Hood or Lyrical so how could u knock me out
you stiffin like wood and go hysterical when shots come out
I will burn ya face the rap taste
will turn ya waist for real.. naw for fake
well im through this verse is sticky like biscuit batter
im on the top u missed the ladder u skinny my raps r phatter..(JOOK$)
n/t ur last day of high school
ehhhhhhh it was kinda corney for real no real vocab i mean i seen one or two words that was counted as a vocab but the rest was very simple and oh yeah out and out dont rhyme they the same word
todays the last day of high school...im bout to my diploma
i look around and see all the ppl and start to get a lil stage phobia
im sweatin like crazy walkin out from behind the curtins
i try to see everyone naked..................but it aint workin
i wont even lie im scared as fuck not sure about this whole thing
they call me up to do the valadictorian speach but i wanna sing
i cant do this so i run away never to go back to this place
then i feel a strange pain right above my waist...i cant take
i hear the teachers talk amoungst them-self sayin they cant see me
but i wake up from this dream and then put on my cap and be seated
next topic = what you would do if your girl got shot
Wicka wicka freestyler, chamone check check that cone oWWWW! (Ive still got it)
Biggledy boggledy me not got a little hickery dickery wibbledy wobbledy cock !! Na mean?
Anyway homes how the fuck can i be white i dont evan exist :noor:
(God bless america, keep shootin each other up brAAAAAAAAAAT, ya get mi?)
I can't even leave feedback to that.
your verse aint even a verse at all, ya words are soft
and your flow aint comin unless you jerked it off
and i know your runnin when i come in to work you all
tall skill level so when i melt you, your hurt from the fall
all of you are worse than me in real life with real mics
because i know if you were really ill you'd be off this kid's site
topic: rapverse.com
iight that was pretty good. it could of been a lil longer though.the wordplay was iight and the punches were pretty good.
look at my bank it look like a cash complex
like giraffs my tecs got long necks
Cash cant mack cuz Wizzy's the wrong sex
how you cant leave feedback
ill break u like a pen and ur brain'll bleed black
ya flow aint dope u cant even exceed crack
why u want us to diss rapverse
before u come here be sure ur strapped first
but weather my rap is hot or wack this is nothing
online why be stunting when half of ur complex is fronting
and ya hand is the only thing u fucking
watch out cuz cruches the only thing u'll be clutching...(JOOK$)
n/t diss me
:( i think u all missed the point to my post. Let me guess ur american, work at Walmart, think ur a G UNIT! and love taking things seriously and probly always have that macho look on ur face???
(And no it didnt rhyme i need to elevate and i had no punches but who cares its just abit of a laugh) :ROFL: <--------see
Good rhymes you got that good multis n shit, i like,
but seriously what kinda name is jook$ lol
what the hell kinda name is jooks, it makes me laugh im cryin',
coz when he try to punch me you hit yourself in the groin'.
this guy is a wigger more whiter than a vanilla milkshake.*
jerkin' on his finger and hes thinks he can masterbate,
but While you trying to flow, and make your shit rhyme,
fuck your so retarded he evin lost to a illitrate mime.
this pussy thinks that he can rap, but then he woke from that nightmare,
this guys just like vanilla ice, minus the white hair,
while im finished you still dont hav enough time,
come neer me and yall step on a lyricle landmines.
:( its 3 in mornoing dunno what im wrighting right now lol, hard to concentrate lol
oops next topic//// you jus got a sexchange
:) lol