Inactive...

i was born in a womb that wanted for me to become
an educated man, cuz its rare where i come from
but to my eyes, i realized that that i could not achieve this
because in my life, i am deprived, so i'm a misfit
i was raised and razed cause of my ethnics and color
my papa was a childish fool, couldn't get any dumber
for me to summarize i was raised like garbage
here presently, i dont give a fuck what the law is
i realize that the worlds ignorance will destroy me
i'm a hustler, so they label me evil and deploy me
2 the pen, the devils den, now i'll neva hustle again
i lie to myself, cuz weed is my one and only true friend
no one will understand i'm the only brown tiger
in a pack of siberians, i'm the only fighter
i struggle cause i cant live life this way, so i die,hey
it aint that bad cuz they din't listen to what i said

I spit sick lyrics
you could say i`m sick with it
but seriously.. i`m sick when i spit
an when i get to spit sick i`m it
cos no one spits sick like illtalic.

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Everyone there is a new crew member...check out the roster on page 2 and tell me what you think.

YES YES YES YES i love it great great job man, you are definately in bro, i dont see really anything that needs work on except uppin your vocab but that will be easy to fix, i will be PM'ing you shortly Mc Merc to ask you a question about the crew

if you are serious illtalic then i think that we could really use you in our crew but im not sure if your seriuos or not

this is my audition, fuck these herbs
The only way they could play with words
Is if you write down my lyrics and rearrange the verbs
I’m like the atmosphere you lot would be fucked if I wasn’t here
fake your death like piers morgan
fuck it, i kill you fore real and go e bay and auction each one of your organs
We all starving artists
And I’m starving the hardest
And if your are artist who aint starving then your fucking retarded
And if you don’t believe me I leave you fucking martyred
You’ll never amount to nothing like newborn baby dead in a grave
Thinking you got freedom of speech; you’re a record producer’s slave

this a self glorification cypher i did earlier today

I win rap battles with lyrical precision
Your chances of beating me are smaller than a Chinese’s mans scope of vision
I got more dope lines than a Colombians birthday party
i could post here a 100 times and only only convey the truth partly
I stop more weak flows than heart attacks
Call me Dwaine chambers because I own tracks
More straight A’s than an amnesiac reciting the alphabet
I don’t aspire to greatness I look down on it
Idle and the mic, the best combination since gin and tonic
I’ll rip your throat out and tell you to speak louder
Idle is so far ahead he gets end of the world nostalgia
I’m so evil the earth spins to get away from me
Idle lyrics are timeless like Santa clause and gravity

idle, reply safe

Damn we are gettin some really good drops in here, i once again liked this one, i think that we just need to work on shortenin some lines, and direct what your aimin for a little more and you will be good, my vote your in

hey STUBB here is one with i better flow

Were the fuck you got the idea of Phil Jackson
Don’t understand how you got that in ya rappin
I state clearly, my rhymes all articulated
Get out of the Chyper, room all accommodated
Thinking your a flyweight, no plausible rhymes
Typing your Chyper, dealing your hard times
Times to remove this idiot by purge
Never got what you wanted, sexual urge
Nobody here, your in this battle exclusively
Time to end this, Terminate you conclusively

not very long but i think the Vocab and the flow is good, i think the rhythm is ok, what do you think STUBB?

^ is he gunning me, hahahahaha
you obviously have problems coming up with lyrics if you are reusing your sig
please just don't
i just noticed the structure in mine was all fucked up, didn't know who to aim at/what to rap about coz it was a audition

pm me on hoodless's opinion

safe

Aright this is my shit.. im not good at all but i'll test..
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Rippar, what kind of name is that, did you write it at night?
Are you some kind of blind bitch? Or cant u spell Ripper right?
Yeah, i accepted your battle invite, man this wont be a long fight
You think Wayne Rooney is good? Hes just a 18 year old fag
I cut you twice, tie you up and put you in a paper bag
Man, with your style you wont live for long
Under your big hiphop pants your wearin thong
Your rap career might go better in hong kong
Cuz over there, they wont understand shit of ur "song"
Ah man now your crying, you want me to go get a towel
If this was a basket ball game, your whole verse had been a foul

ayo y yall dissin each other if we all gone be in the same crew

i can see that you got everything needed man, but i agree with intense man we dont need to be dissin each other yo, but definatley you got my vote in i will talk to you later on what i think you need to work on

who??

mm hmmm :thumbup:

yo, i'm a have my 1st open mic posted around 11pm tonight... y'all otta come check it out later! i'll eventually have a link to it in my sig..