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Originally Posted by Lenox

I sense sarcasm or am I wrong?

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wrong he was talking about kid sick posting. and looking at his sig.. them asses though bro!

Lenox bro... you're killing me.

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Originally Posted by Dominator.

I was 15 one this site too, when there were much worse "trolls" than me. Nobody defended me I was wack I took the shit talk like a champ kept working on it and went 49-0. If you can't stand up for yourself online you'll never amount to anything is real life

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This guy is a legend... of a false sense of accomplishment.

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Originally Posted by Rilla

This guy is a legend... of a false sense of accomplishment.

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Sense of accomplishment? Lay off the weed homie you complete misinterpreted my postm

Dominator check your pm.. You'll either like them or hate em.

oh that would've been a dope ass punch ima flip that shit

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Originally Posted by Rilla

This guy is a legend... of a false sense of accomplishment.

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I was talking about this

@Lenox Everybody starts from somewhere. You have to read battles and learn how to develop a punch. That first step will take you a long way. Learn about wordplay, double meanings, etc. Try not to be so basic and generic with your lines. A lot of times it seems like you're so focused on making words rhyme than throwing an actual punch. Instead, think of a concept and figure out the rhyme around that concept. But like any style of writing, reading a lot will help YOU improve. Read other battles, older LLL battles, etc.

You should then get the idea of what RB likes and what not.

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Originally Posted by kid sick,

@Lenox Everybody starts from somewhere. You have to read battles and learn how to develop a punch. That first step will take you a long way. Learn about wordplay, double meanings, etc. Try not to be so basic and generic with your lines. A lot of times it seems like you're so focused on making words rhyme than throwing an actual punch. Instead, think of a concept and figure out the rhyme around that concept. But like any style of writing, reading a lot will help YOU improve. Read other battles, older LLL battles, etc.

You should then get the idea of what RB likes and what not.

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Thanks man

C nt reply @Lenox it says you have too many you need to delete some

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Originally Posted by Dominator.

C nt reply @Lenox it says you have too many you need to delete some

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All set now.

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Originally Posted by Lenox

Thanks man

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my advice is.. don't try to battle the best, you just take limitless L's for no reason. Battle people around your level so ya'll can develop rivalries. I had a few way back when I started, losing to big names a few times didn't really do anything ground breaking for me other then give me another L. I also battled on multiple sites at ones but I don't recomend that until you understand how to develop a punchline.

Wordz ask dom.. I think I may of figured out on how to spit a punch

last I remember Dom was wack tho.

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Originally Posted by Lenox

Wordz ask dom.. I think I may of figured out on how to spit a punch

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This is why it seems like people "pick on you" a lot...

Wordz gave you a few pieces of really good advice, but instead of taking any of it you just immediately brush it off and assume you miraculously figured all the mechanics out just now.