@Unfukwitable
I'll have my verse tomorrow night brush
Been mad busy
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@Unfukwitable
I'll have my verse tomorrow night brush
Been mad busy
@OG Maestro
you have a pretty minimal grasp of bars
no offense
two words
slant rhyme
and lol @ u haul
nigga that bar had nothing to do w/ u haul trucks
I just u haulin
N
OMGZ U HAUL IS PLAYED DOE
Goddamn I see what gow talking about lmfao
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and nah nigga idgaf if u voted for me
that breakdown of smog's verse was just disrespectful considering that same verse would body anything uve dropped thusfar
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WTF@ CATS WHO CANT WORD SHIT, CRITIQING WORDING- Gow
ron u aint never lied
but im done. just had to air it out because that shit is becoming a trend.
:brains:
for the record. im fine w/ u outright saying u don't feel a bar
but nigga don't u EVVVVVVVVVER. I mean evvvvvvvvvvver
try to fucking give me a lesson when u have no clue wtf u talking about
"don't reach for a rhyme" nigga if it didn't rhyme I wouldn't have posted it , ur not infantry..catch a shot willingly
shells go in one ear and out the other because ur NOT listening.
I guarantee that rhymes. its not about whether the word WILLINGLY/ listening rhymes. its about what syllables you stress. heavy slant rhyme that I can show you countless examples of.
nigga im 10 minutes away from giving up a title shot just to give u a fucking lecture next week coz nigga u need it
Stop talkin bout votes. Yall going crazy this week. Talkin votes, breaking down verses before their opponents even posted up. Fucks wrong wit yall? We gonna have to start blind drops & votes again?
slant rhyming? *shoots myself in the head*
wasn't even slant... "ing" and ly" don't go together getcha ass back in spelling class lil nigga lmao
you act like this shit is the Da Vinci Code, bet money if Lenox dropped this same bar you'd say it was wackQuote:
i bet ur girl is eager to see u Haulin'. Smog- Your better than that.
coz u tell her ur goin to hit the road..n she hopes its the ONE time u never come back
GET 'EM OUT OF HERE lol
Good grief, I couldn't even see what the Hell was going on in this weak ass punch.Quote:
strap to your ride. windows collapse on the passenger side
Bro if you see Smog spraying on the block its a mosquito truck passing you by
Spraying the block? Mosquito truck? Must be a genius for that one, good God of Mighty
^^^^^^if you can spit this in a room full ah niggas and get a reaction. please tell me cause this shit bout weak as a muhhhhfuckaQuote:
u from NEW MEXICO? lol i bet during school trips u got molested by faggots
u got poked by a lil prick n not talkin bout that one time u fell on a cactus
Nigga go brush your teeth, that morning breathe got you talking that silly shit
lol I know deep down inside u like oh no here go this nigga again no muff nooooooooooo
but yo u know how I am I speak what I feel man. lol truth be told I felt a lil bit regret after because im spazzing on voters again. but ay I don't like when motherfuckers assume that condescending tone ...trying to teach when half the shit they talking about on some unenlightened shit anyway. but it is what it is.
ill try to chill.
U had a dope verse muff, cats just don't feel that style of pure personal.. My set ups played s huge factor tho.. This is wat they look for
Blah blah blah (maybe a tie in) blah blah njaj
Blah blah blah blah (concept) blah blah blah blah blah reference)
Fell me.. I def. had to key it tho with time limitations so it ain't completely polished but yo I lol'd at some them bars you dropped.. Good shit @ muff..
cactus was corny as hell ill give u that.
and I never said that hit the road line was complex. ur the one talking bout U haul is played when the shit has nothing to do w/ u haul trucks .
you know I could do that to your entire verse right? lmfao u string syllables together pretty terribly, and your concepts are not even in the least bit creative.
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come get this fucking lesson in the FL dude.
ur due one. @OG Maestro
and good looks @Smog
iight, it wasn't about U Haul, damn my bad. I was thinking maybe your basic personal had a bit more to it than just a statement. pardon me tho dawg
And I give you that, I know that my creativity been slacking
That's why I publicly made it a point, Em was getting filler and Knucks was getting No Show unfinished Nameplay bars
I'm just being strategic, you ain't seen me pen on some real shit yet my dude
btw Shot willingly
Not listening
if ur stressing the ING in listening then ur saying it wrong
I could record the shit. it sounds perfecto
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btw Shot willingly
Not listening
if ur stressing the ING in listening then ur saying it wrong
I could record the shit. it sounds perfecto
OK IM DONE!
yo killing spree make it a rule to not talk about peoples verses or votes. coz I cant help myself
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im extra touchy today.
THANK YOU bro, thank you so much
this is proof in the fuckin pudding right here.
WTF @ niggas saying "if you record the shit. it sounds perfecto" when it's about THEIR bars but if it's someone else the wording was off
Get this boy up out of here, dude said "ur saying it wrong"
WHERE I COME FROM lmaoooo, we say "listening." or " listenin' "
ole "I'm black cuz I listen to Wiz Khalifa" ass boy
"how's global warming real if there's still ice" backwards ass logic
16. im bout to set it up
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what what what what? first off
were talking rhymes! not concept/wording
you said the shit don't rhyme.. I dispute that fact. Heavy
the only time ill say the wording is off..is when the shit doesn't even soun like something a human would say...or the the concept is clunky in execution. its hard to describe because I have my own pet peeves.
lmao @ thinking u came to some absolute conclusion w/ that post. more evidence you have no idea wtf ur talking about
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I was going to record Shot willingly
Not Listening
just the four words. like 10x in a row.