Elevation Thread.

NT: Pussy niggas on this site that wont battle a cat cuz they think everybody is inferior or not worthy of a battle

if you hoes have to pass the chance to axe pricks your an axis
allies in the game of linguistic skills 12 gauge verbs blast this
BLAW!!
a cat you ain't, skanks full of pride need their pussy blown right
stretch ya chest feel the pin prick before you blow out of sight
when Jkwon got raped by rudolph makin santa go "Ho Ho!?"
get done quick and raw even though you demand to go slow
fuck you this is war and your my whore for now and i'll make you shyne
chuck the knife and fork i'll dissect you with my hands and then dine

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NT: Police corruption

that was nice wit the word play.. i liked it even though it was short.

why u so interested in police corruption
geeze please i dont need interuptions
or ur brain wont fully function with a disfunctions
ya rhymes r cheap they cost twenty five cent
run up to ya ride.. BEEP and leave ya side bent
the dramas over streets covered in SIL-LENCE
ya age is two plus four add 10 thats what i got in the clip
wit a crew of whores u cant stop this shit
im bulletproof u cant harm this
ya raps are smelly like arm pits
if i explode thats cuz im the BOMB bitch..(JOOK$)

n/t what should we do to wankstas?

jooks. it was okay but over-usage of same sylable and flow off a bit.

here is just a random diss not to anyone

fucking computer nerd, dont wanna hack with ya
i'll just keep in tack with ya
stole ur mamas acrua
wrecked it and sold it back to ah
ur just too far gone
but i wont cry
cuz u dont even know what label your on
ur just so high, check and i took your pawn
faggot sayin "keep it as fresh as my lawn"

yo im out...

Ok Word Play
Vocab was Also Good
Structure needs work.

Topic and Diss:

Thats funny how Jookz wants to get rid of Wanksta's dude//
First thing we need to do is fuckin get rid of you//
Its people like you that make RB weak, old, and played//
I'd just dump a wanksta's body in a dumpster okay//
Ever wanksta needs to have a bullet left in his skull//
Leave one in Jookz which means one down the rest to go//
Thats what we should do with all those wanksta's//
They dont know what it mean when I say I'm a playa//

Topic: Real Life.

aiight ya verse was decent but i feel u cud use betta vocab.


Topic: real life

wake up every day wit a chip on my shoulder
cause these pussy tenemants dont kno wen its over
on my ass like panties they really got me fucked
thinkin god will give me a joyful day dat hope is out of luck
the more i think about it the pain is killin me softly
feel life is over already im ready to die like biggie
let a mafucka fuck wit me aint no tellin wat'll happen
my mind aint where it use to b i'll probably start clappin
puttin holes in the whole hood then call it bloody river
been raised in these projects forgiveness here is hard to deliver
but ima keep goin and spittin my life every chance i get
fuck friends cause all the ones i had was about shit

next topic: doin an armed robbery

im gangsta... run up in lurnday mat with simi
murking mexcains, white poeples old lday until that bitch emtyp
but fuck it, i need some real cash... how about bank of america
called me niggaz look young ezzie fuck that white bitch go ahead and burry here
iim speeding thru traffic with simi automatic
knowing when i get there it going be havoc
run up to bank teller LOOK BITCH GIVE ME ALL THE LOT
security guard reach for pistol my nigga young ezzie strating shoot
fuck it... i got less then min when need hurry up
jump over cash register telling one of workers look BITCH FULL IT UP
fuck it we sournding, police got shit on lock
dawg im going out like ryder 1 hand on my pistol the other on my cock
straying spreying at police, swats, FBI, even the miliarty personell
nigga my arch game is sutip like Boize Wells, so im contacting on every shell
police yelling on MIC... LOOK WHAT DO YOU WANT
my path of destrucion got the bank crunk... I WANT HALLEY BERRY TO LET ME FUCK
OK we give you that jsut let every one go
foshow, drop the 44.
now im headed to motel 6 im fucking helly berry fo show

next topic:killing Geroge BUSH

that was pretty hott.nice flow it sometimes didnt rhym but its iight. it was a good lenght.


these cats talk about basic flows
when i cop the basic doe
sit back cuz ima turn this flow into a Matrix show
we fuck wit straight chicks the whores are left alone
u can never make this cuz my doe stretch longer then cordless telephones
im rowdy in person but on the mic i come wit that mellow tone
this aint gotta be a diss topic
but my wrist gliss wit dimond sockets
how could u not know ima rhyming phrophit
we spit out rockets while u throwing pistols
my clique is quick to get out a cock it and let out homing missles
this shit aint perfect im still elevating
Im dumb happy cuz I juss Killed Bush and thats y we celebrating

n/t how would the rap game be if Big L was still alive..RIP BIG L

good rhyme, better topic
I hope i can do it justice

fuck all the glamour and glitz he wasn't here to get rich,
Big L would be on the street, fuckin with yo bitch,
everytime he spits, makin minds do flips,
pitchin 300 bars and when its time for hits,
he'll body a mutha fucka just by movin his lips,
he would always be on top of his game,
on the top of the game, ain't no stoppin his fame
you could get brain just by droppin his name,
Flambouyant, the only word to describe,
one of the greatest rappers in the world,
way ahead of his time

-------BIG L------REST IN PEACE

n/t- When you first listened to hip hop

Yh, RIP BIG L,
that was good, apart from the last 3 lines didnt fit into the whole structure, apart from that it was good...nice topic so i'ma do that instead of dissin u

The first time i listened to hip hop
Was on the way to the fish and chip shop
I was with my cousin and he'd just bought 'My Name Is'
I thought it was cool how he swore and took the piss
Outta his dad for buying a 'porno mag to see his ass'
Cos it was the non explicit version
So then he put on a song by Erick Sermon
And said this is sum good shit but the stuff by Dre is betta
And since then i've listened to Eminem, and Dre's every letta

Easy E RIP

N/T Finding out you've got a disease

thought i needed to elevate but after readin these guys drops realized i dont..peace

after the doctor told me i thought to myself, how could it be?
then i looked up to the sky and asked, why me?
it wasnt expected as you can see
now the disease is apart of who I be
some things in life come with a fee....

now im in my car thinking about past events
and i say to myself it was my fault in a sense
now as i drive home im changed
now my life feels caged....

next topic, forgetting to put on deoderant

yo, yall need some real heat...........

yo

i sit back on a track, relax n speak easy
even when im knee deep in shit this a breasy
hand cuffed by the cops, rights they read me
i light spliffs, fights picked, or i mite get a DD
or because im speakin 16's with ease see
is you peeps wit me, against me, beneath me?
how tense the scene seems when enemys see me
beleive, all i can be is just greasy
he he, ha ha, consistant and nonstop
this spit consists of my shit that aint top notch,
the ones for the album are sealed like a lock box
untill the unlocked box opens up and spits hot shock
then comes the onslaught, yall got me all wrong
i do this for fun, verses done when its all gone
like feathers, ya all soft and evenutally fall off
im hot like a moltove & like sushi im all raw

hold on no can see this
u think we wants to read pre writs
like snack packs my raps pack flava
what is a Mac Tayla
let me speak u need to kill the noise
im so ILL around ya block all u hear is NOIS
u talk about bring real heat
i think u come from Memphis cuz u sound real Bleek..(JOOK$)


yall need to rate the person above u and help them out on what they r doing wrong if they r doing nething wrong...and u need to leave a topic..

n/t what would u do if u could read minds

the flow was kinda weak and all with the way you put it together but i got what you was trying to say you should work on structer a little bit your punches i really didnt see any maybe i just missed em keep workin on it though

at first i thought i was just hearin voices...but i can read minds
at times i get pissed off cuz they say they wish they had mine
i dont see whats so great about this ability...its reall kinda boring
cuz i hear everyones thoughts...and get angry about it the next morning
i cant let people know about this power i've obtained
they might look at me and call me crazy or just look at me strange
i fed up i've had just about all i can take....latly all i hear is hate
last thing i heard was great cuz a bitch was sayin she wants to masterbate


next topic = veiws on todays youth