Inactive...

yo i should be a soldier or higher i have 5 wins and im a flyeight and im still a gangsta

I vote for double Oh 7 to be in.....
BamBam your right you have 5 wins you should be a soldier, talk to DVSMIND so he can change it in the roster..

ight double oh 7 got my vote to den

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Originally Posted by .Artistic.

stop thinking your boss

And no sike u cant.

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im not thinking im boss you fucken idiot.

im just tryin to help but w/e mike your a fucken dumbass, whose way in over his head.

Im Out, take me off the roster.

Pz.

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Originally Posted by Marcus Aurelius

Mindz Kollide Cuhh...Nuff Said

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Allright man GFx member here now

yo do any body know how to put words on your posts

SPIT AS MANY BARS
AND WELL SIGN U UP FOR DA CREW :banghead:

Good bizzness for votin me ill check out yall battles and do sum votes 4 yall

Double Oh 7

Yo
Da New Crew Is On Da Block
To Hot To Da Touch
Dat Mean U Now Were Hot
Blazin Like A Scorching Forest Fire
When We Catch U
U'll Burn In Desire
Evacuate Now Cuz We Coming Through
We Need About A Million Fire Trucks
To Scorch Dis Crew

i've seen the battle all Industry and Dick Rides aint even the word fo it his last 4 lines were good but the 1st six wasn't you should've won but hey

Wats poppin crew

you guys battle the dynasty ever ?


if so i want in


check out my two keystyle battle in the sig

ill battle the leader to get in

yo i want in the crew...........do i spit in here

Whattup crew? oye do we have a sig maker in ere? LOL i need a sig so yeah if ya can,hook a brother up.. Also anyone looking to collab pm me or just post in here ~pz.1luv

wuz up crew??

what up

Whysguy I say your and and yeah 6'2 drop a verse here.....

ayo wats really good wit yall how yall holdin up...

Blah

Illusion, everyone has there opinion on whos in and such, Hes banned now anyway.

so ye...

everyone can voice there opinion

yeah i been out of town but i see that two bitches want to battles me so stop poppin off sayin what you gon do and lets battle it off ill take both of you bithes so how about yall get together on that deal yall some lame ass niggaz and after i beat you bitches dont think about battlin anybody else just dont come back to tha rap battles site .....im out this bitch.....GEORGIA-BOY :thefinger :nono: :thefinger :nono: :thefinger :nono:

yo can i hook up with this crew ?????
iv read all ya battles (and industry...you should have won )

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Originally Posted by ~nrgetik

Whattup crew? oye do we have a sig maker in ere? LOL i need a sig so yeah if ya can,hook a brother up.. Also anyone looking to collab pm me or just post in here ~pz.1luv

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i do bro but i aint all that at it yet but tell me wat u want on it n ill give it a go if ya dont like it jst dont sig it lol

llok at my posts!!!!....last night i had like 430 and today i have 827...shit is pimp tight......lol...i had my old name and this one combine.......its just pimp tight.....

wats poppin crew

why was he banned? lol

^:love:

get more posts before u start a crew...idiots.......

^^^^ lol ...werd!
but yo let him do his thing it could turn out good
play on niggaz!

KayOhh Yes if active.

The rest.. Nope.

you still need a partner for the topical tourney?

Yeah...I tried that too but I forgot my old name password....lol shit with that and this combined I'd have like 2,000

rofl theyve been here alot longer than u

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Originally Posted by lryrical genocide

The public, they just listens, brain dead and robotic
Its all Chaotic, the people don’t realize they’re all symbiotic
Even the church they worship has a capitalistic reason
They hate religious freedom, worshiping the physical demons
They preach about a god they don’t even believe in
CNN and FOX NEWS, feeding us their modified garbage
We don’t know real fear; we don’t see the real carnage
And then the Hispanics that the government loves to despise;
Even though we need them for the economy to rise
And then they say that terrorism and Islam are one in the same
But that’s bullshit, we are just looking for someone blame (scapegoat)
And now they’re putting the worlds greatest army to shame
the worst of it is that the children are blind like Hitler’s youth
mindless drones mass produced, kids unable to see the truth
Is America really how we dreamed it to be?
People grab onto a fake reality, nothing but animalistic stupidity (implied ignorance)
And saying GAY is suddenly spoken blasphemy?
You don’t have the right say it’s unholy when all you do is sin
Throw that shit in the bin, what? You think your better than them?
These are the things that we need to fix
Because we are sacrificing ourselves on our own crucifix ( secualr rhetoric here)
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Red are areas in which your word choice could have been thought out better. Diction was lacking due to this. Very fractured in parts, the first line has mistakes in it. Plural use of singular terms, words added that should not be there and such. Most of the red could have been reworded to make this read, flow and land better.

Green are areas in which your development and concepts could have used greater attention. The suggestions I left, are just equivelent to the concepts you went with in the drop, but on a higher level more influencial. They would impact the reader more, and are overall just are on a higher intellectual level. Your were way to blan and basic here, nothing spectacular, nothing complicated. Poeple leaving replies on your OM, with comments like spectacular and amazing, are just ignorant to writting for effect in general, they will only hold you back...

but then again ....... no

bleh.

I'm out guys, the crew isn't really running how I expected it to be, no hate.

Peace.

^^ I didn't check yours but I will now.

Just bcoz you said blah.

okay..Youll feel sorry :\

Biznatch :shoot:

okay..Youll feel sorry :\

Biznatch :shoot:

^^ I didn't check yours but I will now.

Just bcoz you said blah.or bleh

^^ I didn't check yours but I will now.

Just bcoz you said blah. *or bleh