LLL. Season 19 Chat

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Originally Posted by OG Maestro

A lyrical-battle-rap statement is when you write a bar that has no set-up or punchline, just a declaration.

"A.T. thinks he's rich, thinks he gets the big bucks
But he's poor and his shit sucks"

No word play, or word association, no punchline/clever joke involved, just me making a statement/declaration/remark.

This where Personals can make or break a bar like that.

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So anything that went over the readers head.

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Originally Posted by παmε

I was getting blow jobs when Odd Ways was kickin his mothers abdomen.

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Nah nigga you were focused on school n becoming a somebody !

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Originally Posted by A.T.

So anything that went over the readers head.

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That could be true.

Got ya

Thanks

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Originally Posted by A.T.

So anything that went over the readers head.

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No

I'd quote the perfect example but the battle is still open for speculation so I will not. Let's revisit this topic when the battles close, mmmkayyy?

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Originally Posted by A.T.

I have a general question. I'm not complaining about votes.

If everything that can be said is either a question or a statement, how can a bar be too statement-ish?
Lol

Just curious if someone can give me a logical answer.

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it's just a cop-out excuse tbh cats who can't write a punch reach for this every time

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Originally Posted by παmε

No

I'd quote the perfect example but the battle is still open for speculation so I will not. Let's revisit this topic when the battles close, mmmkayyy?

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Think about it, it could be true though.

If you read a punch with wordplay and miss the wordplay, it'll just look like an ungrammatical sentence/statement

could be true

did pherno really take his bar from an internet meme lmao

@Mimic

So you a HOT BOY now? Lmao, good drop dawg.

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Originally Posted by A.T.

I have a general question. I'm not complaining about votes.

If everything that can be said is either a question or a statement, how can a bar be too statement-ish?
Lol

Just curious if someone can give me a logical answer.

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When someone says too statement ish, in my experience I think it means it lacks indirectness and creativity in the wording. Step your formulation game up nigga.

Ps. Start voting you geeks. Odd vs wordz open. Don't make me start pm'ing niggas like frost doing. Lmao.

Outed. Ha

Yeah personals are only good w/ a twist or creativity. I can tell a bitch she ugly but it wouldnt be any different than what the next nigga would say. I wanna be remembered lol @A.T.

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Originally Posted by Wordz AhGod.

When someone says too statement ish, in my experience I think it means it lacks indirectness and creativity in the wording. Step your formulation game up nigga.

Ps. Start voting you geeks. Odd vs wordz open. Don't make me start pm'ing niggas like frost doing. Lmao.

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^^^^^don't believe this nigga

I asked Wordz to look at my verses and told him I was battling Witty and I wanted him to critique them.

Nigga did it before but misunderstood me this time. Smh, I blame the name change

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Originally Posted by Odd Ways

Yeah personals are only good w/ a twist or creativity. I can tell a bitch she ugly but it wouldnt be any different than what the next nigga would say. I wanna be remembered lol @A.T.

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random question

Yo, how many personals on the same topic is too much? 3?

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Originally Posted by OG Maestro

^^^^^don't believe this nigga

I asked Wordz to look at my verses and told him I was battling Witty and I wanted him to critique them.

Nigga did it before but misunderstood me this time. Smh, I blame the name change

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random question

Yo, how many personals on the same topic is too much? 3?

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Depends on the amount of lines in the verse.

10 Lines - 1 bar suffice
16 Lines - 2 or 3 depending on how dope, after the 1st couple, it can get redundant and stale.
20 Lines - Same as above ^

Lol this nigga frost is a black belt self defense master son.

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Never too many. I've seen niggas drop ALMOST entire verses w/ personals. As long as they hit it doesnt matter.

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Originally Posted by παmε

Depends on the amount of lines in the verse.

10 Lines - 1 bar suffice
16 Lines - 2 or 3 depending on how dope, after the 1st couple, it can get redundant and stale.
20 Lines - Same as above ^

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Perfect. thanks bro

@Smog you on NC? Just asking cause you remind me of that Fraze dude

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Originally Posted by Wordz AhGod.

Lol this nigga frost is a black belt self defense master son.

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I'm J. Cole's brother nigga. I go and be a lawyer or rap. *assumes defensive stance*

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Originally Posted by Odd Ways

Never too many. I've seen niggas drop ALMOST entire verses w/ personals. As long as they hit it doesnt matter.

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He said the SAME personal, bro.

Of course an entire verse w/ personals is good but not the same concept.

Example; Smog a truck driver

You going to drop 10 lines bout him being a truck driver?

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Originally Posted by παmε

He said the SAME personal, bro.

Of course an entire verse w/ personals is good but not the same concept.

Example; Smog a truck driver

You going to drop 10 lines bout him being a truck driver?

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Oh well in that case yeah. Muff almost/basically did lol

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Originally Posted by Odd Ways

Never too many. I've seen niggas drop ALMOST entire verses w/ personals. As long as they hit it doesnt matter.

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Personals are probably the best bars I've ever seen, next to a dual-triple/wordplay.

I love seeing when wordplay works in all intended ways. Might beat haymaker personals by a little.

lol at using one personal a billion times

every post is ammo for a personal

This frost nigga needs to stfu.. God damn


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Originally Posted by Odd Ways

Oh well in that case yeah. Muff almost/basically did lol

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Muff always do that. He see one personal about someone and goes over board - no pun intended lol.

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Originally Posted by παmε

Muff always do that. He see one personal about someone and goes over board - no pun intended lol.

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Gah damn, you know him to a Tee. I noticed that too

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Originally Posted by Red Hood

lol at using one personal a billion times

every post is ammo for a personal

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This is why I post a lot.. these kids need all they help they can get. Almost all my battles somebody using some shit I said that week in the chat lmao.

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Originally Posted by Odd Ways

@Smog you on NC? Just asking cause you remind me of that Fraze dude

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Nah, man not fraze... I just went on there to try different shit out.. Get reaction n feed, see what's hit n what's not then try n mix it in.. By the way I bodied u in that BA tho.. lol.. See what I'm sayin, different shit..

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Originally Posted by Smog

Nah, man not fraze... I just went on there to try different shit out.. Get reaction n feed, see what's hit n what's not then try n mix it in.. By the way I bodied u in that BA tho.. lol.. See what I'm sayin, different shit..

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Lol i was close. Thought i edged you at first but i cant lie you kinda out gunned me. I'll see you one of these weeks for the rematch.

What is BA?

Lmaoo, yeah it was close.. Kinda brought that style back here but it ai t gettin much love bruh..that spas joint was nice tho

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@Odd Ways plus I don't use the word nigga bro, fraze does, see if I wouldn't walk in a pack a unfamikiar brothers n say it I ain't gon say it... Just being real to I sin joe Boston @wag, lmaoo

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Originally Posted by OG Maestro

What is BA?

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Battle arena @ nc

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Originally Posted by OG Maestro

@Mimic

So you a HOT BOY now? Lmao, good drop dawg.

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Always have been homie & thanks sir.

Fraze could drop some shit sometimes tho

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Originally Posted by Smog

Lmaoo, yeah it was close.. Kinda brought that style back here but it ai t gettin much love bruh..that spas joint was nice tho

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@Odd Ways plus I don't use the word nigga bro, fraze does, see if I wouldn't walk in a pack a unfamikiar brothers n say it I ain't gon say it... Just being real to I sin joe Boston @wag, lmaoo

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Respect the fuck outta you for that, Smog stays humble & earning his rep on my side

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Originally Posted by OG Maestro

Gah damn, you know him to a Tee. I noticed that too

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Vice versa... Him and I been on these boards since the beginning of time, dude.

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Originally Posted by Smog

Fraze could drop some shit sometimes tho

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U must be bust?

Go up a few posts Holmes.. Lol

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Originally Posted by Smog

Nah, man not fraze... I just went on there to try different shit out.. Get reaction n feed, see what's hit n what's not then try n mix it in.. By the way I bodied u in that BA tho.. lol.. See what I'm sayin, different shit..

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what was your name on NC?

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Originally Posted by Smog

Go up a few posts Holmes.. Lol

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Don't let me find out you was BUST, lol.

That mean you 0-3 against me, my nigga hahaha

I didn't battle u on nc fool