Kritikal try-outs

listen/

im a general so im betta than most u fags/
i pack mac's like grocery bags/
and ill clap most u fags,just call me the litttle jada/
why? cause m-stacks paper,and m gets checks/
im so fly even my wardrobes fresh/
front on me and get thrown back llike a michelle&ness/
and i stay on my g.r.i.n.d/
im a c.r.i.p/
talk shit and u will d.i.e/
im in the club like 50 c.e.n.t/
chillen wit my baby,baby like b.i.g/
mostly first round knockouts like t.ali/
in the club they dont gotta see i.d/
they send me straight to the v.i.p/

holla.

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Originally Posted by EMCEE_STEVE

is kritikal still running? if so, ima come back if thats alright, gangster-styles alias...

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Yo man, dont come back here. I posted something, and there wasnt a post till after the next 2 days. It's too un-active. Def try-out for S.G or W.O.W or any other crew. Just get out of this one. pz.

MC Heartless, I wasn't put up for adoption.....I left. man you are stupid, who the hell is goin believe yo dumb ass when you can't even tell tha difference between adopting and moving out. an besides, no one peeped ya dumb whack ass verses, ask anyone here if they can even repeat wha you said.

ok ok my bad you werent put up for adoption...............i just orphaned you by murkin' your leader your 2nd best textcee and not forgetting comlpetely kicking your ass through RB.......so i rest my case :thumbup:

if your looking for a new crew....theres some herb crews im sure you would fit right in with :thumbup:

Trouble is locking me away from sun...Life at the point where you slowly fadin becomin no one....ma brothas on stay hustlin on da block all day tryin get betta....thats the shit u gotta thru to get yo chedda...you wanna strech yo life to feed yo babys and yo whole family....but the gunz and hustlin pullin u back slowly....and everytime i am told not try ova...couse life is like an oppunity that u wud neva reach or get closa.....

Uh try out for kritikal

Yo don't try out for this crew. Your wasting your time

Y is dat duval...?

Well this is the most in-active crew ever. I just quit this crew like a couple of weeks ago along with 3 more people.

Otha crews say i aint good enuff....cant do nothin abut it...

Well just elevate thats what i'm doing right now. I just do open mics and what not. If you have yahoo you can pm me at LilDuvalchick04 and we can elevate together.

Most def...addin you rite now....

as i sit here, watching the time pass,
sociel unity inspires me to write a rhyme...
about disgises and lies that are televised,
like faces with no names laying clame to popularity,
in there silent destiny of there lives..
take there lives with the knifes that they hold,
this planet grows soo cold, cos are freedom was sold,
but see with this mic i hold a could start a revolution,
and wiped out mecees more fake than human evolution,
they must of been blind, or mabie not sighed,
this is a million a one ways that i can blow your mind,
but back to the mater, cut the chit chatter,
the govement splatter our brains with the word that they say,
bush told us to jump and we do it every day,
people on the streets are soo rude you know they'll punch ya
raped up in sell phones raised in homes with no stuture,
lieng with there eyes, this leaves you parilized,
telling you to take a look in the sky before you die,
they say "you see the planets, you see the stars"
"do you really realize how small we are"
"no?" then sit down a have a buscuit,
wen this lyrical bomb go's you know i'm ripping this sh*t,
i know it's best you play it cool,
listen to some of that bull sh*t they teach in skool,
you play buy the rules so we treet you like fool,
you gotta listen to this rhyme lecture, it's texture,
so sharp it's come to cut though walls and protect ya,
my name feels like a slap in the face, or better yet,
a mean demonizing thing you wish you never met,
i'm a leader of a squad, not a cog in a machine,
you know i'm soo fly cos i got the rapper gean,

spelling are not great

How old are you?

Heartless not even on ya best day could you merk me or whateva, and stop usin that word that you picked up from Def, You didn't start sayin it till he started sayin it. Get ya own lines and stop stealin ya vocab from othas. Be original, like you said... "Dr Pepper". Beotch.