last chance for feed and votes for hof today.
Today I'll feed what I haven't fed yet.
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last chance for feed and votes for hof today.
Today I'll feed what I haven't fed yet.
I don't see the April HOF up right now, but I want it be known that I'm nominating Laureate's 'Late night rambling' if I can!!Quote:
Originally Posted by Emily
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Originally Posted by TheIllyricist
It's there now
Gracias you beautiful person, you.Quote:
Originally Posted by Jukon
:o
Thanks
Last night to nom peeps (i think?), NOM AWAY YOU NOMMING NOMMER GNOMES!
That is.. if you want to.
I'm a liar
I fed one piece and have half of another piece fed
Sue me, kill me, whatever's easier
Murder it is.
Good. Thank you.
Thank you @Fatt Sajak and @Jukon for feeding 'So...'
I appreciate it.
You're welcome
@Emily when is the haiku season starting up?
I asked for a bit of display of interest a while back and got no answer.Quote:
Originally Posted by KnowP
Haiku sounds great but Jukon and I have had a load of work on and it's not
easy taking on more. Things like leagues and haiku have had to be left until
OM takes a back seat. Let's get that organised and then we'll probably have time
for haiku.
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Originally Posted by KnowP
I'm honestly on the side of this where I'd be fine if we didn't do it again
But if it's just pc we're running juke, we'll be able to handle it won't we?Quote:
Originally Posted by Jukon
there will probably be five people in it all in all anyway.
That's including us lol.
Anyway, we'll cross that bridge when we come to it.
I'm no haiku queen by any means, but I'll consider haiku, for like, a minute.
Plus how else are we going to get @Soul_Purpose back here?
Idk I jus don't prefer to be involved with that league.
Maybe y'all should think of how to make it more challenging
how to make haiku more challenging?Quote:
Originally Posted by KnowP
I'd pop on to do a haiku once a week
Yes. A haiku with no a's or e's used in it. That'll get them to come.Quote:
Originally Posted by Emily
idk what i'm saying, ignore me right now.
late night ramblings from a raving lunatic
rhinoceros
lol @ rhinocerosQuote:
Originally Posted by TheIllyricist
late night ramblings suit you my friend
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Pop in to write a haiku, or ...pop in to run the haiku?Quote:
Originally Posted by Laureate
lol
Lol
did someone say haiku….
And so he appears.Quote:
Originally Posted by Atti
but only if you say haikuQuote:
Originally Posted by TheIllyricist
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how about I say...
drop poetry
or even.....
feed, feed, feed.
I wonder if that will work as well
feed, feed, feed was ineffectiveQuote:
Originally Posted by Emily
atti uses disappear
it was super effective
next time Em, use a master ball.
a master ball?Quote:
Originally Posted by TheIllyricist
pokemon, em. pokemon.Quote:
Originally Posted by Emily
ohhhhhh pokemonQuote:
Originally Posted by TheIllyricist
Thanks Illy : )
You're welcome. Whenever you need help, just call the offices of TheIllyricist. Please ignore the screaming in the background, there is no murder happening here. No murder at all.Quote:
Originally Posted by Emily
its ok, im all for screaming, nice backing vocals.Quote:
Originally Posted by TheIllyricist
Right? That's what I told the police, too! I'm happy someone else agrees, unlike those fun-haters.Quote:
Originally Posted by Emily
lol @ fun haters.Quote:
Originally Posted by TheIllyricist
@Skybones ,
Let's chat in here so I don't have to delete the chitty chat from your thread lol.
I loved your work, it shows so much potential and you have new/crisp/organic phrases that are cool to read.
Structure is a personal thing but people prefer it to be clear, regardless, do your thing. Be true to you. You say the structure was meant to show the flow, I think you're talking about those little lines right? They do show the flow, in a very obvious way lol.
As for 'lurkS' good thing, so it was just a typo.
I think you did well and like I said, I'm looking forward to reading more of your work.
Thanks alot. I plan on writing alot more. when I found this place I figured it be the perfect place to hone my skills. I will defiantly try your suggestion ad far as My structure. Im glad you liked it though and even more happy you spoke on it after all that's why Im here
I'm glad you came and that you're dropping in pc. We don't get a lot of feed in pc, but the good thing is, the feed we get is usually honest and comes from the heart. Also, there's so many different opinions, some are truly gifted with their dissecting of a piece, and some like me, just give my two cents. Either way, we all have different ideas on how 'we personally' like things, and it's up to you to take what you like, and leave what you don't, when you read people's feed.Quote:
Originally Posted by Skybones
Either way, you'll come out with more than you went in.
Kinda like KFC but without the gut ache ; )
One more thing, structure, and typo's and all that, can be worked on.
It's the msg in the piece, and the passion you carry in the words, that
makes a writer stand out from another writer.
If a writer can connect with the audience, for me, that's gold.
Exactly I figured a place called poets corner would be a good fit for my style of writing. I will prolly do some battles but more than likely i just wanna practice my word play and ability to flow smoothly while at the same time painting a picture. How ever I think now re reading the ending it should have been " for all intents and purposes their purpose is to damage us"
...for all intents and purposes their intent is to damage us...
vs
...for all intents and purposes their purpose is to damage us...
lol tricky one this one. I'm not big on doubling up of words in too close proximity.
And both these lines have doubling in close proximity.
I like the first one, more. I like ...for all intents and purposes, their intent is to damage us...I like <<second one. The word 'purposes' and then 'purpose', seemed like too many loud 'puh' sounds, but after saying it over and over lol, it started sounding more like an anthem, which is v cool.
I don't know, pick what's right for you. Right it, by writing it lol.
I trust you'll do well.
It works there though because it's ironic
lol @Emily is right, haiku is the only thing I come to this site for anymore. HMU when it's back on.