Elevation Thread.

big niggaz got no honor if dey pockets is numb
like frozen feets, 40 pieces off niggaz i bum
but dont pay em bacc cuz i hustle...its an ambition
but hurrassin b4 gassin and bashin after creates friction
'game' is like golf...niggaz got clubs n u need 2 b @ par
dis world iz of hott lyrics underdiscovered like ya card


^^i am not in need of elevation jus thought id teach yall a thing or2

Ok..ok...

So the reason you even looked at this thread why?
you didnt help anyone just because your fly?
die...people like you we need no more/
you actlin like jay z yet your a backpackin whore/
so what if you thnk your a vet/
you lack respect and honestly, thatll make you lose your bet/
bounce kid, you shoulda neva looked in here/
cause now all of these mc's think that your a queer/
you aint hot, your more idiotic than retards/
underdiscovered what, im out chargin all your cards/
criminal? neva you aint got the balls/
thats why this bitch is on the internet braggin out to yall


n/t
A True Emcee Helps other Emcees

i liked it only bcuz jhood was faggin it...let 'em know...but u can elevate on ur vocab and multis, i like multis...i agree wit ur topic but ima have to diss u...sorry

this is the name of the game diss defame n degrade
haze n blaze a mothafucka who aim to swerve in my lane
came to lay the frail and derail ya train of thought
trails of blood lines splattered all by mines battered by my rhymes
shows no signs that u fought
brought heavy artillary its the big guns that u lack
instead i throw boulders, now it those u carry on ur back
so yeh im sittin here relaxin baskin in the lime light
u rhyme tight cuz in this game ur a virgin
i been loose my lyrical hymen's been stretched opened wide like a curtain
n now ur hurtin n punches just keep on comin
like Biggie n Pac i'll have u runnin
in all the murals they always forget one
to me the best emcee is the one n only Big Pun
stun u cuz this is an off da dome
diss u with a spherical ball of lyrical powers
leave u in the ground to have u become one with the flowers
then i smoke ya
but never get more pleasure than when i did ya when u were mortal
puff an L n blow ya minerals to thin air, n send u through my portal
of verbal assualt the vaults been open,
let loose the demons
n fault the lives of others before they even become semen
although this is all about self glory its hot
its jus statin' all the attributes that u dont got...

NT: freestyle ur verse with as many multi's as u can

cognac sippin emcees gone-wack when they don-black
call-that shit anonymous alcoholic when you here Charlotte
Church'll lurch over ya weak vocal-style so toss that
redemption comes slow-4-now as jail ball courts ball-it
catholic bitches have it on-4s while strokin my contours
wack-at-it mami as ya mouth conjures spells to trap-this-habit


NT: Ethnic Diversity

I dont like it, it mite jus be me, but i cant feel it, if youre about to die, i can understand y it isnt very gd, but theres no real time limit (is there?) so take the time to develop it. i like how u rhymed the start and ends of ur lines. wot was ure next topic Ethnic diversity? wot do u mean? like, racism, well im doin bout racism

Theres more black people than there is whites
But they always get into fights
With us cos they think that we think we're better
But were not, were equal
Were all people
Blacks, whites, asians
Fucking cocky caucasions
So fuck all the racists and throw them into fire
Cos were gonna kill them all (liar liar)
COs i hate racism cos Martin Luther King
That 'nigger' gave us sumthing
So did Nelson Mandela and that black woman hu died the other week
They all showed us that we were wrong, we all were wrong
Cos no matter wot color someone is, they got a soul

N/t Biterphobia

that was pretty good.that topic would have been hard for me idk y..but i liked it


yo my mission haters
is to kill all inst1gators
never shoot at me cuz ill always return the favor
this cat couldnt get pussy if he paid - whores
i bet u from UCF cuz u luv the GAY-TORS
living down south so how my wrist stay - froze
ya crew consists of circus freaks and gay -hoes
even if u was in space ya flow remains - low..(JOOK$)

n/t if u dont know how to rap how can u learn

i really wasnt feelin the flo of it or the structure prolly cuz it was to short to tell but it was aight tho...


if u dont kno how to rap this is 1 way u can learn/
popin the 36 chambers and wait till that bitch turns/
and dont concern urself wit material objects or ice/
just stick to ur own style and makin ur lines precise/
get ur point across the DEF by expalin that shyt twice/
just in different ways so u dont lose the crowd that nite/
start ur rymes wit sum metaphors to catch their attention/
and show that this tread helped u elevate to ur final ascention/
remember my complexion when ur direction is towards perfection/
so we could have a real cypher containin a smokin session...4 shoo

NT lost in maze of words

it flowed a bit, and the rhyming was good, but i didnt feel that it connected

I'm trapped in this maze, jumblin all my words
I'm tryin to diss back but i cant spit any...words
All i can do is keep on ending the lines with the same words
Oh, i've started to find my tongue, the cats let it out
I'm getting betta now, i'll win this next bout
Cos i'm the illest emcee, kind of mine
Oh shit, i jus said things in the wrong order
I'm gettin booed off stage, i'll neva move taller
Cos now everyone thinks i'm shit
But i'm not, i jus couldnt spit
That time, so now i'm endin this rhyme
And i hated the topic
So get off my dick

N/T takin your dads Porsche without him knowing, and crashing it

takin your dads Porsche without him knowing, and crashing it

....

parents, like Fresh Prince said we don't understand 'em//
a young buck with impulsive roots i'm jackin shit at random//
for the hell of it jacked my dad's porsche 911 and started draggin//
this fine black Mami in a green and silver honda had my tongue//
did a drag down the racist part of town and nearly got hung//
we left so fast that my penis flew back and punked ya datsun//
my mind was on something high and dirty so i picked up my cell and dialed 30/
i told her "you've got more than Ciara/ Tatyana Ali i think ya ass is worthy//
so after our picnic of sandwiches and bananas she had me horny//
we hopped in the porsche honked the horn and shot off from 0 to 40//
on a str8 stretch she unzipped my pants and straddled me in our glory//
all of a sudden i crashed into a tree, what this girl won't divorce me//
so we stumbled out the into the woods and continued fuckin//
we fucked so long and hard that my nuts felt like they was bustin//
like a squirrel she found my nuts after that the crash was nothin'//

NT: War in Iraq(if that's been used, then Wannabe G'z)

Wow u aint got triumph and steal the show
not when i am gonna rip mics and drop mad flow
when i am done my memory will live on
coz i talk bout change like makaveli the don
i am keepin it real when i spit on the mic
i be in the black star shining bright
not willing to die on tyson fight nite
don't wanna go b4 i paint my starry night
much to do before my plight
u know when death comes knocking
and my angel stops watching

it was iight i wasnt feeling it that much .but juss elevate thats all i can say.1

hold up first off u aint leave a topic
so ima have to diss u try to stop it
u flow lil like romeo
ill step on u like an ANT ok Tonio(antonio)
i know u feel intiminated
its time for u to get eliminated
as a rapper u cant make it
this is nothing im to magnificent
u to weak the MAG u not lifting it
i keep the flow moving u losing
now u crusing for a brusing..(JOOK$)

n/t u got 2 days to live

that was good, well played with dissing the fag for not leaving a topic, people like that should get temporarily banned from the forum

Jus found out i got 2 days to live
I'm gonna rape this bitch, nick her car,
then run over her, and hide from the police
No, i'll giv my self up, i got a disease
They won't care, but suddenly the doctors from the hospital come
And take me back to the ward
Then i get bored
So i start to think about what i've done
Now i feel real bad, so i'm gonna spend my last days sad
If u eva get into this position
Before you get took to the mortician
Dont do anything bad, just fuck her, take your shit, and leave

N/T pursauding someone to commit suicide

i liked that. that sounds like something somebody would do if they had 2 days to live..
i like the topic also, so ima follow the topic instead of diss you.

ima pursuade u into committing suicide
its ur life u decide how u wanna die
u could hang ya self or slit ya wrist
u could bang ya self or drive off a cliff
y do u wanna live when ur presents is meaningless
u can end it fast instead of being pissed
ppl wonldnt notice u if u wore a sign that said bum dude here
u walk around unknown so who cares
go ahead and turn ya tee red like Whinne the Pooh bears..(JOOK$)

n/t what would u do if u had to fight Hercules..LOL

i liked your verse. your rhyme scheme was good and lines were specific despite the general topic.


i see some brolic nigga on the corner grilling me
its that nigga hercules looking like he strait out of Sicily
out of all the niggas on the street he looking at me specifically
he want beef with me and I could tell he pissed at me
mind you I threw up like 8 sets that morning
i tucked my 38 and met that nigga on the corner
he started throwing punches i started weaving jabbin
than i stabbed him with a ock for him to leave in his abdomen
he got like three shots on me clean clocked me
then i hit him straight in the jaw like rocky
after my fourth hit he stopped me
then the cops spotted me and threw us in the car on top of the seat
we gave the officer a plea,
but he said fuck that and we was locked up for a week

you see if i needed to fight Hercules i'd wrap these around his knees
these things that are plastiky that can withstand about anything
so yeh i do that, crack hercul's back pop n snap like rice crispies
he aint nothin without his father Zeus devour the lightning he shoots
and fuck his wife Aphrodite when im dressed like him wearin his boots
Titan strength by Hades blaze the Gods and Devil babies to ruin roots

NT: Pussy niggas on this site that wont battle a cat cuz they think everybody is inferior or not worthy of a battle (*ahem* V. Assault Crew)