@Amen Ive been told i write for 4 diff. ppl on this site, its old bro.
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@Amen Ive been told i write for 4 diff. ppl on this site, its old bro.
Never said you have it backwards, just that I was never gonna quit texting/modding dunno where that came from.Quote:
Originally Posted by Packed Graves
And just to get this clear, in my battle verse clout you dick rode him hard. LOL @ fresh jam and barber cuts being quotable not to mention the onslaught of name plays which were cheesy anyways.
Or may pull syrup lmao you said that was lotb you cheesy fucking dick rider.
lol link me to this battle please
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http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthre...8Clout-Wins%29Quote:
Originally Posted by Paradigm.
I was wrong he didn't quote fresh jam or fresh cuts that was someone else. My apologies @Packed Graves
But still bullshit votes in that joint
Those lines were well worded homie.. you may have better concepts overall but wording makes all the difference as to if people will dig it or not.
My wording was nice.. Ppl didn't realize how evreything tied in with like 3 diffreent angles. Clouts wording was fucking horrible too.. Fresh cuts like you just got back from the barber? Thats retarded. and fresh jam like the farmer market? Worded nicely or not, those are not quotable punches and anyone who quoted them should be slapped in the face with a hand that has just wiped an assQuote:
Originally Posted by Wordz AhGod.
and keepin tabs didn't work either, because if I'm at the bar buying drinks for bitches that is not something to insult someone about lmao. smh I won't be back in LLL for awhile.
Huh?Quote:
Originally Posted by Packed Graves
@fresh you had the line of battle imo, with the opener but like I said you lost due to consistency.Quote:
Originally Posted by fresh
@fresh I just read the battle again and looked down to see what lines I quoted before and they were the same I quoted this time man.. its your wording, trust. I rewrite a single concepts at least 4 times and some times still don't feel like its right cos the wording looks too simple or doesn't read how I want it. You're wording wasn't ass but it wasn't good either in some bars.
Farmers market is ass. Keepin tabs is more of a comlpiment than a diss. Heart broke was iight.Quote:
Originally Posted by Wordz AhGod.
You also quoted the undergrowth line from me, which imo was my worst bar. I'm glad you got it tho I feel people didn't correlate the angles..
I'ma break down this battle
Nope, Keeping Tabs was cool and Heartbreak was good. I liked the active imagination line too.Quote:
Originally Posted by fresh
@fresh him saying that you buy drinks for women all night isn't a compliment. Lmao who sits there and buys drinks for random hoes if you're not getting sex from it?
Fuck your 13-0 record.. Your name is trash so watch this clout
After you C this L theres no question MY heavy punches will knock you OUT
This was pretty goddamn good imo, but I can see where opinions would vary on it.
Every win you’ve gotten is from nobodies.. you ain’t decent, k?
To put it in perspective, ur not toppin’ ANYTHING that ain’t a piece of cake
This was second best line in this verse imo. I think everyone got this so I won't break it down.
If u ever live up to ur name, its face to face with undergrowth
Because any time you converge w/ another dude it’ll always come to blows
Clout : a heavy blow with the hand or hard object. So I said if you live "UP" to your name its face to face with "UNDERGROWTH". And then went on to say any time he converges with another dude it will always come to blows. Blows is the wordplay and this is technically a name play even tho I didn't say his name. I think I could have made better decisions on the choice words tho to make it more effective. Worst line in this verse imo
My concepts could blow u away… ur smack dab in Hiroshima
You ain’t just goin out on a limb.. ur tiptoeing could rival that of a ballerina
I did not like this. I tried to do an exaggeration flip but it fell flat and this is ass. I take it back this is the worst line in the verse not out on a limb.
When I drop a verse the ppl want more, ur just a faggot, clout
And it’s ironic how we X your verses out, even tho ur nothing to rave about
This was my favourite bar. First sentence "ppl want more" has to do with rave and ecstasy. Buddyy Holly had a song called rave on, and it was about a good feeling that he didn't want to end. so X and rave tie in with the opening line, then I go on to say we X your verses out even tho ur nothing to rave about. Wordplay, idiom, and several angles tying this together makes for a nice punch imo.
u have a ways to go, and were wondering if you’ll ever make it
Good personals hit close to home, ur shit is overseas on a permanent vacation
This was another exaggeration flip. "you have a ways to go" and "wondering if you'll ever make it" ties in with "close to home" and "overseas"
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U fell for a Gal, but didn't get cut any slack boss.
Its like u're dyin from heartbreak, the way u caught feelings over that loss!
This was worded well, but its not packing much sting imo
& Fresh Material's something that u'll Never pen.
When u're active imagination's more dead than the Frontlines has Ever Been!
I didn't mind this one.
ur mack game's washed up. It could dive into sinks.
Only time bitches Keep Tabs on u, is after a long night of buyin them drinks!
If I'm buying drinks for bitches all night that makes me a fucking baller. This is no quality diss. Worded well yes, but did it make sense? No.
u'll never harvest a Deal or even a Barter Off it.
Cus we'll only see Fresh Jam, if we're bottling some at the Farmers Market!
harvest a deal or even barter off it, wording stupid imo. fresh jam farmers market is as cheesy as it can get.
If i let the Blade treat him? it'll Cleave His Armor.
& you'll See more Fresh Cuts than satisfied customers leaving the Barber!
"more fresh cuts than satisfied customers leaving the barber..." smh thats insane this even got quoted once.
If a guns drawn? ur the type to Tear up silly kid.
When the shit fresh maple..is so much sweeter than that syrup really is!
may pull is a stretch first of all. Second, this is a gun bar that ended with him saying that the shit I may pull (flipping his gun line) is so much sweeter than thaty syrup really is. That is lame as fuck and again, I find it insane anyone quoted that shit.