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^^Link To An Open Mic I Just Dropped..
ahhh man Daedal i wanna be in this now i need a reason to battle n kill newbs
if u deny me ill undastand cuzz ill admit i do need to elevate alot
Quote:
Originally Posted by RdotC
You have 2 crews as is... no ugly... Run MS...
your in........welcome to ILL
^ Get like, 2 battles goin with newbs..
And post them in our tryout thread, in the 'Mondo Thugz' forum..
Were in process of getting the name of the forum changed, but until then, thats where this crew is at..
Its in noobie crews btw..
Werd.
aiight im feelin that
i got one comin up a tag team match almost its me n princess vs/ sick spitta and rabe
Look....It's time to spit raw drop bombs metaphor's
your ahead of your time....well I'm ahead of your's
I'm emergin from the depth's of seas like sumberines
roamin like a norman through villages wit refugees
these kat's listen to commercial rappers cuz they use to'em
I kick up dust in the desert's of jerusalem
they sho the picket signs plz...don't start a local petetion
hypacrit issues put they ass in critical condition
not to mention who gives a fuck if the ice glistens
I spit heat rocks that leaves these krews outta commision
what's the difference I spit....some kat's need rehearsal
the difference I'm real....some kat's spit commercial
wow watch yo girl she's flirting in a hurry
I've been rappin for five years but really it feels like 30
my settlement's gonna smother ya monthly payrate
The ILL gots kats that'll come and scratch up ya face plate
assazin the future wit RETURN close the curtains
the verse pops jaws drop just ask curtis
yeah how is that to be in the krew hit me back and let me know what's good
wit it aight then peace be still.
Line 15- I'm getting a settlement from a car accident that's gonna be
triple digits..
Line 18- curtis is a producer that does all the dats for g-unit,ludacris,tamia,
brandi and a lot of big artists that's in the game but hit me back with the feed
on what you think one love.
yo when we all gon get together for another collab
The wise man is always at ease
note these ryme fusions
you cant get rid of your illusion
nor do you seek or speak the truth
ryme contusions
reality is not the question or the answer but the truth
you spit and stutter in the booth
your focus lacks imagination
hits i make em
titles take em
wack mcs
break em
perhaps it would be better for you to avoid the truth
i knocks thy tooth
Who the hell is that Still Remain clown ? Thinking he's all down and shizzle.
Hiya Quo., Hiya Av....nice roster so far....take care of it better than MS, eh?
Assazin in......other guy no
yo son wuz up why u startin a new crew?
thought u be reppin the PP?
somebody else but me can take care of this if u want...pz
HERES THE COLLAB RUN DOWN...
Im starting with no outro or intro for now thatll get mixed in later..
So Me
Ra-One
:30 seconds
:42-43 6 hits
:55 freeze second
:56-:57 set up for talking and then small pause
:59 Freeze second
1:03 to 1:06 hits three times with some sort of kick or snear in the beat
(SPLIT-P's SECTION)
SLIGHTLY goes into 1:20secs but stops for near 70percent of the time it stops dead and then picks back up at 1:21
1:25-1:27 6 hits (im thinking a multi ride yahmean? just to jump in on it)
1:46-1:48 6 hits
2:01/02 Is when your verse ends
2:02 Freeze second
2:03 snare hits
2:04 beat picks back up
Barz_bury
2:04 is when your part starts Brad(Barz_Bury)
2:08-2:10 6 hits (when the beat picks back up
2:29-2:31 6 Hits
2:42 is a freeze second
Check it at 2:53/2:54 is when i am going to start fadeing out the vocals and beat for the outro alright? Good.. LoL Barz_Bury START WRITEING SERIOUSLY, SPLIT-P YOU TO, FUCKING A RA-One YOU TO DAMN IT! LOL Barz Im Hopeing Your Come Off Sounding Ill Thats Why I Need To See Your Lyrics Before We Lace Them.. Because You'll Be The Last Thing People Will Hear.
The Beat (After The Thirty Second Change Up Goes) (Counting A Bar As Every Pair Of Horns(Or Whatever) Each Bar Is About 3 And A Half Second In Length With A Change Up Baron The Fifth.
Ra-Ones
4 BARS (Four Bars Then A Change To The Fifth Bar)
A CHANGE UP BAR (All Five Bars = 13 Seconds)
4 BARS(10 Seconds Long)
TWO SECOND BUILD UP-----------------------------------------------------------------|:02 Not
|Counted
FOLLOWED BY 2 Second Pause Ill Spit Unnoticeably Faster To Make Up For Mila Seconds |As Bar
Two Bars
A Change Up Bar
Five Bars (14 Seconds No Change Bar)
Split-P's
One Second Pause
Two Bars
Change Up Bar (With The Above Two Bars, 7 And A Half Seconds Long)
7 Bars
Change Up Bar (Seventeen Point Seven Seconds Long)
4 Bars
Slightly Over One Second Pause
Barz Bury
2 Bars
Change Up Bar
Seven Bars (17.7 Seconds Long)
Change Up Bar
3 Bars
Followed By One Second Pause
3 Bars
Change Up Bar
One Bar
(OR DONE CHEAPY AFTER I DID IT THIS OOOOTHER WAY LOL BY ACTUALLY COUNTING AND RECOUNTING AGAIN AND AGAIN....DONE OFF THE COOL EDIT PRO .2
*Done Up Another Way There Are 90:1 Bars Total In This Instrumental
*Ever Two Seconds Is One Bar
*Every One Bar Has Four Counts Which (As Stated) Equals Two Seconds
*My Verse Starts Up At 17/2
*My First Switch Up Is At 22/1
*The Switchs Ends At 23/1
*My Verse Goes Untill 28/3
*28/4 Untill 31/1 Has A Slight Switch Up For A Small Pause To Talking Effect
*32/4 Has My Next Switch Up
*33/3 Untill 41/2 For My Verse
25/2
*41/2 Starts of Split-p's verse
*43/3 Split-p's First Change p
*44/3 all the way untill 54/2 Im thinking you have the best run for the verse use it well.
*54/2.5 untill 55/1 is how like your switch up(kicks i think) are
*55/2 back to verse untill 62/1
*62/1 to 62/4 is a pause
21
I WANT TO SEE SPLIT-P END AS THE BEAT "IS JUST ABOUT" TO CUT.. SAY SOMETHING AND THEN HAVE BARZ_BURY START FLOWING OFF WHAT HE SAID IN THE PAUSE WEN THE BEAT STARTS.. I AM GIVEING THIS BLANK SPOT TO SPLIT P SINCE I THINK HE CAN USE IT NICLEY....
Barz_Bury its important you work you (the start of your verse) what Split Says.. Itll give the effect im looking for.
*63/1 start of your track barz ( remember this is just me counting bars so thats one two three four ONE one two three four TWO one two three four THree, etc etc.. Just to make sure you know what counting bars in audio is.. Frankly i THINK im doing it right, pretty sure LoL
*63/1 untill 65/1 its normal It hits four claps(one at the very start) and two sets of horns.. Get it?
*66/1 all the way untill 75/4 is what this streach takes you.
*75/4 - 76/4 is just a change up
*77/1 untill 81/4 is your verse.
*81/4 - 82/4 Is just a pause
Right here your verse is done.. I shortend you verse up since i need to brain storm whats going in there... If anything
19/3
SO Bars Bury You are taking 19/3 bars
Split P has 21 Bars
And myself i am takeing 25/2
66/1 Of Total Spitten Verse From The Three Of Us..
BARZ BURY AND SLIT GET WRITEING SO I CAN PEEP IT
I WANT THIS DONE BEFORE WEDNESDAY HONESTLY.. Brad If You Cant Get This Done I Might Boot You. So Get It Done YahMean?
Also Brad I Am Going to Peep your Voice When Your Ready to Record, I Have some Ideas And i Want To Make Sure Everything Goes Well..
Well I have Like Maybe 10 Bars Ready.. Whats Everyone Else At?
On Other News, How do Yall Like Your Sigs? I DIdnt Do Much But WE GOT UM
Basicly I Just Ran Down Three Diffrent But Pretty much The Same Way TO Get These Verses Broken Up You Know?
oNe