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if rimed was a word it would be pronounced: [rim-ed]

So please refrain from typing with your forehead.

Aiyo..

Lost Cause. Vs Blade Oracles (3 vs 3)

Roster:
-Crucial- Vs. ???
lyrically_insane Vs. ???
O.v.Dose Vs. ???

Thats the roster for the first three on three battle...if someone else really wants in on this battle then just let me know and we'll try and make the battle 5 vs 5.

I am goin to call them out now...

Any odjections???

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Originally Posted by Bounce

In response to Living legend''s request:

Start off by dropping a 16 bar topical on this topic:

twinkie masacare

Do not post it until I proof it, I am sure we will have areas to touch on...

Be as descriptive as possible, use something other than a conventioanl aa ab rhyme scheme. I suggest a solid use of metaphor, since this is a short drop. The shorter the drop, the more impact every thing has to have. You goal is to pack volumes into each line, not syllable wise, but metaphoricaaly. try to keep your meter consistant, and include sporadic splashes of assonance by strategic use of alliteration. If these terms are foreign to you, spend some time researching them a bit. Try to approach the concept with the most creative angle you can come with. In a tournament this component is critical, if you want to a force on the topical scene on RB or the net in general, you have to work on this. Pay close attention to your word choice, diction is fundmental in a proper peice of prose, keep your writters voice strong by matering these components. Complexity comes with time and practice, a complex rhyme scheme is not the easiest thing to pull off, but once you a at the level, it only adds to your aresenal. This is an art, treat it like one and you can never go wrong... Get at me if you need direction or help on this excercise...

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Bounce thanx fo ya time and ima get workin on it now but it might take some time to finish cuz this is an very unusual topic to write about but i think i can pull it off with your help so dont worry i dont plan on lettin you down i will do what is neccessary to get my crew recognized and Kali will also

so i think LL should be in an R-Sinic Jaws

::Important Message For All Of Apotheosis Members::

Do To The Fact That Im Currently In The Process Of Elevation In Poetry And Topicals I Will No Longer Be Text Battle'n Unless Its In A Crew Battle Until I Get My Shit Together And Get His Down Pact Bounce Has Gave His Word To Help Me So I'll Pretty Much Be Workin With Him For The Moment I'll Still Post In The Crew Thread When I Have The Time But Most Of The Time I Will Be Do'n What Im Told To Betta Myself And Elevate Shit Ima Good Text Battler But Thas Bout All Right Now Im Working On Gettin My Mic To Do Audio Also Cuz Thas What I Do Offline So Im Not New To It I'll Go To The Studio And Makes Tracks If I Have To

To Touch On Another Thing Street Play, Al Capone, And Kobra Will Be The Mediators When Me And Kali Aren't On Rb They Will Take In All Ussues And Pm Either Myself Livinglegend Or The Leader Kalikoze So People Do Not Pm Me And Kali Cuz Or Box Will Fill Up Too Fast And Some Issues And Situations Will Not Or Will Take Longer To Handle So When Were Not On Those Three Mentioned Will Be The People You Talk To They Do Not Decide Whether You Get Accepted To The Crew Or Anything Like That They Jus Address Me And Kali With The Issue And What They Think Should Be Done We'll Either Agree Or Disagree

Right Now We Wont Be Accepting Anymore Emcees Probably Only If Your An Exceptions Cuz We're Like 20 Deep Right Now And Dont Really Need To Expand Unless We Feel You Can Really Do Something For This Crew Im Not Sayin That You Shouldn't Post And Drop Links To Your Battles For Try Out Im Jus Sayin It'll Be A Lil More Difficult To Get Accepted As An Apotheosis Member Ok

Well Im Bout To Be Out And When I Get Up Starts My Elevation Training Im Very Serious Bout This And Me And Kali Will Do What Is Neccessary For Us To Get This Crew Forum That Is One Of The Many Goals For Instance We Must Gain Respect, Recognition, Etc, Etc, Etc, (shit I Couldnt Think Of Anymore At The Moment Its Go'n On 4 Im Tired Like A Muthafucka Lmao)

So Crew Good Luck And Anything You Can Do To Help Speed Us Up To Our Goals By All Means Do So........................iight ~1~

Kali if i left out something or you feel i ova did something or made a mistake jus let me kno or correct it iight

word Homie, I Agree With Ya, Plus... I Agree Wit Ya.........lmao......

'Young Cell' ...

What other sites have you been on?

I think i recognize you because of your sig and avy......

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...63#post2332063

check it i called out IJL for us so we can get a forum ight yalll

an yea im on

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www.rapmusic.com
www.rapblock.com
www.rhymenreason.com
www.rapcityz.com
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www.mrblunt.com
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an a few more but those are the real ones

Fuck you dumbasses, im a lyracist not a damn battler...Assclown

Suck my left nut bitch

so you know ...yall gonna be down right

i was just gonna post the link and shit homie, but you beat me to it....lol


yeah yall, this is whats goin on so far.... just for a 1st attempt....

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=188150

Ayo Young Cell- Thass A Sicc Ass Avatar Homie...........LOL :thumbup: :laugh2:

yes it is thanks you man

im trying to get 1400 tonight its taking me forever i get like 100 a day i try to some times

Dope. Put me in this.

uppin

Thanks LL I will help do that. I'm currently working with Silent J and Kali for elavation. (Even though Kali don't need it lol) I might be able to recruit a few more topicals but after that I think we're good.

i want in fooolio

http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=188162
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=188161
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=187908
Chek these out and tell me if i qualified to be in yo crew

chek my website out mayne
www.soundclick.com/kickdoethugz/

Shut up.

who wanta to battle

shotty man teach me more about this structure thing cause I keep on losing battles cause my verses don't have structure

right structure i pretty simple wen ya get the hang of it
but heres a basic structure okay
write me a verse in your structure an ill put into "good" structure and then all you have to do is follow that guide line k man
peace

yo man its not that the crew is shit its just half the shit thats gets in is rediculous and the high possitions are given away to people with more losses than wins ???
and thats straight fucked up
but yo all is not lost ya feel me
all we need to do is stop beefin with other crews (apotheosis) and concerntrate on getting our crew elevated ....but yo if that aint possible to stop beefin with apotheosis and just put some work in ...then yo i quit aswell
hit me back people cus i for one wanna know what everyone thinks
especially liljay
peace everyone

Just Look Up Da Battle Wit Me Vs D.v.l And Fix Dat One Plus Vote

angel are you lookin for a battle?

ay yo checkin in. wats happenin crew? hey if u get a chance can ya guys check my battles if ur bored. they old and need to be closed.

Hit Me Up In 20 Min And I Will

p.m me when your ready.

wadup crew i guess we have to battle ijl rite ? if im worng let me know and tell me what i have to do aight

and for tha its yo boy d i checked out one of ur battles and one of ur line was bitten i heard that be4 sorry man i aint gonna report u but watch out what u say

~g~ Vote For My Battle And I'll Vote For Your's

well link it up.....

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yo lil jay i'm tryin to get in a higher rank what can i do

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win more battles

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Originally Posted by 24/7
same here what can i do

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get another win

waz up lil jay

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Originally Posted by that fag Sir Cumcison
yea this is liljay under an alias, Im goina probaebly stop this crew cuz im being punished and i can only come on the computer early in tha mourning. Plus it is 2 man-e people hear who suck

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shut the fuck up bitch get the fuck out of this thread

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waz up lil jay
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ill check it out

thats not what i was here for but cool check my shit out :)