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Originally Posted by da king01
oops did i say that
Sparser..im not sure about your verse myself.. it doesnt exactly move me to be honest
we'll see what anybody else in the crew thinks
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Originally Posted by da king01
oops did i say that
Sparser..im not sure about your verse myself.. it doesnt exactly move me to be honest
we'll see what anybody else in the crew thinks
:gfy: oops did i just give u tha finger
i figered ya mom
u betta not b starting shit nigga
Ok we'll see what they say Dont forget im a nooB so i can olny improve anyone wanna battle just say coz i want to show what ive got For a nooB
duno bout the rhyme lol, wasnt feelin it tht much
bt thts ma thoughts neways
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Originally Posted by Sparker'89
aiite..i'd say for a start...try shape your bars up and deliver them
instead of all those short choppy lines and use a tite killer rhythm
something like the way i'm writing now like you on a killer mission
and if you add in sum dope vocab then you'll be splitting divisions
add some heart and concept into it as well...
take a little time in formating yo verse
pz
and
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Originally Posted by da king01
imao....or what nugga?
in fact the shit already started a long time ago..haha
whats up Diamond? you good?
what kind of battle you wanna be in topical or punch homie?
fuck u bitch all i ud was leave ur shitty crew and u sarted beef, u a fucking oussy
yo sup vortex, preferably punch, but dnt mind tho. and daking, dont start nuttin, n it wont be nuttin, so stop freepostin in our thread!
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how about u shut tha fuck up as well, hu r u? i've been in here from tha start and just cuz i'm tha only person hu can see it aint goin anywhere and leave i get shit from bitches like vortex and u, yo vortex u a fucking bitch and diamond i don't know u but u betta shut ur mouth if ya wanna get a goos start on here
Yo yo yo, Ease up and flow easy, King could to have ya here but now ya goin, good luck for whatever shit you gonna do, ayo Vortex fuck beef man just let part on good
yo yhankz pak,we'll always b cool
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Originally Posted by da king01
beef is all good by me... aint no thing...wish you would learn to spell better king..then you'd be more understandable
this crew just started the other day...and all remaining members are waaaay better and respected more than u king.....
i diddnt really want you here in the first place.. i could see you were a no hoper
lmao
only bitch in town is yo momma
wanna battle me to prove a point set it up dumb dumb.. and stop posting where you aint welcome
lets get all battles started..
i'm down with punch and topical
so
rostar=
diamond-punching
pakeveli-topical
Me-punch & topical
perhaps a double team event on each occassion
wheres rhymescheme/ you up bro?
yo checkin in...ay i aint sure wtf goin on here...is we beefin inside tha crew? wtf is that shit...but im down for w/e...yall kno dat
hey yo Sparker'89...you asked if anyone wanted ta battle...yo im down wit battlin ya...all in good fun lol but i read yer verse an i think you got sum potential so im willin ta let ya sho ya skillz...i aint battled no one yet but shit lets git it poppin...you set it up
Yo gotta say this......."I'm Gangsta"
Damn homie, when OG Loc says that in San Andreas, it propa cracks me up
nah rhyme no crew beef going on.. that dude iz out the door
can we get to battle someone..by tommorrow
im off line soon so if Deft look in here set up a topical for starterers seen
if he dont holl@
somebody try Holl@ him
seen gangstas
oh ok man i jus wasnt sure wat was goin on...thats str8 tho so WTF is goin down wit this crew battle shit?? we been talkin bout it for a week an still no action...somebody lemme kno when we decide on sum shit
ha.. i got sum more time today..
ill have to get back to Deft about the battle i guess...or we'll just challenge anyone
aint no thing... if that dont work we'll just drop a sick crew collabo..as an anthem..i got sum ideas already.. kind of like a half battle verse u know
any ideas for the pot throw em up
Holl@
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Originally Posted by Diamond Mind
uppin you bro
yo wats up vortex?
yo...
http://www.rapspitz.com/forums/regis...p?refuserid=81
make ur crew offical.
VErbaL AssaulT vs. Poetic Justus
text: assasiin, vlad tempus , polemic
topical:spekz, verbal fury
GFX: ??????
cud sum1 juz tell vortex bout tis . . . .thanx
yeah i done know deft.. i would of all dropped sum verse today if need B
what up Diamond.. hopefully a battle is on
think we need some members...and a gfx artist
i'd say this
Pakeveli-topical
Vortex-topical-battle
Diamond-battle
rhymesheme-battle
Holl@
wats up Dat, yeah we should do that fosho
hey what's good with y'all ova here?
check who wants up with me homes.
ayyo vortex imma set it up . . . .n ill post the matchups accordingly aite . . .pz
~TopicalZ~
Spekz vs. Vortex
Verbal fury vs. pakaveli
~TexT~
polemic vs. rhyme skeme
assasiin vs. vortex
vlad tempus vs. diamond
aite . . . .if u cool imma set it up now . . .cool???
WHOOHOOOO........... i get VORTEX.
aight HOMIE bring the HEAT!!!IM WAITING CUZ NO VETS DONT WANNA BATTLE SO this battle between me and you will do.
WooooooHooooo i got Polemic! lol
ayo man set i up homey im ready fa war...got tha boots laced an tha clip locked lol :)
^^^^who the fuck are you?!?!?!?!!
get out or get kicked out
im RhymeSkeme...im in this crew you dumbass...look at tha roster
read fool!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
you dumbass
i got VORTEX................you aint even on my LEVEL so step off.................
if ya really want a battle then set it up its just gon be another easy win.
Conratu-FUCKIN-lations...you got Vortex...an i got Polemic...wat tha hell you tryna start beef for? i aint never sayd shit to you cept that i was in this crew...you aint even in this crew so wat tha fuck YOU doin in here???
lol . . . . .its not even CONFIRMED YET CUZ ur leader hasnt agreed . . . lmfao . . . .
. . .w/e ill be waitin 4 ur response aite vortex . . . .pz
yea yea i aint see that he hadnt agreed yet...sorry bout tha confusion lol...
^^yo homes we cool man..........................thanks for the vote.....................even if i didnt ask haha PEACE OUT 1........................PM me if anything homes...you cool in my book
miissing yo gfx 1up
oyea............haha NO SHIT...LMFAO AT myself and DEFT not noticing