Elevation Thread.

that shit was tight man, if you spit again cool maybe... i'll leave you some ability stuff

i spit so complex it's a mathimatical equation
and you see a pic of pain in your imagination
patient nation listen and learn just wait for ya chance to burn
you leave a messeage then a topic got any questions
then i leave you wit 2 rendering suggestions
you need elavation or every battle you get in will me your devistation
if you ain't got skill make some then break some
afterwards take some..

lyrical master minds

i thought it was aight yo, vocab was pretty good but the rest was basic, u def can elevate

im a lyrical mastermind the kind to blind n turn def
with every step explode like mines time is lime when a celeb
stress the flow tho rappers know Po' dont show signs of slow
rhymes close to no mo' climbs we at the top shoot clap n drop
spill knowledge through verbal carnage cap ya dome n dont pay homage
i make collages of skin abolished n burned takin turns blowin up solids
make enemies to mush n shreds of pieces n wrap their carcas around me like old navy fleeces
as a L double M i bring trouble in n have others runnin on the double
n make the most powerful respect me, make the most ruthless wanna cuddle

NT: Shakedown

thats was pretty good ive seen better from u though.
u need more punches.but u stayed on topic so it was all good




yo im known to diss the poetic
ya so pathetic thats right i said it
if u say this verse aloud ull need a medic
like seat belts u need to stay strapped
cuz im known to lyricaly rape cats
i spit shit so fast its like an AK attack
got ppl scared when i come around like oh shit J is back
my raps r higher then Jordan so u cant hang with that
iight yall im through fuck this
everybody knows im the Poetic type and u the one I JussDiss..(JOOK$)

next topic-y is the president a dick..lol

i liked ur flow yo, the line that i liked was da jordan one...i dont like da topic i dont waste my time on the pres...n jus bcuz u dissed me, ima diss u..no hate

u say u spit shit so fast, but my diarhea rhymes run right thru u
soon the illness will take n fill u it catches thrills my rhymes kill too
u nothin but a pill to me so lemme pop u, put u in the first column
if the presidents a dick, why arent u on 'em
faggot dont ever say u my type im the one that gets Poetic
let me go like a bad habit, u's a follower but u always been unleaded
im fed up and have been read up on as if i was a writer
but i post free's n im not a biter im just a bit nicer
u should say my rhymes came out a can, n all that came out from it was cream
now im showin u what really comes outa this dream
my necklace so shiny its like i attatched highbeams

unleaded(u were never led the right way)
u aint my type(meanin u aint poetic, i am n u cant be me)

NT: how bout the next person diss me...c'mon i dare ya

i liked that.ur flow was good. u even added the president in there.lol

now im diss u juss cuz its ya NT


yo DissJuss got worse
Poetic wannabes ur not the first
u juss suck at rap and its not a curse
i got no choice but to succed
cuz i am what u bleed
ya not known around here so u need premission to procced
u juss an itch and im not gonna scratch it
u act like a bitch and my game u cant match it
i heard u was a snitch so between my legs where i stashed it..(JOOK$) easy

lol i guess this is turnin into "Diss the Bitch Above U" thread...lol...neway ur flow was basic...n yeh im dissin u again...lol

lemme yolk this nigga up toke a dutch lay back n poke through to his girls gut
touch every girl he ever fucked in his village n kick this immigrant out his hut
u's a verbal slut, u's the type to get in a battle n catch things
u must be colorblind cuz nigga u cant match me
u's lowsy, i use ur name in football n niggas still catch me
its time to put an end to this God has told me this is ur time
so to make things easier i'll change ya status to :Flatline
thats what u r as im free'in this
nobody else can be believin shit
when i diss any mothafucka on RB conceivin writ's
.....freestyle off da dome come n get som'or...

NT: Full-A-Clips

i liked that diss even thoguh theres no way ima immigrant cuz im white..lol. but ima have to diss u juss cuz its fun..HAHAHA


ill leave this light weight full-A-clips
his street with white tape and chick full a dicks
im put the ox through ya gut
crack ya head like a nut
my bedroom look like a tec facility
u must not know my text ability
talk about immigrants wheres ur greencard
only time ull beable to see me is between bars..
im perfect theres no way to be fixin me
this is the last round on the way to vic-tory..(JOOK$)

NT/(the last round)..figure it out

it started off alrite, but you lost it after the second line...
i'm gonna hav to diss u cos i dont know wot the topic is

So wot ur white, u cant fight, u cant bite
But u try, cos half of us white people
Jus get beaten by black people cos they lethal
But they're just the same
The game has changed Dre's quit, Jay's Quit
You should quit cos you can't spit
The shit that you writ to spit at me bitch
Cos guess wot, i'm white, you're white, he's white, she's dyke
He's Ike, and your dads Ike
And I'm not dyke, but i am white, and i'm not broke, but i am white
And this is just me after a bottle of tylenol 3
This ain't as violent as i'll be
Jus giv me seven excedrin my head'll spin
Till i start copying eminem like a Limp Biscuit thing
People thought that no one would copy eminem but i am Slim
He's Slim, and your futures w'him

PEACE

N/T Lost And Found

ha check out penetrater fuck not bad i didnt mind your shit tylenol 3 .
quite repetative tho you must have been going off im sure you can handle ya verse tho peace .



lost and found


this thing you see, im quite addicted to it.
i cant live with out it, where could it be?
im an idiot. i lost it, i need it fully. its dear
to me. it makes me feel oh so lavishly near
to everything and everywhere. i see clear
with out any fear now im burning like a sear
it was all my fault, im dieing in my distraught.
feeling the hammer comming down upon me
im wacky as i look at the gun, it will realease
me so i can feel free, its funny that thing destiny.
showing me im not shit when everything left me
i just wanted that one thing, what desire brings
made my heart sing, to life i no longer want to cling
i did have it, then it turned up lost. cold like frost
i freeze no energy to find whats gone soon will i be
now it is i sentanced to die cause it wont come back

that was aight but stop repeatin urself...im doin ur topic

ive been lost n my own world that unfurls n twirls
swirls of pearls n thorough gangsta mobsters reppin their burough
everything is a blur though i understand it all clearly
i am the one, flip the letters Neo, n i dodge bullets, merely
severly behead enemies telekinetically
ESP stands for Extreme Sounding Poetry
u know its me when i finally step into bounds
as the light shine down on me blindingly
the warmth lets me kno that im found

NT: come up wit a definition for this made-up word- Furlack

haha, nice topic

furlack?!?!?

maybe you need a bigger coat, cause ya's fur lack?
or maybe thats ya nuts where the fur lacks?
or it could be you when ya bitch aint givin pussy..
when she keep it gooshie but locked, even though its bushy
really it sounds like a spaceship klingon word
so i'll say it when we spaced out or needed some herb

topic: fat people

i'm tellin fat jokes like tripple chins on a throat with neck rolls,
eatin eggs whole and beatin concrete streets like a death toll,
heated debates on wether they should commit euthanasia,
theyd be better off dead, they're sick with sweet tooth cravins',
Makin cakes to eat with sides of bacon covered in smarties,
fat people are everywhere, you can see them at house parties,
catch a fat person in action when your laughin at them,
askin questions like whats up with your fat ass anthem?
grab the candy from them, cause they're just too fat,
even jenny craig wouldn't accept them and gave their money back,

you had good rhymes and structure. good use of the created word also. try makin it a little longer though......
next topic: "Vietnam War"

here take some professional advice
its like this rap shit is so precise
its so light that u could see my charm when it hits midnight
i see u a flyweight
wait thats my weight
my destiny is to strong u cant bench my fate
ya shits is so weak u shoulda slung bars
like Vietnam ill run up and punch u dumb hard
yall escamos come up and be like "where tha gunz are"
look at the script shit i let the snub smoke
ur true trash if i spit then u choke
im a man of my word fuck tha quotes..(JOOK$)

n/t Friday the 13th

oh my fault.. ya shit was on topic. haha it was funny.. try using bigger vocab but other then that i liked it