Re: The Shelter (Freestyle)
Next to me, text emcee's are getting boring to read through
I see few, relevant other cats I agree to
The rest? well, let's just say they're trying their best...
Relying on text to climb into some rhyming finesse
But I am depressed, you can see that this threads on a down slope.
when clowns hope, to key up some stupid shit that'll sound dope
But yeah, not really yo.. just ta' thought of it sickens me
so I kick it key, to bring it back realistically
To ta' common logic of ripping ciphers with instruments
the instant it's, discovered n broken down into increments
We drop the topic, no thought concocted just some blind madness..
like a rhyme savage who's rated on their "per line" average.
But fuck it now, because after reading you suckers.. I'll
Rather kill myself before I would feel what your skills have dealt..
For real, some help is way beyond any damage control
For you amateurs, so.. go find a river n try to manage a 'flow'..
Re: The Shelter (Freestyle)
i say one thing, i am not crazy.
another thing i garuantee is that im not lazy.
im hot an its 2010 so my temperature is rising
last year it was 2009 but now im arrising
yeahh..im the kingg why would i have to lie.
im not a queen pussy like you so i dont think i will cry.
if i take a diss at u, u get a headache leave n need asprin
then he comes back at me an ses you spit harder then elastic
my emotion back at em is yeah im a killah
then they die down to the floor
rip my dick out an give em some more.
all the ladies in the club come pick a man.
use aint got none they all hangin of my arm
so i stick my dick out again and make them lickkk it haarrddd
ouuhchchhhhhh
Re: The Shelter (Freestyle)
ayo,
exposin' you ghost writers with simple flow cyphers,
ive known biters who talk shit to pro fighters,
my pen game's sicker than most of you known rappers-
you flow snatchers better beware of stone jackers-
cus silence will fall when i violently brawl
and rob anybodies watch- takin' diamonds n all
on your spot i got you ducked ready,
claim you stackin mad loot and never touched feddy,
fuck you,
niggas blast on fools who thug out without proof,
i doubt you- even got the balls to bout dude,
you dumb fuckers prolly think im rappin about you,
but fuck all haters, investigators...im out...poof
Re: The Shelter (Freestyle)
New to the game but you cant denounce my name
Leavin all ya'll rappers pinned up like a picture frame
You wanna battle, we'll you aint got the guts
I go blitzkrieg on your ass, takin you from all fronts
Rapid fire cause I come in hot like im fresh from the stove
You a fake treasure map and im the real treasure trove
Tired of people bangin cause I aint got the lingo
Well too bad I dont learn the shit ignorant niggas know
I know real words, I dont use shit colloquially
Use the grammar in standard that why ya'll dont understand me
I dont even need to rap, this aint my only talent
I play bass in a band, go ahead and search it.
Im musically inclined, I dont fiddle with beats
I make grooves and riffs, stuff that beats cant defeat
And everybody can keep opinion to themselves
I aint tryin to fit the grain, I like exposing myself
Re: The Shelter (Freestyle)
bass on my subs it keeps the speakers knockin,
tough talkin leads to body bags fillin' coffins,
I'm still in office as the president of stealing profits-
i rob from the rich and put that money in my pockets,
fuck fast cars i drive slow to show it off,
and fuck dating bitches, i love to blow them off,
im only up for raw sex, then to the refrigerator,
have some gatorade and tell that fat slut 'see you later',
im just a dog homie chasin after bitches asses,
im like the tax man in winter, ima freeze ya assets,
so hate if you want cus i really dont give a fuck,
cus you may take it serious but to me its all just for fun,
Re: The Shelter (Freestyle)
ya'll cant touch me i'm acid lets take a trip
slip and touch me you'll lose more than that half a fist
im a pacifist but wont hesitate to slap your bitch
if she steps offensive i'll leave her with half a lip
shit...maybe i didnt mean that cause most bitches are frail
failing in their attempts to catch a man thats their bail
out of jail this cruel life of poverty their honestly trapped
back behind the line of want they want to be......stacked
but fack.. if they want it bad enough they should take it
and hope to god they dont end up cut up and left naked
Re: The Shelter (Freestyle)
im only a young one at the moment with a goal to get some where
i dont have a fear when it comes to rap and what i spit is not sqaure..
i dont re-use it , thats not new drops.an surely not clever
i dont use shit words and join them all together...
my parents just slip so im unsure what to spit
its a shock to my system and im goin to really miss them
guna have to stay with one, dont know about the other.
guna have to sleep some where else, hopefully with my father.
most emcees on this site are larger when it comes to age digits
so when i lay a drop i need to edit the faulty ridgits.
at the moment im feelin mixed emotions..
and im not floating on any topic
but now im bored so im guna go bump tyga , thats logic.....
Re: The Shelter (Freestyle)
logic like what is one without the other
s'why we need to stay strong and true to our brothers
sometimes our mothers are bitches but listen it true
theyre usually trying to correct their own mistakes using you
blue days come and go with all the rain in between
so i lean on a hot beat and make it my queen
bend it over slowly make it pop in some spots
just another day of rain but this hell is still hot
Re: The Shelter (Freestyle)
ayo, tired as fuck still straight with a mental barrage
cuz i got the jack move like n auto garage
lifting ya whole body with the words razor sharp
deadening the scene far n beyond yall gonna be gone
after i settle there won't be no trash talk
leave yall limping on the walk, just don't bark
cuz i'm known for treason with-no real reason
my styles aheada its time like stores is outta season
..whatever
Re: The Shelter (Freestyle)
It's the smoke break, fucking dope when I'm dropping the coke weight....
Nope, wait... scratch that..., take a second n back track.
I don't have coke, nor do I have a clue about heroin...
but here I am, ready to re-awake what you fear again...
American? yeah, no - I'm more like the guy that you've known
for rhyming alone.., AND having a mind of his own
You think I follow the trends in the mall with all of my friends?
well, acknowledge the end .. of that sentiment.. I rap, heaven scent..
And never have I once come linear without perplexing who..
ever read the text I do, rest assured I'm the best, .. and you?
A close second to the close second best lyricist...
You hear a dis, and fear that it's on a tier to be near ya shit..
Which is cool, a fine portion of a line isn't rhyme forcing
Unless, you spend ya time coursing a catalog I forced in.
My foreskin, is like an elephants - I'm portioned
By whores when, diligent... really shit, ever scribbled since..
The dawn of time, a lyric; something beyond a line
On my mind, daily.. no way you can out rail me.
This is the track that I built my fucking metal to...
And I will sever who,-ever you get to settle my mental mood.
I'm never smooth, always rough when it comes to a fight..
And after the day is done I'm the one with the mic
so mumble and type, it won't do shit to me once I've ripped a key.
instantly, the instant the pencil enters a simple spree
Re: The Shelter (Freestyle)
simple spree to rip mc's lighting up that christmas tree
leaves are ground and sizzle free scent aint of a mystery
its misery is absent mind the fact it gets you blasted
brain is smashed and youre lackin half the skill and the passion
it takes to be rappin as great as the mid-late 90's fashion
slashin opponents got their throat holed never closin
all chosen are sent roaming and posin as vets
set to take an ass whoopin or a hole in the chest
if me, opposin they step i'll wreck crews spittin jet fuel
sent to ignite the flame that will leave ya'll with less tools
Re: The Shelter (Freestyle)
ladies sexin me and left to see that the best is me,
the AT&T I- phone blowin up receivin texts in threes,
used to be in Tennessee paid my dues Heftily,
worn & torn been in so many battles I need a referee,
she wearin no panties she said you better see,
sexy you better be, she start with curves like the letter C,
sharp like scissors, got heart but cold as blizzards,
shake the club up like fissures, on the streets like big birds,
fools tryin to rap with big words, but only sounding absurd,
cause we dont see you fakes like our vision is blurred, ya heard?
Re: The Shelter (Freestyle)
i pop my pimple and everybody gets runnin
the know my flow is tiptoe drummin
they cant do shit that i text or say
even if they had ..dwayne carter on there side
if they tried to compete me , they would know to go hide
cause i..steal the bride
while he trys to beat me i get pushed higher
while he pays for the fee he gets pushed lower
so when it concludes he gets chopped like a mower
Re: The Shelter (Freestyle)
stop it, it's over, I'm not really sober
my colostomy folder got me going back and forth like a Travelocity owner!
That was for the sake of the rhyme
There's no mistaking it, I'm wasting my time
placing the most basic of lines in spaces of mine...
I see the motor bike, now you know that I'm going right..
For that sig you've created... nothing big, I don't think ya related
to Royalty, it's cool - keep rocking the text.
Just thought I'd confess, n get that burden off of my chest
You know? speaking my mind ... the deacon of time,
The one Roman people define - as being equal to shine.
Glow - cascades the fortresses of my map to light.
So Raps ignite from my fucking pencil and trap the night.
But that's alright, I ain't never kicking that fake shit.
I shape shift the industry n give the music a face lift.
- Like Joan Rivers, she's so fucking old that bones give her..
Life insurance rates n then fax the sheets to her own liver!
Winter's back yo it's like minus 6 degrees...
Hell, I see Christmas Trees out the back as I'm kicking keys
Sick emcee's, never grip n squeeze on a clip wit' ease
but Rip to frees compatible with a rhythm that hits the beat.
That's the cipher way, in "The Shelter" I'm Michael J.
Back to the future, the fucking type you don't like to play.
Re: The Shelter (Freestyle)
he doesn't like to play but comes with a wide array
of vocals that ride away leavin impressions inside of brains
i mighta strayed from a point or snapped a limb or some joints
annointed with the glaze of fruitful youth i rejoice
a choice of immortality infallibly great
angelic choral sound might as well bow at my face
the pace i makes sicker in infinite retrospects
so change your connects........
...... which who rap wack and in turn you sess.