Good oneQuote:
Originally Posted by Fresh
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Good oneQuote:
Originally Posted by Fresh
u sure you don't read the satinic bible?Quote:
Originally Posted by Lenox
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Lol
lemme tell yall something...fat chicks get it innnnnnn
theres no reason why niggas should not be smashing fat chicks. specially yall nerds who dont get pussy. fat chicks are easy practice tbh.
bitch just told me and my cuz."what i need friends for? i can take yall both" lmaoooo
Amen is such a fucking cunt.., his voting style..
Nope
Terrible
Nope
Nope
No
Nope
Terrible
Like wtf gtfo you faggot piece of shit
Lenox, lol. Please stop bro. Make me drive up to your neck of the woods and give you a knuckle sandwich, bro.
I'm by far the best voter on this site, you retard. Ask anyone.Quote:
Originally Posted by Lenox
Ya okay lmao... Highly doubtful..Quote:
Originally Posted by Amen
lol
Lenox he also gave you good advice after he broke down each bar. Stop crying like a baby and take the advice.
I'm going to get off for a lil while,. I'm having a RB meltdown atm lolQuote:
Originally Posted by Fresh
Dead lol but trueQuote:
Originally Posted by Greedy$
Your retarded, if you think NOT. You can dislike me all you want but I am by far ONE if not the best voter on RB. I vote unbias'd and try and feed each bar accordingly as to how I would have much rather'd read it, etc... Take it in and improve or just cry like a faggot. Either way, I don't care.
OVERALL: From the 2 or 3 battles I've read from you, you have improved, son. Keep writing. Try and stay away from simile's unless it's dope. Sometimes Simile's can take away from the impact or effectiveness of the concept. Your wording wasn't too bad. Everything was delivered nicely but your punches were ass juice that could probably assist in the outbreak of ebola.
Sorry
Some people were feeling my Kentucky derby line.. Some weren't
@Amen gunna get beat up by a 15 year old lmao.
Word. Amen going to give that little nigga a knuckle sandwich.
Waddupp
True statement, but ain't my thing. There's regular bitches do the same shit, spit that dot head game. Talk to them bout sand & stars, just don't tell them your history with sheep and goat.Quote:
Originally Posted by Greedy$
The Kentucky derby line was basic honestly. Standards must be really low now if that's a quotable, which can't be the case because I barely got quotables in my last couple of verses lol. Moral of the story is, I suck now and need to retire from text.
Lol
So I guess I didn't have a good verse
Duh...Quote:
Originally Posted by Lenox
Lol god damn itQuote:
Originally Posted by TayTay.
You'll be quoted when I'm talking to youQuote:
Originally Posted by Amen
you're just getting lazy.Quote:
Originally Posted by Letterman
I wouldn't know. Never check my Noti's, bruh.
@Lenox you usually have a couple similie in your verses, try to get away from that because the majority of them miss anyway.
damn that quote does not go good w/ that pic lolQuote:
Originally Posted by TayTay.
What else should I use? All I know I how to use is similes (sometimes) any suggestions?
Thanks btwQuote:
Originally Posted by Letterman
Yeah, I gotta shake that.Quote:
Originally Posted by Fresh
what happened to the letterman that dropped that receding line that everyone talked about for a weekQuote:
Originally Posted by Letterman
actually, you wanna do apic battle?Quote:
Originally Posted by Letterman
Dopest bar of my career lmao
Noti's haQuote:
Originally Posted by Amen
Noti's haQuote:
Originally Posted by Amen
Lol you just beat me in a battle. I've literally lost like 4 of my last 5 battles.Quote:
Originally Posted by Fresh
@Lenox we've got a challenger for yaQuote:
Originally Posted by Letterman
That receding shit was a played chat room comment that he used for a punch, lol.
Lol Lenox might actually beat me right now.