Abso-fucking-lutely not.
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Abso-fucking-lutely not.
MV you have mod power for 1-2
ill put on my in charge hoochie daddy shortsQuote:
Originally Posted by Kill Spree
my battle is ready for votes
Forgot I even stepped in for a battle
ya'll can at least give me a reach around
Should compute a bullet into your head
"anx = ain't ain't been giving her the cold shoulder"(not ignoring her b/c she gives good head)... and i dont think yall are stupid, just wanted to make sure i got my point across, is all(with the bold)Quote:
his girl’s a slut, I compute, it doesn't take much to Fold her
But b/c she down-load Phal-anx been giving her the cold shoulder
dont think i'm hate voting in the future
pc. mal
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Originally Posted by mal diction
Fuckin idiot what? Axe and anx?
read the punch line..
i refuse to believe ya'll are that slow
They just hating because your the Tom Brady of this league. Do you, pimp.Quote:
Originally Posted by mal diction
TBH it looks better here without the bold. I feel as tho if i look at a bar my eyes should naturally follow along and anything that should stand will out also follow that rule. if you are pointing it out imo its like explaining a joke, it takes away from the surprise and effectiveness of the reader "realizing" what the punchline is. i still think anx=aint is a bit of a reach. its doable but it would have to be read aloud and purposefully mispronounced. but this is my personal opinion and art is subjective.Quote:
Originally Posted by mal diction
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Originally Posted by mal diction
Ya I’ll go read it after I’m doing splitting wood with an anx. Promise
Advanced warning on future hate votes.Quote:
Originally Posted by mal diction
we need a few more votes on battles. ill be wrapping them up early afternoon.
naa.. i'm goodQuote:
Originally Posted by Amen
Undeserved
Garbage
Congrats on not really winning
Circus du soleil
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congrats @RoboCop .. good shit
10 week ban for swaying after the battleQuote:
Originally Posted by Mac.
@Resin M-I-C
check your punch for typos... dont want u to short your self
AGHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH
Just drop some votes on whatever battles ya can ya act like there telling ya to suck dick or take a bullet to the head
I don’t get some of ya weirdos.
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Originally Posted by Blue Bayou
Need a hug, bro? <3
Can you guys drop a few more votes? EXPLAINED Votes at that
i'll explain my punch:
We're not at the beach, Nor call it hockey or magic
But you can call it kill spree With my bunny n the hat trick
beach bunny.. hockey/hat trick.. bunny/rabbit.. magic/bunny n the hat.. Kill spree/3 kills/hat trick ..
bunny is synonymous with chatter or talk( British slang) ... and bunny is also slang for misfortune in Australia... ppl use slang for gun fire with singing ... i let the chopper sing/or scream ...so bunny in the hat... bullets to your brain
https://www.collinsdictionary.com/us.../english/bunny
I swear, how much wordplay do i need to cram in two lines to get a vote
For me, the problem was too much going on in one bar. I feel like you would have been better off focusing on one reference and driving it home, versus trying to tie multiple things together & losing sting like you did. Just my perspective though. But keep doing you, pimp.Quote:
Originally Posted by mal diction
Your punch sucked. Get over itQuote:
Originally Posted by mal diction
That's kind of like a couple of mini-schemes accompanying the main wordplay which uses terms not everyone is familiar with, you've obviously put a lot of thought into it though so credit where it's due. It's like adding toppings to pizza - too much confuses the flavour. You can also get so caught up on wordplay that what you are actually saying with the bar suffers. If you're not disappointed with the flaws everything you write you're not being critical enough.
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*flaws in everything you write
Prime example, what a cunt
Please keep the idle chitchat out of the battles and in this thread where they belong. Thank you gents!
well you can also refer to my punch from the previous week:
you’re girl’s a slut, I compute, it doesn't take much to Folder
But b/c she down-load Phal-anx been giving her the cold shoulder
say anx aloud .. it sounds close to aint
i dont see why i have to suffer b/c i'm going over heads ... i thought yall were hate voting or d-riding my opponents ... like i said, i google ppl's wordplay, just to be fare .. so yall shouldnt be lazy.. look the words up
Stfu. tag Me next time cock sucker.Quote:
Originally Posted by MV
You really are retardedQuote:
Originally Posted by mal diction
THIS BAR FUCKIJG SUCKSSSQuote:
Originally Posted by mal diction
Male dick is so complex he confuses himself.
That’s a true texter, if you ask me.
Of course you respond with male dick on the mind
I will be keeping the battle threads clean and enforcing rules on swaying/cluttering the thread with nonsense.
Knox i didnt tag you because you arent the only one who did it and i dont want to give you a reason to throw a fit and quit. you got a warning now be a good boy!
Only your little guy is on my mind <3Quote:
Originally Posted by Blue Bayou
You're a gem. I don't care what they say about youQuote:
Originally Posted by Amen
Tsk Tsk KnoxQuote:
Originally Posted by MV
KYS!Quote:
Originally Posted by MV
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Mannn LmaoQuote:
Originally Posted by Blue Bayou
Y’all want a pic roast cypher this week?