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well that shows how small minded u are judging people by their post count
you have no advice for me kid.. your really not all that.. you dont like it fair enuff..w/e..cant please ery1 and dont even try to please no one but me in fact
you had no sensible critisismm.. you just just shout the same shit at most verse u read.. n u aint all that
really good i liked the whole thing i cant even explain it its crazy maaan u got it for sure u talented
haha w/e man.I just asked you do ya want me to break it down for you but you too thick to understand that.Bro believe me I would kill you in a battle.You think ya can beat me then plz step up
if you was gonna break anything down or if u had the capability to do so.. you would have done already.. go fuck yourself.. like i said u dont like it w'e.. everybody else that ever read it on any site loves it..
i dont like your shit either.. prolly never will
i dont like 50 cent.. i dont like game... i dont like nelly.. so the fuck what tho.. i just dont listen to their shit then do i
now stop freeposting in my thread.. and let the rest of the board enjoy my dopetastical writin
^^^now he is ducking me.The bitch thinks he dope well m8 ya nuthen but a pussy and wtf sayen you dont listen to 50 nd shit man u a lil bitch so ima leave it here
and this bitch says I give shit feed
meh i diddnt like this at all..topic was blah, vocab was basic as kindergarten..flow=chop chop
meh
thats what he posted on a OM
HERB!!!
yeah right.. and that reply was in response to your reply dumbo.. i guess you forgot about that already tho since your so thick.. and wont let up on this freeposting thing will ytou
i guess since u rate members with high posts so much your out to get yours up so u can claim u a vet
good luck neways with your bullshit
ill ignore you completely from now on.. and ignore all your battles and om;s yeah..
hope your satisfied now.. more enemies the merrier i guess
this piece was good.......
.....i love the topic, when i was scrolling down OM, this caught my eye, most definitly. i like how you stukc to the topic, it also show some nice imagry" i could vision it while i was reading it. the flow was str8, but not the best, but the structure, was clear to read, with an amazing concept.the vocab was flawless as well.....it was an intresting piece, nicely wrote.....9.2/10
word^.......peep my pieces down in the sig....
safe 4 da look out G notes
cough.........
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Dude, this has had enough feedback already. Over 50 replies is enough for anybody.
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