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it was good... you had good structure n good vocab. i expected a much more serious topic than a guy in school..(from what your title said) it was good, but it wasnt amazing. good peice tho. keep elevatin.
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It isnt about a guy in school, its about a guys life span, and how he was released to poverty at an early age, and how once you get into poverty, it keeps spreading.
W.e though..
This is my last up.
Wtf I've Seen This B4, on another Site. Im Gonna Find The Link. Will Edit In Later
O_O.................
I posted it on rapwords.com, dont believe me I can prove it. I made this up, I made a name on rapwords.com which is jonathon, and it says its just work I did from here.Quote:
Originally Posted by ~Skribble~
Gosh, this is old. Why did you bring it back?
http://www.rapworlds.com/forums/showthread.php?t=61832
see. If it lets me post that thingy, there it is.
If its any where else, they bit off of me, because it took me 1 hour to write that, and it hurt my brain, so poo on all you haters.
Especailly that one that likes to free post and call me a biter.
Hey, dude. For me.. anything over 50 posts has had more than enough feedback so I'm gonna close this. Props, man. Good writing.
-Brix