ill hit you backa fter work
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ill hit you backa fter work
i l0ve y0ur v0ice and it g0es erfefctly with the beat and y0ur fl0w is 0n p0int.
i wanna find a g0od heaven but it hurts like hell - h0t verse
perfectly* w0w lolQuote:
Originally Posted by Sh0rTy_s0_Pr0Pa
I heard this before. I don't know why I didn't reply. I love the chorus though. Energy is dope. This is nice shit.
this beat is seeeeeeeeeeeeeeexxxxxxxyyyyyyyy. you came on this shit really dope. chorus is on some deep shit. nice track man.
*dl's it*
like the hook.... the beats tite.....flows on point throughout no flaws.....
overall this a nice piece.......
ma 2 pennys.........
so is it wrong that i praise...those i see? or a god that i meet when i go to sleep
^dope.
walk to heaven back again, not the devils advocate
WHOA. Lyrics are so dope so far.
oh ok, so that "is it wrong that i praisE" was the chorus...didnt realize that til second time around. It was very emotiona, liked it a lot. When u said only work for a man whos hands are black..i was like, that was kinda out of nowhere? Then u paused and brought upthe blood,sweat, part. Tight.
Presence, delivery, emotion and all that good stuff, were all on point, not much to complain about. Peace.
the hook is butta, i like this trak, ur not bad at all, i likes...
You can rap - that's for sure. Honestly - ur music isn't for me - but I can understand why people like it. So basically, your good, just not my preferred choice. Keep grindin fam.
shits hot man...your delivery and flow are real nice, mic presence is nice, lyrics are sick....overall shit was real nice. Ill be lookin for more from you
~J High~
listenin ..... beats tight work .....youre voice is easy to listen to ..... flow was on point not really much to critique pretty dope song I was feelin it jus didnt like the hook alot get at me Pz
-Kamikaze
wussup man.. well yeah jst heard it (no duh) lol.. dont really listen to ppl's music but glad i did this time.. this song was all on point.. delivery, lyrics, and flow.. the quality should be alittle upped.. or maybes its my speakers lol... well i guess all i can say for first impression for me is that make more songs! MORE MORE MORE!! LOL
yeah....
first of all the beat is fuckin' huge
i liked ya voice a lot
ill song man
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listening....
beat is nice...no offense...but u kinda remind me of a large percentage of white net rappers....kinda like a dzk voice/flow......its not a bad thing...
lyrically this is nice....im really feelin it....hook is pretty nice...
overall this is a nice song man...keep it up
dopest track i've heard from you yet..
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