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scattered showers bring summer flowers so i dont mind it raining from time to time

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Originally Posted by Jeffry

no kidding arch smfh

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like this...

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Nikki minaj jizzed on her haters, while she went down on my dick
i'm pissin on your golden arch, like r. kelly did on that 13-year old white chick

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would've hit harder w/ a SET UP THAT WENT WITH THE PUNCH and crisper wording

You're honestly terrible.Someone said you're good? Well that kid's wrong
If anyone says you're golden Arch... it's cuz your verses are something we'd piss on

you HAVE to make set ups and punches work... that's your biggest problem... you're just making rhymes... the punch shouldn't be separate from the line before it... think of it as a complete sentence... they should be the same idea... once you get that down, you'll do better...

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Originally Posted by Phan Man

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dont get me wrong, excessive rain increases the chances of a turbulent rise in floodwater, but i do enjoy the advent of rain amidst seemingly unbearable warm temperatures

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Originally Posted by The Archetype

like this...


would've hit harder w/ a SET UP THAT WENT WITH THE PUNCH and crisper wording

You're honestly terrible.Someone said you're good? Well that kid's wrong
If anyone says you're golden Arch... it's cuz your verses are something we'd piss on

you HAVE to make set ups and punches work... that's your biggest problem... you're just making rhymes... the punch shouldn't be separate from the line before it... think of it as a complete sentence... they should be the same idea... once you get that down, you'll do better...

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shit, i think i get it now. i dont connect the lines to setup the punch. alright i got you mr. arch.

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Originally Posted by The Archetype

like this...


would've hit harder w/ a SET UP THAT WENT WITH THE PUNCH and crisper wording

You're honestly terrible.Someone said you're good? Well that kid's wrong
If anyone says you're golden Arch... it's cuz your verses are something we'd piss on

you HAVE to make set ups and punches work... that's your biggest problem... you're just making rhymes... the punch shouldn't be separate from the line before it... think of it as a complete sentence... they should be the same idea... once you get that down, you'll do better...

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thats some really solid advice! i dont know ab the other guy but me personally i think i will implement this format into my writing! thanks!

this thunder is becoming quite tumultuous

shut the fuck up..

http://3.bp.blogspot.com/_HP3HpMu8oO...600/Stupid.jpg

im not going to name anybody specifically due to the fact i have no personal grievance with anyone here in particupar so just allow me to say with great conviction and steadfast reserve that Phan Man is a fucking poofter

*meant to say particular, sorry..often times my excitedness gets the better of me and subsequently effects my typing accuracy, not that i dont have a great wpm

http://photos.travellerspoint.com/38286/aussign.jpg

*didnt mean to put "a wpm" meant to say "wpm" without the prolixity of the letter "a"

And i would like to formally apologize for calling Phan Man a "fucking poofter"

for those that are unaware, the term "poofter" means "faggot" and i dont know if Phan Man is a "faggot" or not so i should have never of made that statement

lol... Say... you have 54 posts... you can sign up for 1-2 now...