and the lord sayith: Go Out and Distroy(GOD) (completed 12 track ep)

"throw ya hands up and wave" ^ haha what up kid.....

woah hey lame beat and you sound WAYYYYYYYYYYY Too much like your reading....fix that quick cuz your way off of the beat and it sounds like a fumbling kid who thinks hes good.....the hook sucks....you need to A) produce better, B) rap better, C) repeat steps A and B until you dont down annoying.....

you can rtf on my song but i dont think you could tell me much - http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=328205

w/e i dont no what song u listened too...u come off like a cocky dick but i'll return the feedback

Returning The Favor

I listened to track 6 (Spoken Word)

track beat wuz wierd......... flow was decent...... delivery was shaky, i felt the emotion and lyrics,,,, but i didnt get a good rythm vibe from the song -- but thats a track i listened to and it could use some work but its koo 6/10

Try to find better beats, and write your lyrics to the beat to where it the rythm is perfect and it won't sound like ya slurrin ya words

thanks for all the feed the recording of the second album is on hold till the 'studio' is back up....uppen on more feedback though

Aight man, i listened to Welcome to God and Spoken Word, and you need some more emotion and feeling behind your words..and try not to shove mad words into your bars, it sounds to rushed..good shit on all the songs tho, just keep elevatin

thanks for the responces....everything will be taken into consideration when we record the next albome..uppen

is g0d dead??????

i think we've concluded that she most surtainly is....

I don't know about all the God talk. I'm actually fairly religious. I couldn't quite catch the connotation of some of the lyrics...as in whether you're sayin it's bad for people to be religious or good...

Rhymin wise,

I would slow down a bit. Grab famous beats and practice flowing over them. This will give you a chance to compare yourself with a professional already makin money in the game, ya know?

Also, hip hop is supposed to have a vibrant rhythm, something to bob ya head too, feel good about, ya know. So, I would work on more catchier styles, especially if you want to come across with lyrics.

Good beat, good voice = heard lyrics...

And I think that's what you want right?

I would definitely keep doing ya thang, practice, and keep droppin mayne.

pz

um...the CD is about theology i dont get what u mean...like 1 or 2 songs were kinda abstract or non constuctive but for the most part i thought it to be self explanitory...uppen

everybodies sayin your shit. So your shit.

stop comin' at everybody like you have no clue what they're talking about. Any REAL emcee would take the critisism and work to perfect the area where people say you're weak in.

Kon