yea alot of love yet not noticed but its koo!...
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yea alot of love yet not noticed but its koo!...
Nice piece, filled with quality...I enjoyed it thoroughly. and btw I just came back to read it again, and leave a bit more feed. =/
That and I fucked up and accidentally posted a link.
Keep dropping Omega. :2thumb:
how do you accidently leave a link?
Images play, in fascination of existence
Words appear in great depth of definition that’s persistent.
Troubled times recorded, struggled times explained
Future starts to unfold, with a figure four of tenacious pain.
Tears fall slow, like the ink from my pen
World of destruction tour begins in the count from 1 to 10.
^best lines in ur verse...
But artists persevere and create visual prophesies
Inspiration to create inspiration, crush literal mockeries
Beads of sweat dripped from his forehead, the brush stung with splinters
The man, bent on his task, through half a dozen winters
^ best in urs
this life has no hustles, living healthy is the ultimate drug
its never ending, no off buttons, batteries, or plugs
every angle of this world is pronounced love, and dedication
reaching for the stars on every try of each attempt, without hesitation
^best in urs
well i like how yall brought three diffrent veiw points to the table...all were deep and had very strong visuls...but all came hard...good vocab..liked the story line...all verses hade there own great peices to them...no one person came garbage...this was a very good read...allmost a perfect peice...:)
RTF on disbanded angels...
woot man now im off to leave feed
Aside from the D/R comments . I was feelin Omegas verse straight up . I didnt get into the other two as much . They had rhyme scheme . As for meaning and imagery , it didnt connect with me .
Yo
lmfao DR comments whoa iight i guess......
wow i hope i wasent a dr comment lol...check my om in sig erbody...another ones comin to whats love feat dj. waitin for it to get posted
really nice....flow was on point thru out this whole drop....i was feelin the emotion in this the most...you all made your verses come together really well..and yet the flow was on poiint...the mutlies were dope....this was a deep drop keep up.leave feed on the freepost u jus did omega
one thing I disliked was your structure, wrecked the read for me cunt :cussing;
apart from that i felt you really stepped your shit up on this one. Vocab came through nice, original concept was used good. I liked this.
thank you!.....lmfao...woot!
hey omega....armageddon....peep it....
well people thanks for all the feed...appreciate it!