Strange Fruit: A Portrait of a Holiday

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Originally Posted by Lord of Pens

I have to say first of all that this piece seriously touched me.

The song made the piece even that much deeper. The sound of her voice brought your words to life. The piece had a voice to it. A soothing yet strong one at the same time. The flow of it was perfect in my eyes.



That right there itself made me want to read into the piece. Your multi's and rhyme scheme, with the smoothness of your word choice just left me in utter awe. Not forced at all. Then when you started to talk about her life, just made it beautiful.



This depicted many vivid pictures in my mind. Gave me a certain type of feeling as I was reading it. And again, while I heard her voice actually made me feel it. Definitely deep. I don't know what to say to you. The imagery was at a different level here. The piece was just brought to life. Your emotion flowed through the whole thing. Originality was definitely a given because in my time I've never seen anything like this done before. Multi's were good and you flowed very well. Never stopped or got choppy through the whole piece. The piece just had a deeper meaning to it then just words on a page. It actually inspired me.

Amazing Bounce. That's the only word I can give it. Definitely HoF material. Your opinion would be greatly appreciated on any of my pieces. I definitely want to see more for you. I really enjoyed the read.

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=302754
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=302801
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=302898

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Sorry for the inconvenience of me posting again. It's just that the first time my comp. messed up and the post didn't register. I apologize Bounce.

hmmmm This was a nice topic great concept but anywho that pic kinda set ouff this topic to be great and I loved the dope display fo imagery you had as well as concepts throughtout the main it'self you also really had some creative lines throughout the whole piece nothing here really forced at all but all though complexity really showed this piece was flexible to many points and even knowing thw words in bold were your shortest stanza's I believe that they were the most powerful of the peice this piece was overall dope and another nice drop by you bounce keep at it man I have my respect for you...

plz hit this link up....

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=303086

thanks

Bounce u did it again man. u had another dope ass piece. that hook at the end wrapped it up perfectly when i saw that i was OMFG Bounce did dat shit again. man imagery was excellent. wordplay was excellent. metaphors was excellent. diction was excellent. man everything about this piece was excellent. man. when i first read that hook at the beginning i was think ohhh no bounce aint as good as he used to be but then i read it i was damn dis dude is probably better now than he ever was. all i can say is dope man. i nominated this for the Hall Of Fame. its most definitely worthy of it Bounce great job

thanks for all the looks guys, peep paper noose if you liked this...

.....speechless.................

i haven't been around much, so i dunno - maybe this is just how you write now...

I mean you've always been good, but this was a whole nother level - dope shit, made me feel padawan

nice way wit da wordz